ff:new beginings - updated chap14 on pg 28 - Page 11

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Posted: 13 years ago
woohooo awesome update just loved it abhay in vampire form was really masculine and awesome .
 i am sorry i am not bashing or telling anything but in my opinion edward is quite girly looking type compared to abhay in the serial and in your ff
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey contineue soon !!!
well written for me beach part was the best !!!😆
and do agree edward  does look girly !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
It's really awsome! Thanks 4 giving such a nice story. Is it really gonna happen?
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey tats great abhay drinks blood
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Edwardtabs

It's really awsome! Thanks 4 giving such a nice story. Is it really gonna happen?

 nope😭 not going to happen
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nammmu

hey tats great abhay drinks blood

thanx but thats animal blood. he is a vegetarian vampire🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
very gd.......
liked d way u deacribed Piya looking at Abhay
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Posted: 13 years ago
good..
abhay talking with piya is good..
but they caught at d wrong time..
aryan i getting on abhay's nerves always..
not good..back off aryan..
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update koyal👏 it was all i cud hope for😃 loved d park scene...abhay n pia r attracted to each other... so we can c all d makings of a passionate love story ☺️n i jus loved d ur description of abhay's vampire form n d confrontation scene....aaaww poor abhay's hurt😭 tht aryan's a troublemaker 😡😡 wat a pest pickin fights with abhay  brilliantly written...👍🏼 thanks n pls update soon😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: saphira7988

awesome update koyal👏 it was all i cud hope for😃 loved d park scene...abhay n pia r attracted to each other... so we can c all d makings of a passionate love story ☺️n i jus loved d ur description of abhay's vampire form n d confrontation scene....aaaww poor abhay's hurt😭 tht aryan's a troublemaker 😡😡 wat a pest pickin fights with abhay  brilliantly written...👍🏼 thanks n pls update soon😃


thanx i am happy you liked it