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(he has the most beautiful handwriting)
Piya was just another girl for me a look alike of Maithili but now she has become something else in my life she has taken a totally different place in my life. I thought after Maithili my heart would beat for none but it did...
When I kissed her yesterday it looked like she was meant for me. But this is impossible I am a monster she is human this is totally impossible .all I can be is happy that at least I got my little sister back. She always loved me and aditya . she at least got her brother back as far as aditya is concerned I am least bothered for a betrayer and a disloyal person like him I have no concern or care anymore .I have completely thrown him out of my life...he was my friend but no more ...
Next morning: mount college...
Piya wanted an answer from abhay whether he loves her or not
She sees him coming she walks up to him
Piya : abhay i want to talk to you
Abhay coming back to his ruthless and bad attitude : i don't want to
Piya holds his hand and pulls him to the near by pillar in the corner since it was a lonely place
Abhay shakes her hand off : don't touch me
Piya hurt : what exactly were you doing yesterday
Abhay smirking : why you want me to do that again
Piya : does this all look like a game to you ..i thought you loved me
Abhay even though he was in pain when he was saying yet he talks like he is normal : (laughing) love ...oh please give me a break ...you are not the first girl i kissed there are some many more whom i not only kissed but also did many other things so you are just a timepass for me since that night i wasn't with any girl i thought i could ju...
Before he could finish piya slaps him she has tears in her eyes . the monster in abhay wakes up he starts getting ferocious . he holds her hips tight with one hand and the other holding her shoulders he pulls her close
Abhay : you slapped me . how dare you
Piya : leave me let me go
Abhay : why did you slap me
piya : i can slap whom i want whenever i want
Abhay gets madly angry and forcefully kisses her on her lips she tries to get away from him but she cant . he starts feeling her tears in his cheeks . he lets her go . she falls down in the ground, crying ,helpless and broken . abhay comes to senses he looks at piya . he tries to console her and say sorry she instead gets up scared and starts walking back wards
Abhay : piya .i ...
Piya crying . shocked and scared : sorry...pls don't do anything to me ...pls let me go ...dont even touch me
Abhay with tears : piya
Piya runs outside the college and runs into the forest and sits near the river in shade of a tree her legs folded up to her chest and she was hugging herself like a scared child .
Abhay runs quickly upto her
Piya sees him and starts crying loudly : pls go away don't come near me
Abhay tries to hold her : piya i
Piya : don't touch me just go away
Abhay starts feeling tears falling from his own eyes he runs away from her and he goes back to his house – raichands mansion . he enters and before haseena could ask him what happened he runs into his bedroom and closes his door . piya in the forest slowly starts walking out to the main road crying . after sometime piya finds her way out and to her car she gets in and drives to her house back . she wipes her tears and enters . madhu wonders what happened
Madhu : piya beta , tum college nahin gayi
Piya with a cracking voice : nahin maa woh mujhe bahut saar dard ho raha tha
Madhu touches her forhead : piya tumhe toh bukhaar hai . saab kuch teek toh hai na
Piya : haan maa i just want to rest
Madhu : ok beta tum jaake so jao mein misha ko call karke bolthi hoon. Anyways tum chutti kabhi nahin leti ho . aaj aaram kar lo . kaash misha bhi tumhari tarah hoti
Piya smiles and walks into her bedroom , madhu senses something is wrong
Piya runs into her bedroom . locks her door and buries her face int the pillow and starts crying
Abhay has worn his black vest and is sitting near the fireplace in his room the fire is casting orange light on his face the room is dark . he looks up and sees himself . abhayendra
( he sees his own soul the real abhyendra (dressed in white typical his time clothes) talking to him )
Abhayendra : what have you done
Abhay : i didn't know .
Abhayendra : you broke her heart okay thats for her own good but you even broke her . her soul . do you know how ruthless you behaved today with her. Her body belongs to her . the way you held her was even more bad
Abhay : what can i do . its the monster in me
Abhayedra : learn to control it if you don't you are no less than aditya
Abhay : you are comparing me with that monster
Abhayendra : you are no less . you literally kissed her against her will and hurt her so badly was that kind abhay . now what should you be called an angel or a demon
Abhay : i have to apologise
Abhayendra : how what face wil you show her . she hates you now .but yes you can if you speak sweetly
Abhay looks at himself (Abhayendra ) and smiles . Abhayendra smiles and vanishes . he just hears his souls last words
" let me live again let Abhayendra live again, live your second chance, live your life ...again"
Abhay : yes abhayendra will live again...for piya
The college is over . misha questions piya and piya says she was not well .
Dhruv vandana abhimanyu and sakshi pick up suhani who was put in junior college since she was 16 (for humans) they go home . they are sitting in the hall waiting for abhay to come down . chand and haseena are smiling seeing the way suhaani talks , innocently (chand and haseena have more love and compassion for suhaani they treat her like she is their own little baby daughter )
suhaani - dad you know what my new class teacher's name is haseena too ...
chand smiling - acha , is she like your mom or hotter than her
haseena hits him playfully - chand
suhaani and the rest begin to laugh
suhaani - no ways my mama is hotter and better
haseena - thats my girl *hrump*
suhaani goes and hugs haseena . chand is happy that haseena is so happy after so many years suddenly they hear footsteps .
to chands and everyones surprise abhay comes in smiling .
chand and haseena starts smiling on their own and the rest are staring at him with their mouth open .
abhay sweetly with a big smile - hi mom hi dad hi everybody
they still continue staring
abhay - tum sab ko ho kya gaya hai
abhimanyu - tum abhay hi ho na
abhay - abhay nahin abhayendra
they burst out laughing
they go and hug him tight
dhruv - welcome back dost
suhaani - yayyy bhaiii
chand and haseena start laughing
suhaani hugs abhay - bhai ap itne khadoos ban gaye the thankgod aap vapaas aa gaye
abhay - oh ab khatte amla ko bhi meri fikaar hone lagi huh ?
khatte amla was the name abhay used to call suhaani in the human days
suhaani - bhai
abhay starts running
dhruv vandana sakshi and abhimanyu together make fun of suhaani by calling her khatte amla . they run with abhay and she is following them to hit them . chand and haseena look at them playing
chand - agar piya nahin hoti toh yeh sab nahin hota
haseena - how true . abhay mein aisa badlav aa gaya hai . he is changed ab woh pehle jaise baan gaya hai all thanks to piya
chand - hmmm
.they put on the tv
headlines : mr arnav dobriyal and family in grief
the whole raichand family who was lost in happiness come to halt they all group in front of the tv
news : mr arnav dobriyal loses his 2nd son jay dobriyal . the 20 year old was brutally murdered and throw in one end of the forest . the sources say that gold bracelet with alphabets A,S was found near the body . they sources also say that the body was completely drained of blood . there was no blood in any part of the body . even though the body was scratched badly . ...we pray that mr doriyal and family get over this trauma quickly ...the police have already started their investigations
chand : oh no a braclet with A.S
abhay - no
dhruv - he is back
haseena just sits in the couch shocked
vandana looks at dhruv and says - back for what
note : i promise i will update faster means like if i update today i will update by night
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it was a nice updatebut poor pia i felt so bad for her, i cant believe abhay behaved like that although i know he'll make it up to her.
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