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ff:new beginings - updated chap14 on pg 28 (Page 8)

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 3:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by saphira7988

i know..even i wanted tht concept of unity btwn d clan members in d show too..but chandeena r hopeless yaar...they're always fighting with abhay n butting in his life.....they dont care a damn abt abhay.....in ur ff chand n haseena r so like d cullens..genuinely concerned for abhay's wellbeing.....Big smile  n strangely i dont at all mind d numerous charecters here..d more d merrierSmile on a serious note each n every charecter is surely crucial to d build up n progress of d story..Approve i tho love it.. Big smile  n i forget to mention tht its gr8 tht pia is accepted as a part of d dobrial family... i like ur efforts of juggling so many charecters n still maintaining d flow n quality of d storyThumbs Up

thankyou so much. i always wanted a clan to stand together not like chandeena always trying their best to hurt abhay and in the show if abhay had bros and sisters it would have been fun because i like bella-emmett bella-alice relationship very much

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 3:53am | IP Logged
hey tis one is gud yr waiting 4 next update
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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 3:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nammmu

hey tis one is gud yr waiting 4 next update
thanx
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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 3:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by koyal-kajal

Originally posted by saphira7988

i know..even i wanted tht concept of unity btwn d clan members in d show too..but chandeena r hopeless yaar...they're always fighting with abhay n butting in his life.....they dont care a damn abt abhay.....in ur ff chand n haseena r so like d cullens..genuinely concerned for abhay's wellbeing.....Big smile  n strangely i dont at all mind d numerous charecters here..d more d merrierSmile on a serious note each n every charecter is surely crucial to d build up n progress of d story..Approve i tho love it.. Big smile  n i forget to mention tht its gr8 tht pia is accepted as a part of d dobrial family... i like ur efforts of juggling so many charecters n still maintaining d flow n quality of d storyThumbs Up

thankyou so much. i always wanted a clan to stand together not like chandeena always trying their best to hurt abhay and in the show if abhay had bros and sisters it would have been fun because i like bella-emmett bella-alice relationship very much
i like that too but here abhay has a evil bro i wanted a good bro like emmett
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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 3:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by koyal-kajal

Originally posted by saphira7988

i know..even i wanted tht concept of unity btwn d clan members in d show too..but chandeena r hopeless yaar...they're always fighting with abhay n butting in his life.....they dont care a damn abt abhay.....in ur ff chand n haseena r so like d cullens..genuinely concerned for abhay's wellbeing.....Big smile  n strangely i dont at all mind d numerous charecters here..d more d merrierSmile on a serious note each n every charecter is surely crucial to d build up n progress of d story..Approve i tho love it.. Big smile  n i forget to mention tht its gr8 tht pia is accepted as a part of d dobrial family... i like ur efforts of juggling so many charecters n still maintaining d flow n quality of d storyThumbs Up

thankyou so much. i always wanted a clan to stand together not like chandeena always trying their best to hurt abhay and in the show if abhay had bros and sisters it would have been fun because i like bella-emmett bella-alice relationship very much
i swear...it wud have been gr8 to watch..Smile atlst abhay wud have had d support of his siblings if not his stupid parents...Angry they n their clan can go to hell for all we care..  i know vamps r supposed to have no feelings but Chandeena r gettin on my nerves..although i also agree with their pov tht abhay's emotional weakness can endanger d clan...but they'r a lil too harsh on him..anyway love ur ff... waiting for d next partBig smile
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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 4:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mythrimyna

Originally posted by koyal-kajal

Originally posted by saphira7988

i know..even i wanted tht concept of unity btwn d clan members in d show too..but chandeena r hopeless yaar...they're always fighting with abhay n butting in his life.....they dont care a damn abt abhay.....in ur ff chand n haseena r so like d cullens..genuinely concerned for abhay's wellbeing.....Big smile  n strangely i dont at all mind d numerous charecters here..d more d merrierSmile on a serious note each n every charecter is surely crucial to d build up n progress of d story..Approve i tho love it.. Big smile  n i forget to mention tht its gr8 tht pia is accepted as a part of d dobrial family... i like ur efforts of juggling so many charecters n still maintaining d flow n quality of d storyThumbs Up

thankyou so much. i always wanted a clan to stand together not like chandeena always trying their best to hurt abhay and in the show if abhay had bros and sisters it would have been fun because i like bella-emmett bella-alice relationship very much
i like that too but here abhay has a evil bro i wanted a good bro like emmett
atlst he has other siblings to turn to for support....i like d equation here between d siblings..they're all concerned for abhay..tht so sweetSmile
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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 4:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by saphira7988

Originally posted by koyal-kajal

Originally posted by saphira7988

i know..even i wanted tht concept of unity btwn d clan members in d show too..but chandeena r hopeless yaar...they're always fighting with abhay n butting in his life.....they dont care a damn abt abhay.....in ur ff chand n haseena r so like d cullens..genuinely concerned for abhay's wellbeing.....Big smile  n strangely i dont at all mind d numerous charecters here..d more d merrierSmile on a serious note each n every charecter is surely crucial to d build up n progress of d story..Approve i tho love it.. Big smile  n i forget to mention tht its gr8 tht pia is accepted as a part of d dobrial family... i like ur efforts of juggling so many charecters n still maintaining d flow n quality of d storyThumbs Up

thankyou so much. i always wanted a clan to stand together not like chandeena always trying their best to hurt abhay and in the show if abhay had bros and sisters it would have been fun because i like bella-emmett bella-alice relationship very much
i swear...it wud have been gr8 to watch..Smile atlst abhay wud have had d support of his siblings if not his stupid parents...Angry they n their clan can go to hell for all we care..  i know vamps r supposed to have no feelings but Chandeena r gettin on my nerves..although i also agree with their pov tht abhay's emotional weakness can endanger d clan...but they'r a lil too harsh on him..anyway love ur ff... waiting for d next partBig smile
yes they are harsh

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 4:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by saphira7988

Originally posted by mythrimyna

Originally posted by koyal-kajal

Originally posted by saphira7988

i know..even i wanted tht concept of unity btwn d clan members in d show too..but chandeena r hopeless yaar...they're always fighting with abhay n butting in his life.....they dont care a damn abt abhay.....in ur ff chand n haseena r so like d cullens..genuinely concerned for abhay's wellbeing.....Big smile  n strangely i dont at all mind d numerous charecters here..d more d merrierSmile on a serious note each n every charecter is surely crucial to d build up n progress of d story..Approve i tho love it.. Big smile  n i forget to mention tht its gr8 tht pia is accepted as a part of d dobrial family... i like ur efforts of juggling so many charecters n still maintaining d flow n quality of d storyThumbs Up

thankyou so much. i always wanted a clan to stand together not like chandeena always trying their best to hurt abhay and in the show if abhay had bros and sisters it would have been fun because i like bella-emmett bella-alice relationship very much
i like that too but here abhay has a evil bro i wanted a good bro like emmett
atlst he has other siblings to turn to for support....i like d equation here between d siblings..they're all concerned for abhay..tht so sweetSmile
i know there is a sort of bond between all of them

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