Jiya's Poems St 3-SUNEHARI TAKDIR -1 PG:22 - Page 10

JP22

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: visrom
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W vis kya emotions hein.bhav twinky sunny thanks for liking yar.

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JP22

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Posted: 12 years ago

thanks bhav,bhavanaki to nikal padi.

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neeme

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Posted: 12 years ago

[QUOTE=jiya.][Jabhi nikalati hein apane hateliyon pe mehandi

Abhi ka naam likhakar ho jaati hein aanandi.

Jaise ki enaki hi shadi heone woli hein esase😆

Gehera rang aane pe kehati hein dekha abhi kitana pyar karate hein mujhase.

Nice Poem Jiya G..U r too Good ...👏

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neeme

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Posted: 12 years ago

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neeme

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Posted: 12 years ago

what a wonderfull poem..this time i found itt funny also...i really like ur style of writing Poems...😊

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JP22

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Posted: 12 years ago

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JP22

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Posted: 12 years ago

thanks you friends for liking my poem.

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gadhadada

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Posted: 12 years ago

JIYA DII... UR BOTH POEMS are EXCILLENT...
CLASSICAL n ZABARDAST...

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SAGNIKA

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Posted: 12 years ago

Aww.. that was cute !! A cute perception of the "kalakars" ! 😳

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Amna

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Posted: 12 years ago

KALAKAR... is an XILENT ATTENMPT...👏

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