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koyal-kajal

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 9:27am | IP Logged
chapter 2Smile
in the car (piya and misha's car)
piya: awesome na hum ab college jayenge finally
misha:tum aisa bol rahi ho jaise hum koi mars ya venus par sufar karne ke liye ja rahe hain
piya:misha you know just leave it tum nahin samjho gi just forget it
misha: hey wait koi ek kaho ok either just leave it or forget it ...oh ok tum mujhe options de rahi the choose karne ke liye hai na
with her usual super sweet smile
piya just reminded herself whom she was talking to 
MISHA
the one who no one could win over .she slowly looked outside the window and noticed three jet black cars howling their way into the college thier tyres screeching and almost looked like sparks would come from the tyres 
misha:whoa! yeh koun hai yaar uss ameer baap ki bikadi hue bimbo toh nahin ho sakte because she owns a pink audi tts
making a funny face pretending to be t
piya laughed and got down from their car with misha and watched as all of the raichands got down and kabir came hoping skiping and everything a little boy would do when he gets a chocolate he knew what misha and piya were looking at the raichands
kabir:they are the raichands new in town a little too sophisticated
misha: kise ko jalan ho rahe hai ki woh ab dehradoon ka sabse hot boy ab nahin raha
kabir: you 
misha ran and kabir followed her trying to hit her
just then vandana looked at piya
vandana: what the h**l it cant be she is dead .............dhruv
dhruv: what happened vanda.......maithili how can it be no she died in front of me it cant be
abhimanyu and sakshi turned and looked at piya all of them stood speechless and piya noticed that they were staring at her and she looked away. abhay was standing still as if any moment he could breakdown and cry his heart out. vandana and abhimanyu held him tight
dhruv: abhay......... listen it is not her ok she just looks like her dont breakdown here people are around  
sakshi: i will call chand ...
dhruv: no wait i will call him. abhay needs you here just control him let there not be a scene created
sakshi nodded and went towards abhay
dhruv opened his iphone and before he could call haseena's number flashed
dhruv: yes mom there is a problem
trying to find words to speak
haseena: yes i sensed something wrong. is everything fine and what about abhay . behaving mean again?
dhruv: mom ..mom wait there is a girl who looks like maithili here we are not imagining. we all saw her here, abhay is becoming incontrollable ....she looks exactly like maithili
haseena now shaking with fear: what .........maithili 
chand who was pouring wine into the wineglass now looked at her with shock
haseena: i will call you soon bye
dhruv: do it fast tell dad quick
haseena closed her phone and quickly walked towards chand
chand: what happened how did that girls name come out of your mouth with so much fear
haseena:there is a girl in mount college who looks like maithili a carbon copy of her. all of them saw her. she is real. abhay is becoming incontrollable
chand: ... just as i feared i thought maithili's memories will make him mad but now a girl who looks like her that too so close ... abhay will become incontrollable... you know haseena what happens when he becomes mad
haseena: i know . abhay is the strongest of all our kind there is no one who can defeat him. he can change the world if he wants ..he is capable of so much that a thousands of us can do ..
chand: we must do something about this
haseena and chand looked outside the window planning their next move




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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 9:55am | IP Logged
chand fav dialouge in show seems 2 b :  v have 2 do smthing abt this.......
and its here 2
LOL
 
2 gd man
very nice, and this one is 4 u........
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koyal-kajal

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 10:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kaushiki9

chand fav dialouge in show seems 2 b :  v have 2 do smthing abt this.......
and its here 2
LOL
 
2 gd man
very nice, and this one is 4 u........
Clap
thank you so much this is my first ffSmile

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 10:07am | IP Logged
too good !!Clap
there are many character which made me a bit confusedConfused ! but nothing matterz !!!!!
please continue soon i am waiting !!! 

koyal-kajal

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 10:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aromal

too good !!Clap
there are many character which made me a bit confusedConfused ! but nothing matterz !!!!!
please continue soon i am waiting !!! 
sorry for confusion first time writing ff and didnt know what to dobut all characters have a important role in future  but dont worry will update soon

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 10:37am | IP Logged
hey thank u for adding me to your pm listSmile.the update was very very goodClap . eagerly waiting for your next update. i have a doubt is abhimanyu is kinshuk mahajanConfused

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 10:49am | IP Logged
i will update soonSmile
 but thanx guys a big Hug to all of you 
abhay piya zindabad

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 11:58am | IP Logged
is this real or just a fantasy post i mean are all these character really going to be in the show please pm me if all this is real.

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