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Episode Discussion Thread- 24th Jan - 30th Jan '11 (Page 115)

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 12:04am | IP Logged
Theek hai. Yeh lo. Bilkul Onu ke ishtyle main Day Dreaming. Got one more written and phir bas! until I write more that is. LOL

OS 3

Onu swung open his bedroom door in anger and began to make his way downstairs. He stopped when he saw her standing there, quietly listening as she stood with Neelu, Laboni, Jonaki and Mauli.

Why did she always have to do this? Why did she always have to put herself on the line, just for him?

She looked up and saw him, sending a smile his way. He didn't smile back. How could he? How could he smile and pretend that everything was okay, when it wasn't: It was far from okay.

He continued making his way downstairs and Taani watched him in confusion as he made his way over to her. "Taani, mujhe tujhse ek zaroori baat karni hai" he told her taking her hand, about to walk off
"Onu...?" Taani said confused
"Kya baat hai Onu?" Neelu asked
"Haan, kya hua Baba?" Laboni asked worriedly, noticing the anger on his face.
"Ek minute maa" he told them both and looked towards Taani "Mujhe Taani se bohat zaroori baat karni hai" he said as Taani turned to Laboni, exchanging looks.
"Anurag? Kya baat hai?" Shekhar asked
"Tu abhi bhi nahin boleghi na?" he asked Taani, who looked away. "Taani, main tujhse kuch poochraha hoon" he said softly and took hold of her shoulders gently and turned her to face him properly. The tears had already formed in her eyes as she tried to look away. They both knew what he was talking about.

"Onu, baat kya hai?" Neelu asked
"Main bathaatha hoon" he said, still staring at Taani.
"Onu... nahin" she pleaded and he sighed.
"Theek hai" he said "mere saath chal phir" he said taking her hand and made his way out of the house as the rest of the family looked on in confusion.

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 12:11am | IP Logged
iss key baad Onu will take her to mandip and take pheras with her? Day Dreaming

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 12:14am | IP Logged
wow Lubz....... nice OS.enjoying every single line Day Dreaming

nextttttt Wink
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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 12:14am | IP Logged
Hmmm. Maybe, maybe not *makes a mental note to herself for an idea for the 5th OS* ROFL ROFL

One more OS left for now...about to post it.

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OS 4

Onu let go of Taani's hand when they got out of the house and sighed.

"Onu, tu meri baat sun" she pleaded
"Kya sunoon Taani?" he asked, turning to her "kya sunoon main?!" he exclaimed "tu mujhe churvaane ke liye..." he stopped mid-sentence. He couldn't even say it. He grabbed her shoulders. "kyun Taani?" he asked her helplessly. "kyun kar-rahi hai yeh sab?" he asked
"To kya karoon main Onu?" she cried, just as helpless. "Aur kya karsakti main?" she asked and he turned away from her, frustrated.

"Maine tujhse hazaar baar kaha hai" she told him "main tujhe taqleef main nahin dekhsakthi" she cried and he closed his eyes. "mujhse bardaasht nahin hota jab main tujhe aise dekhti hoon" she cried and he opened his eyes.
"Lekin Taani.."
"Onu" she said. It was all she had to say and he stopped, turning to her. Tears were running down her cheeks, he jumped at once to wipe them away. "agar mera kuch karne se tujhe jail na jaana pare, to main yeh mauka kaise jaane dehsakti?" she asked.
"Par Taani agar tujhe us insaan se shaadi karni hai to jaane mujhe jail!" he exclaimed "hone de mujhe paansi!" he said but she shook her head, her hand landing on his mouth as she broke down in tears.
"Onu..."
"Nahin Taani" he said cupping her cheeks, composing himself. "bohat hochuka" he told her "ab main baytne vaala nahin hoon"
"Onu..." she pulled his arm "kya karegha tu?"
"Pehle to us Ritesh ko..." he snarled angrily.
"Nahin Onu. Uske paas mat jaana. Vo..."
"Taani" he said "main aise nahin baytsaktha"
"Onu.."
"Nahin.." he said walking off but stopped at once when Taani spoke
"Onu, agar tu mujhse pyaar kartha hai to tu kahin nahin jaayegha" she said repeating more or less what he had said to her when she tried to leave him. He stopped as soon as she had finished the sentence and immediately turned to look at her stood there helpless and crying.

His legs couldn't move fast enough when he rushed back to wrap his arms around her, holding her close and trying his best to protect her in a sense, from all the evil in the world.


Chalo, abhi ke liye kaafi hai? LOL

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 12:31am | IP Logged
Ab kya hua Nads?

Yeh lo, a teaser for the next OS LOL


"Main bataatha hoon ke kya karenghe" he told her. He was about to go against everything he had said to her, that he had said to the rest of his family. He didn't want to ruin her life by taking this step but he couldn't sit back and let her make the ultimate sacrifice for him. It was time he stepped up. It was time he stepped up to protect the one person that mattered the most to him.

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Fab OSs' Lubz LOLDay Dreaming Keep writing pleasee Embarrassed

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