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koyal-kajal Goldie

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 2:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Gals1110

Great Update... I lik it dat piya hav her whole family wit her in ur story... Plz update d next part soon..
will do that

koyal-kajal Goldie

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 2:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by moully

Superb update.
hey but who's cmng 4 thm?????????? Master????????
cn't wait 4 next.
plz update soon.Smile
its master but dont worry he wont know about piya
koyal-kajal Goldie

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 2:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by saphira7988

brilliant update..loved it...Big smileso all d raichaands' have very interesting powers...thts y everyone's after them....Cool plss update soon cant take d suspense at d end of d chpSmile very well written Thumbs Up
thanx i know i am being mean by giving heart attacks

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Posted: 09 February 2011 at 8:05am | IP Logged
heyy  plzzzzzzz update  fast   cant  wait to  read  moreeeeeee
koyal-kajal Goldie

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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 3:14am | IP Logged
chapter 9
 in the raichand mansion ..........
all raichands have gathered in the mansion's garden , the sun has not yet risen it is still dark........and all see 5 people standing in the forest end of the garden

master (his name is vikrant) steps forward

vikrant : chand dearest friend how are you?????
chand : oh i am fine .............indeed we all are come you all here
vikrant : its nothing just came to see how my powerful knight is doing
and saying this vikrant looks at abhay making big anime eyes and a scarstic sweet smile
abhay irritated ..........looks aside and gives a smirk
abhay murmuring : ya right from when did you get so worried about me 
vikrant : did you say something
abhay : no nothing

vikrant smiles and looks at the rest and says : anyways since everything is fine .. we shall take our leave 
he starts walking slowly towards the forest and the people who came along with him also follow . one of them turn and stares at abhay and gives a sheepish smile 
as soon as they go away chand and the others go inside the mansion
chand: why is vikrant behaving so weirdly ........
haseena : i hope they have not guessed something was wrong
chand : hope not
 all of them turn and look at abhay who was standing near the window staring at the moon with maithili's picture in his hand

vermas mansion
vikram : aryan, why are you always behind abhay 
aryan : i dont believe this you have sympathy for that blood sucking leech
vikram : whatever they are they always keep up their treaty rules 
he turns to siddharth
vikram : and you why the hell did you pierce him that to with silver
siddharth : he deserved it ...............did you see the way he was banging aryan to the rock 
vikram : naturally if you provoke someone they will its up to aryan to shut his mouth instead of troubling him
ritu rolls her eyes and goes into her room
shivani(their mother) : from today if anyone messes around with the raichands they need not enter this house
armaan picks his magazine and sympathetically smiles  to aryan , pats on his back and walks away
siddharth laughs loudly looking at armaan giving his smile to aryan who was now so pissed off

aryan : dude what was that 
armaan runs away quickly and aryan follows
siddharth : wait for me even i want to kill him
saying this all the three brothers disappear into the corridor .... their fun filled loud voices echo into the hall where vikram and shivani were sitting
vikram: they are so naive they dont understand anything 
shivani nods and looks at the old painting of a mountain scenery 

dobriyal mansion 
pia curiously remembers pandher written in the paper's symbol
she goes and asks her father
pia : papa yeh pandher koun the
arnab: pandher raja yahaan ke purane raja  the 
pia : kya unke paas koi khoobsurat rani thi (remembering the poem )
arnab : i dont know ........haan log kehte the ki wahaan ek khoobsurat rajkumari thi ...........uska naam.............................
pia : uska naam 
arnab : koi mythri nahi nahi maithili haan maithili tha
pia : oh ok thanks papa 
saying this she runs away 
arnab: are ruko piya
pia runs to her room she locks her door and opens her laptop and searches
: pandher maithali 
number of results come she sees a website :
history of pandher : rajkumari maithili
pia clicks on that and it opens and she sees maithili's photograph 
pia : oh my god she looks like me 
pia stammering : bbbut hhhow can iit bbbbe 
she scrolls down and sees
: princess maithili was loved by her kingdom she was know for her intelligence and beauty ....sadly the princess died in an incident only her necklace now remains as a rememberence in the museum 
the necklace
 pia : maithili tum mere kaun ho ...........hum dono ki shakaal itne kyun milthi hai


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saphira7988 Senior Member

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Posts: 644

Posted: 10 February 2011 at 3:35am | IP Logged
awesome update dear....Star pia has come to know tht she resembles maithili Shockednice..Smile its gettin really interesting now..Winkraichands n vikrant's part was also good..n d wolves parents seem to be a really cautious n sensible duoSmilefab work..!!thanks for d pmHug
RB81 IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 9074

Posted: 10 February 2011 at 4:29am | IP Logged
u took a long time to update.too busy?ok we will wait 4 ur next update.

so d curious cat started her research.too inquisitive.after all its pia no one can stop that.Big smilecontinue soon.

Edited by RB81 - 10 February 2011 at 4:29am
arhi.sarun Senior Member

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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 6:24am | IP Logged
awsome getting really interesting now
upda8 soon and pm plzz

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