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FF: A new journey of Angini (Pt 7 on pg 13) 11/Apr (Page 3)

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 6:15pm | IP Logged
err....by torture I meant the waiting you guys have to go through for the chapters Ermm....coz i havn't started the 2nd part yet ROFL...... aab bhukto!!ROFL.......
 
btw a quick THANK YOU to all my lovely readers for your encouraging appreciation darlings Hug....love ya all
 
 


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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 6:16pm | IP Logged
really nice begening, rehana you are doing an awsome job, will look forward to next part.thank you very much. rozy
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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 7:34pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Rehana86

err....by torture I meant the waiting you guys have to go through for the chapters Ermm....coz i havn't started the 2nd part yet ROFL...... aab bhukto!!ROFL.......
 
btw a quick THANK YOU to all my lovely readers for your encouraging appreciation darlings Hug....love ya all
 
 
Rehana we want the next morning Wink

So you better put on your thinking caps and open your basket of imagination and give it a start !!

We need garam garam  sooji ka halwa in the morning !!!Embarrassed

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 9:45pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Rehana86

err....by torture I meant the waiting you guys have to go through for the chapters Ermm....coz i havn't started the 2nd part yet ROFL...... aab bhukto!!ROFL.......
 
btw a quick THANK YOU to all my lovely readers for your encouraging appreciation darlings Hug....love ya all
 
 

Rehana , We should thank you not the other way round. LOLBig smile

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 10:12pm | IP Logged
it was sweet rehana..a perfect begining..in fact the ful consumation would have looked odd ..good u kept it this way ,i really enjoyed reading thank you.
and part where he was watching her...
us pe do line bangla ka gana suno...

dekhechi sharodo prate tumaye
dekhechi madhobi raate tumaaye...
dekhechi..
ogo bideshini
very sweet  once again

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 10:13pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sami01

it was sweet rehana..a perfect begining..in fact the ful consumation would have looked odd ..good u kept it this way ,i really enjoyed reading thank you.
and part where he was watching her...
us pe do line bangla ka gana suno...

dekhechi sharodo prate tumaye
dekhechi madhobi raate tumaaye...
dekhechi..
ogo bideshini
very sweet  once again


Sammy translate in English please.Smile

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 10:29pm | IP Logged
oh rekha this is rabinder nath tagore song
ogo bideshini
these lines mean..
 i see your face in beautiful autumn(here sharod is season  which is around durga puja)
and i see you in beautiful spring nights...
o beloved foreign girl(ogo bideshini)...basically i used it for ragini as she is stil paraai for anmol na
the song is basically song of love for this girl from afar lands....and somehow its romance and softness suits anmol

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 7:59pm | IP Logged
First of all, thanks to all my lovely readers...love you all....and Shanti di, I hope I met your expectation in the morning scene....sorry if i failed to do so, the only excuse i can come up with is that my brain is malfunctioning LOL....all the criticisms are welcomedHug
 
Part 2
 
Coming out of the washroom while drying her long wet hair over her right front with the towel, Ragini failed to notice the figure on the bed as the morning shower did manage to make her suffer from a short term memory loss for a moment, and she threw back the locks to switch them over her left front, unknowingly causing some of the droplets to fly on his face, arousing her husband, who was sleeping on the bed behind her......
 
It was indeed a "good" morning for Anmol as her beautiful hair got to wake him up...... the sleep had flew away as soon as his eyes fell on her..... she was still in the process of drying her hair when Ragini's mind got alerted and she instantly turned back to see him looking at her while wiping off the water droplets from his face ..... "...I'm sorry! ...I forgot... you... were ...." she stopped thinking that she had already embarrassed herself by admitting that she forgot about him sleeping on the bed .....
 
"...Relax ... it's ok..." he assured her with a genuin smile and got off the bed to go freshen up...... he waited for her to let him go as she was rooted to her spot holding the towel, feeling nervous all of a sudden for God knows what ...... Anmol would have passed her through that narrow space on her right but he was more concerned about what struck her mind all of a sudden as she seemed to be lost in some other world..... "...Ragini..." his soothing yet warm voice brought her back to reality and she managed to give him a half smile.....
 
Returning the smile, he took a step to his right only to be blocked by her as Ragini too stepped back to her left simultaneously..... both repeated their steps one more time to their respective opposite sides and blocking each other....and Ragini stopped to close her eyes "..Sorry.." she quietly apologized again...... more than her apology he was interested in that beautiful face with water droplets all over it..... some of the dribs were still swinging around those short locks that were covering the left side of her face ......
 
And finally he dared to fulfill his wish as his right hand moved up to touch the left side of her forehead to collect those locks ...... Ragini's quick and short jerk alerted him about the effect he was causing her by his touch ...... then very tenderly he removed those locks behind her ear and lightly traced his thumb down her cheek, getting the feel of her soft skin after her shower ....... after that he gently held her by shoulders and carefully moved her to his left ..... as soon as his hands touched her shoulders, Ragini's grip on the towel tightened while eyes still remained shut and Lord! he was thoroughly enjoying her nervousness ..... then settling her down on the bed he quietly left to freshen up, leaving his wife with her closed eyes .......
 
God, she again made a joke out of herself, Ragini thought, as she opened her eyes hearing the washroom door shut..... "... Why on earth, am I feeling so nervous around him all of a sudden like a 'new' bride?..." .... she wanted to slap herself..... " ....how am I going to face him now??.... Good job, Ragini, you just screwed yourself..." she told herself and hid her face in her palms....... after a moment, she quickly got up to finish up with her face before Anmol showed up from the washroom and Ragini was not ready to make it worse for her even further ..... and before he could come out, she managed to get ready on time and sneak out of the room .......
 
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"... Good Morning Papa/Partner..." both Khushi and Tamanna greeted Anmol together to receive a peck on each one's forehead..... "...Good Morning my two little angels ..." he too greeted before taking the pecks on his both cheeks from his beloved daughters ..... "..wow! you guys are all ready for school?..." he was surprised as this was the first time he seemed to be late to show up in the breakfast table in Rajvansh Mansion...... ".. Yeap and Badi mommy and Bade papa are going to drop us school... they are waiting outside... Bye..." Tamanna informed, then along with Khushi she gave a quick hug to her papa and both the girls left from there....
 
"...Good Morning, my dear handsome hunk..." Guni took a pause in between her words but the smirk behind that full grin was caught by her smart chachu..... "... Good Morning, my dear shrewd shweetie... what am I missing here? " he raised an eyebrow while taking the seat right beside her, already giving a hint to the girl to be careful with her steps ...... "...Darn it, chachu... you are a genius..." she laughed for getting caught as Anmol winked at her, appreciating the compliment......
 
"...Where is Alekh bhaia and Sakshi??..." Anmol asked normally while placing a paratha on his plate ..... "... they are done with breakfast and since Sakshi chachi got hit by the morning sickness, Alekh chachu took her for rest..." she smiled and immediately it turned into a full grin yet again.... "...and Ragini chachi is in the kitchen..." her eyes didn't blink from him to notice the effect of hearing his beloved wife's name.... "... thanks for 'all' the info..." he stopped to quote the word before filling his mouth with a tiny piece from the paratha .... "...welcome! and please don't give me that look, as if you wouldn't want to know about her..." Guni rolled her eyes while taking the last bite from her green apple leaving Anmol with no choice but to shake his head, smiling.....
 
"...Anyway, forget it... let's get to the exciting point..." Guni changed her voice as she looked so anxious ..."...So, where are you taking Chachi for honeymoon??..." ... "WHAT??" he almost choked on his juice..... both were shocked and surprised at each other's take on the topic.... ".... Come on Chachu, don't tell me that you don't even know the spelling..." the poor girl seemed to be kicked out of the sky as she blankly stared at the species sitting beside her in the name of her dear chachu ....
 
"... I see!... so, that's what I was missing... and may I know why your brain is too occupied working on 'our' honeymoon?..." he truly didn't expect such inquiry from his darling niece..... "... it wasn't even close to my answer..." she felt dejected..... "... I am a father of 3 big daughters and one of them will be getting married in a year or so..." Guni rolled her eyes when he pointed at her..."... doesn't it sound weird??... " Anmol confessed..."..But.." she tried to interrupt... "...end of the discussion, darling..." finishing up the juice, he got up and left a quick peck on Guni's forehead, hoping to be successful in disrupting her mind.....
 
"...Fine ...then...." she quickly ran behind him and jumped to stand on the soft couch beside which Anmol was standing and checking a file.... "..take her for a date.." she advised resting her left elbow on his shoulder while the right hand was on her waist..... "...hmm, isn't it too late??..." he again tried to avoid when he noticed her frowning with both her hands now rested on her waist..... "..Ok, done..." he laughed, successful in bringing back the smile on her face..... "...here here!...ask her...ask her...." noticing Ragini heading towards the stairs, Guni anxiously whispered to Anmol, who was busy with the figures on the paper ......
 
"Guni, why are you standing on the couch??" sensing some whispering she turned back to catch the two.... "...I am preparing for a speech...forget it chachi...come here, Chachu has to say something important to you..." she managed to convice her..... and her heart started to pound all over again.... hoping not to make a joke out of herself in front of Guni this time..... then reluctantly she walked towards them looking down ....
 
Let alone the file, Anmol forgot about the world around him, when he looked up to see her figure.... looking extremely ravishing in that green-black contrast sari, she was glowing like a new bride..... he felt a jerk on his right shoulder and turned to see Guni gesturing him towards his lovely wife, who was standing a couple of feet away from him, as usual looking down..... "...ask her..." she reminded in mute and he was blank...... "... what ??..." he too replied in mute.... "...the date...duh!! " she again conveyed in mute while showing her impatience..... "..oh ok.." he unsurely nodded....
 
"Darn it..... she seriously expects me to ask her for a date??" he thought ...... he felt as if he was in the verge of going through a heart attack.... all of a sudden, he felt so nervous..... he was surprised at his own condition, the guy who had got the guts to confess his love in front of the entire world is now feeling nervous to ask his love for a date, that too in front of a kid...... the pigs are definitely flying .....
 
Finally, he decided to initiate hoping to get it done with as soon as possible, "...umm, Ragini.. I ... umm..." Anmol kept on looking at Guni then Ragini in cycle .... "... the date I was... I mean.." he recovered his words when his niece stared at him with an open mouth while Ragini was busy trying to figure out the puzzle..... "..I mean to say, I wanted to ask youforadate... " he finished off ..... "..what??.." both Guni and Ragini blurted out at the same time ...... taking a deep breath he gave up..... "..Never mind... I will ask you later..." he dismissed, making his sweet wife even more confused as she left from there after a quick nod.....
 
"...Hopeless!!..." shaking head in disbelief, Guni sighed while slapping her forhead with her left hand as the elbow rested on Anmol's right shoulder..... "...first of all, you, come down to the earth...." holding the file in his left hand, he wrapped his right hand around her waist and carefully put her down from the couch while her hands were around his neck....... "...Thank you..." she gently appreciated her chachu for the safe landing on the ground..... then folding her arms, she demanded "...and what was that??..."..... filling in the leather handbag with his laptop and file, he answered, "...I don't know, I was feeling..." he paused to choose the correct word, "..nervous??.." he admitted hesitantly only to receive a blank stare from his cute niece.....
 
"... wait a second..." she pretended to check on his temperature..... "... are you alright, Chachu?... you are giving me shocks, that too one after another..." now it was his turn to roll eyes..... "... Hogaye meri maa ??.... I am getting late for office, so may I now??.." he pretended to be tired of the game ...... "...of course, beta... but not till you promise me that you will ask her by tonight..." she cleverly threw her condition with a smile...... "...I promise..." he smiled and left before giving her a tight side hug and peck on her forehead.... she watched him leaving and smiled to herself for almost being successful in completing the job that she was in charge of by her dearest badi maa....
 
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