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OS- Angry Shan, Innocent khanak (Page 2)

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 6:20am | IP Logged
shriya di, priya, ankita,all everyone, thank u sooooooooooo much- even i wish ki aisa hi ho

bones88 IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 14 August 2005
Posts: 27369

Posted: 24 January 2011 at 6:28am | IP Logged
OMGGGGG I just loveee ur take... seriously I want something like this too happen....brilliantly writtenClapClapClapClapClapClapClap

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sampar Senior Member

Joined: 04 August 2005
Posts: 426

Posted: 24 January 2011 at 2:43pm | IP Logged
ClapClapClap...superb....it was beautifully written .....well done .....soo want to see something like this in the show.......superb Clap
adventure_gurl IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 05 October 2005
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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 9:55pm | IP Logged
awesome  job!
NinjaInPyjamas IF-Rockerz

Joined: 22 September 2010
Posts: 8009

Posted: 24 January 2011 at 10:02pm | IP Logged
Wow yaar!! Srsly wow!! Very life-like....I am extremely impressed!!

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iluvmanar IF-Dazzler

Joined: 09 October 2010
Posts: 3052

Posted: 25 January 2011 at 12:01am | IP Logged
OMG shilpa..tu to chupe rustam nikli...maine yeh kaise miss kardi...pls aglibaar se OS likhkar ek PM mujhe jaroor bhej dena......luv u and luvved it.....

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IluvYashran Groupbie

Joined: 25 November 2010
Posts: 98

Posted: 25 January 2011 at 3:48am | IP Logged
gr8 wrk dearClap..........want to see sumthin lyk diz in d showDay Dreaming
rafia 24 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 1:30pm | IP Logged
wow kya baat hai shilpa lol, another amazing writer has entered the ranks- we are soooo spoilt on this forum. I loved it from start to finish it had me gripped. the beginning with shaan in a full on romantic mood and reaction to the mms was so realistic and natural. Both of their anger is just in natural. never liked sam soo much, glad she cleared up the galat femiBig smile.
khanak's speech was sooo strong, powerful and emotional. its soo true, its always easy to make a mistake and then say sorry to it, but harder to try to control ones feelings at the time and think things through before saying something you might regret. the following lines were very powerful and impactfulClapClap
Lekin, aapke sath ne mujhe zindagi ke nayi matlab sikhaya. par, yeh sab dekhne ke baad, aisa lagta hai, ki kash main us waqt hi mar jati aur aaj aap Natasha ji ke sath shadi karte, kumse kum khush to rehte
loved it!!!!!!!
hahaa whenever khanaks upset shaans answer for that is to want to kiss her and more....
omg another one of those writers lmao,  so blunt phir shuru ho jata hainROFL and ras leela/ dono ka dingdong ROFLROFLROFLROFL kaha se laate ho yeh shabd ROFL
and in all these ff's and show our khanaks becoming bold ROFLROFL
Khanak(in Shan 's arms)-"Shantanu, agar Suraj ke naam lene pe aap mujhe aisi saza doge, to main hamesha uska naam loongi"
Shan looks at her, she was smiling after a long time, kisses her on d forehead-" Tumhare , is smile ke liye kuch bhi meri jaan, I love u..........
loved the last sentence made me smile, yaar for your first OS youve written amazingly well, im a new fan. honestly. cant wait to read more of your material.- aur besharmi bhi chalega- ding adong ROFLROFLjoking whatever your comfortable at writing.ClapClapClapStarStarStarStar

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