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Episode Discussion Thread- 24th Jan - 30th Jan '11 (Page 114)

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 11:49pm | IP Logged
ROFLROFL

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 11:54pm | IP Logged
Here you go. Seeing as I'm in an extremely good mood today: my last lecture's cancelled again so I don't have to miss TL Day Dreaming. although, I'm not sure I'll wanna watch it if it's Ritesh rubbish! Onu had better hurry up and work it out!

Anywaaay. More:

OS 2

"Onu?" Neelu approached him as he was sitting on the sofa, away from the others. "Tu yahaan akele kyun bayta hai? Aah. Sab ke saath aake bayt na" she said trying to help him up.
"Maa" he stopped her "main thodi dehr main aata hoon" he told her
"Acha. Theek hai" she said, turning to walk away
"Maa?" Onu got up as she turned to face him.
"Haan? Kya baat hai?"
"Vo..." he paused "Taani kahaan gayi hai?"
"Vo mere kamre main se thoda samaan lene ke liye gayi hai" she smiled
"Acha, theek hai" he nodded and she walked off.

Onu looked up to the balcony. He had to find out what she was hiding from him. It was eating him up.

He proceeded to make his way up the stairs and approached his room and stopped when he heard footsteps coming down the corridor. As an impulse, he quickly hid in his room and closed the door, leaning on it in order to hear what was going on outside.

"Taani?" a voice said "tum yahaan ho?" It was Ritesh.
"Kya chaahiye aapko?" she asked, irritated.
"Kuch nahin, bas, yeh kaagaz pe apna dastakhat karle" he said "vo kya hai na, ke jab Laboni maa ne paardiya to maine socha ke ek banvaadehte hain. To yeh lo" he said
"Dekhiye maine kahaa aapse"
"Aur maine bhi kaha" he snarled "ke agar to chup chap meri baat nahin maaneghi, to tujhe to pata hai ke kya hoga" he told her. "to yeh lo, aur chup chaap apna dastakhat karlo" he said
"Lekin Onu..."
"Maine kaha na" he told her "ke jis din hamari shaadi hogi, ussi din main Anurag ko jail se churvaadoongha" he said
"Par..."
"Ab yeh lekin vekin chordo aur sign karlo varna theek nahin hoga" he said practically shoving the paper into her hand before walking off.

Onu stood there, confused, angry, hurt. He couldn't keep control of his emotions as he realised the enormity of the situation. He slowly approached his window to see Taani stood there, crying silently to herself.

He stared at her helplessly as she quickly wiped her eyes and put the paper away before taking a deep breath and walking back downstairs.

All this time.... All this time Taani was keeping such a big secret hidden inside herself. All this time she was smiling to the world. Pretending that everything was okay. But deep down she was shattering inside. And Onu hadn't even noticed.

Onu rested his forehead on the window and sighed. How was he ever going to get out of this mess? How was he ever going to save his Taani.

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 11:59pm | IP Logged
nexttttttttt LOL

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 12:01am | IP Logged
 ye dil mangey more Day Dreaming phir kia huwa? LOL

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 12:04am | IP Logged
Theek hai. Yeh lo. Bilkul Onu ke ishtyle main Day Dreaming. Got one more written and phir bas! until I write more that is. LOL

OS 3

Onu swung open his bedroom door in anger and began to make his way downstairs. He stopped when he saw her standing there, quietly listening as she stood with Neelu, Laboni, Jonaki and Mauli.

Why did she always have to do this? Why did she always have to put herself on the line, just for him?

She looked up and saw him, sending a smile his way. He didn't smile back. How could he? How could he smile and pretend that everything was okay, when it wasn't: It was far from okay.

He continued making his way downstairs and Taani watched him in confusion as he made his way over to her. "Taani, mujhe tujhse ek zaroori baat karni hai" he told her taking her hand, about to walk off
"Onu...?" Taani said confused
"Kya baat hai Onu?" Neelu asked
"Haan, kya hua Baba?" Laboni asked worriedly, noticing the anger on his face.
"Ek minute maa" he told them both and looked towards Taani "Mujhe Taani se bohat zaroori baat karni hai" he said as Taani turned to Laboni, exchanging looks.
"Anurag? Kya baat hai?" Shekhar asked
"Tu abhi bhi nahin boleghi na?" he asked Taani, who looked away. "Taani, main tujhse kuch poochraha hoon" he said softly and took hold of her shoulders gently and turned her to face him properly. The tears had already formed in her eyes as she tried to look away. They both knew what he was talking about.

"Onu, baat kya hai?" Neelu asked
"Main bathaatha hoon" he said, still staring at Taani.
"Onu... nahin" she pleaded and he sighed.
"Theek hai" he said "mere saath chal phir" he said taking her hand and made his way out of the house as the rest of the family looked on in confusion.

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 12:11am | IP Logged
iss key baad Onu will take her to mandip and take pheras with her? Day Dreaming

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 12:14am | IP Logged
wow Lubz....... nice OS.enjoying every single line Day Dreaming

nextttttt Wink
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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 12:14am | IP Logged
Hmmm. Maybe, maybe not *makes a mental note to herself for an idea for the 5th OS* ROFL ROFL

One more OS left for now...about to post it.

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