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OS- Angry Shan, Innocent khanak (Page 3)

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 1:51pm | IP Logged
wow... totally captured the essense of the husband-wife relationship...
Khanak the true woman of substance, not just the touch of her husband melts down...
Shaan the possesive husband, the impulsive outburst and then the repentence... very well captured...
And the dialogues... yaar where do you people get time to think of such powerful yet subtle dialogues...
And end mein... OMG kya garmi thee...

Nice work, hope to read more from you!

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 11:29pm | IP Logged
OMG I love the OS....it is too cute....

so u want to take revenge on Rahul through our Sunny...

I hope our SS get together....

is there another part to it? I love it!

sorry for being late...i almost forgot....
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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 11:36pm | IP Logged
oye shilpa.. i shud get some credit for tormenting u to change the title.. otherwise nobody wud have read this amazing work of yours

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 1:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by priya_cool_123

oye shilpa.. i shud get some credit for tormenting u to change the title.. otherwise nobody wud have read this amazing work of yours

of course honey, sari credit to tera hi hai........thanks for ur suggestion

@rooj, thanks, but i myself have no idea iska next part kya likhu, abhi my mind is busy wid some other things rather than rbo, agar fursat mile to phir sochungi............abt taking revenge on rahul through sunny, i think woh to sirf plan kar raha hai, implement to shanak and sam ko karna hai


Edited by sweetsute - 27 January 2011 at 1:02am
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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 3:51am | IP Logged
AWWWW !!!! SO SWEET !!!!
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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 4:08am | IP Logged
lovelyy !!!!!!!! omg soo beautifully written priya !!

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