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saphira7988

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 3:14am | IP Logged
loved ur updates..Clap i love how u've shown d raichands' to be d united family in ur ff... Smile loved  d connection n bond btwn d members of their family... n that clan symbol tattoo is such a refreshing idea...it looked uniqueClap so now tension's brewing betwn d vamps n wolves...Ouch  n poor abhay became emotional on seeing pia aaawwwCry  tht flashback scene was nice...Thumbs Up pls update soon n pls pm me wen u do...thanks Big smile


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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 3:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by saphira7988

loved ur updates..Clap i love how u've shown d raichands' to be d united family in ur ff... Smile loved  d connection n bond btwn d members of their family... n that clan symbol tattoo is such a refreshing idea...it looked uniqueClap so now tension's brewing betwn d vamps n wolves...Ouch  n poor abhay became emotional on seeing pia aaawwwCry  tht flashback scene was nice...Thumbs Up pls update soon n pls pm me wen u do...thanks Big smile

i will update even i like a unity between the raichands like the cullens i wish in the show it was the same but it looks like chandeena are locking abhay in the dark i mean there is nothing between them all they just fight for every single reason and then we hear chandeena saying we must do something about this.. in the show

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 3:27am | IP Logged
koyal how do you imagine and write all this yaar really agree with saphira you made bonds between the characters so well first i was like so many characters and now i understand what you meant by ALL OF THEM HAVE AN IMPORTANT ROLE IN THE FUTURE  all are connected and support eachother seriously a huge round of applauseClap

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 3:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mythrimyna

koyal how do you imagine and write all this yaar really agree with saphira you made bonds between the characters so well first i was like so many characters and now i understand what you meant by ALL OF THEM HAVE AN IMPORTANT ROLE IN THE FUTURE  all are connected and support eachother seriously a huge round of applauseClap

thanx so you understood the reason for so many characters goodThumbs Up

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 3:39am | IP Logged
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Originally posted by mythrimyna

koyal how do you imagine and write all this yaar really agree with saphira you made bonds between the characters so well first i was like so many characters and now i understand what you meant by ALL OF THEM HAVE AN IMPORTANT ROLE IN THE FUTURE  all are connected and support eachother seriously a huge round of applauseClap

thanx so you understood the reason for so many characters goodThumbs Up

yes i did and when are you updating the next part

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 3:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mythrimyna

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Originally posted by mythrimyna

koyal how do you imagine and write all this yaar really agree with saphira you made bonds between the characters so well first i was like so many characters and now i understand what you meant by ALL OF THEM HAVE AN IMPORTANT ROLE IN THE FUTURE  all are connected and support eachother seriously a huge round of applauseClap

thanx so you understood the reason for so many characters goodThumbs Up

yes i did and when are you updating the next part
today maybe before 8:30 or i dont know because next part is long

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 3:43am | IP Logged
i know..even i wanted tht concept of unity btwn d clan members in d show too..but chandeena r hopeless yaar...they're always fighting with abhay n butting in his life.....they dont care a damn abt abhay.....in ur ff chand n haseena r so like d cullens..genuinely concerned for abhay's wellbeing.....Big smile  n strangely i dont at all mind d numerous charecters here..d more d merrierSmile on a serious note each n every charecter is surely crucial to d build up n progress of d story..Approve i tho love it.. Big smile  n i forget to mention tht its gr8 tht pia is accepted as a part of d dobrial family... i like ur efforts of juggling so many charecters n still maintaining d flow n quality of d storyThumbs Up

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 3:43am | IP Logged
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Originally posted by mythrimyna

koyal how do you imagine and write all this yaar really agree with saphira you made bonds between the characters so well first i was like so many characters and now i understand what you meant by ALL OF THEM HAVE AN IMPORTANT ROLE IN THE FUTURE  all are connected and support eachother seriously a huge round of applauseClap

thanx so you understood the reason for so many characters goodThumbs Up

yes i did and when are you updating the next part
today maybe before 8:30 or i dont know because next part is long

next part is long omg cant wait thanx koyal

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