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Its complicated!! (FF on Rajeev) part 15 pg 63 (Page 9)

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 11:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by spvd

nice part.................... thank u deepa.. Big smile
aagayi hamari heroine................ hmm.. hehe..
ridit ne sahi kaha shes just like a bachhi.................looks like they will get together atleast dil se.................
cont soon dear...................... thanks for commenting.. Big smile

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 11:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by suhana_dixit

Hi Nandini hii dii.. Big smile
How r u?? am gud.. Big smile how r u?? Big smile
 
Update was really gudBig smileClapClap thank u.. Big smile I love Ridit's character character here.. thank a lot diii.. Embarrassed very descent kinda guy but Rehan adds to the fun element of this fiction..Big smile but both have got through IIT..Smile yup.. after reading ur comment mujhe kuch yaad aa gaya.. Big smile
Sarakshi seems to b quite a shy girl..Hiw will she cope in IITLOLLOL well i dunno anything abt life in IIT.. LOLLOL soo she wont be facing much difficulty.. LOLLOL but Ridit was noticing her too muchWinkLOL hehe.. Embarrassed
Rehan was easy to talk but she didn't exchange a single word with Ridit.. she is shy na.. Embarrassed I think Ridit ko IIT teachers se problem na hoLOLLOL fingers crossed.. LOLLOL
Yeh canteen and mess ki ladai mein Sarakshi felt really bad coz of Ridit..but usne aisa bhi kuchh nahin kaha thaLOLLOL yahi to ridit bhi soch raha tha.. LOLLOL
Last part was gud where Rehan was teasing Ridit coz of Sarakshi and he too was faking that angerWinkLOLLOL pata hai woh scene maine last moment pe dala.. Tongue pehle lasga end thik nahi hai phir likhte gayi aur bass likh diya.. Tongue
 
Pls continue soon i will try.. LOL
Bye bye n thanks for commenting.. Big smile
 
 

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 11:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rituka7

r u going to update now



edited : i'll try to UD ASAP.. Embarrassed



@natasha - sorry didnt see it earlier.. Tongue
Originally posted by Natasha006

Hi Nandini.... hii natasha Big smile

Got to know your name from the few responses which I read..... sooo sweet.. EmbarrassedVery nice story..... thank u.. Big smile different from any of the serial stories but since the main protagonist is Rajeev...m going to read it....

Refreshing and quite connective....since it deals with college life.... I liked the name Sarakshi..... thank u soo much.. Smile Nice intro and part 1 and 2. I especially loved the last bit of the 2nd part..... thanks.. Big smileKeep updating...

See Ya...
Byeee... bye.. am in a hurry as its already 3 am here.. Tongue sorry for not replying properly.. Tongue n thanks for commenting.. Big smile

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 11:28am | IP Logged
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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 11:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ladybird9

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 12:07pm | IP Logged
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Originally posted by ladybird9

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Was it me who was responsible for TongueEmbarrassed pushing u 2 post it....Cry u know me naaa I'm impatient........Sorryyyyyyy take ur time..i'll wait..Big smile
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chinmayi, hinal, maanmishti, pinky, rituka, oliveya, ronojoy_ria, aamirkhanfan, deepa(spvd), sumaiya, monika, vandu(togepe30) thank u soooooo much for pressing the like button.. Big smile


Part 3

next day sarakshi showed ridit wat attitude is.. she kept ignoring him as if he doesnt exist at all.. ridit for some reason was smiling at this.. 


der grp was increasing.. few more ppl joined them.. but soon sarakshi started feeling odd.. she is not studious, but at the same time she is not much bindass.. actually she is a combination of both.. thats y she is in two grps now.. she loves her second row first seat but highly studious girls(first benchers) r her close frnds.. plus she is in ridit's grp too bcoz of rehan.. sarakshi is too soft, shy n cute hence everyone loves her, pampers her.. ridit always feels happy seeing her getting everyone's affection but he always neglects this feeling..  ridit n sarakshi prefer to avoid each other coz they hv realized something is definately not right..


ridit predicted that here too noo faculty wld like him but sabb ulta hua.. here he is faculty's fav coz of his intelligence n bindass attitude.. sarakshi hates this.. may be coz she is nt faculty's fav but he is.. n this forces her to "hate" him even more..


"huh!! samajhta kya hai apne aap ko.. zarur buttering karta hoga tabhi to sare teachers isko pasand karte hai.. hone doo as if i care.. mere paas parwaah karne ko aur bhi bahot kuch hai.. huh!! nakchada, arrogant kahin ka.."


shaam ko sarakshi ko rehan ko apni mumma ke haath ke bane laddu dene the so usne rehan ko call kiya par usne recieve nahi kiya.. woh uske hostel k bahar hi khadi thi.. sabb usko dekh dekh kar ja rahe the..


sarakshi(to herself) - abb jab sabne muje aisi waisi nazro se dekh hi liya hai to abb main khud hi rehan ko yeh laddu de ati hoon..


jaise hi woh andar gayi sabb ek ek karke apne apne room se bahar aa gaye..


sarakshi(to herself) - hey bhagwan.. kya pehli baar ladki dekhi hai?? aise ghurr rahe hai jaise abhi muh kholenge aur mujhe kha jaenge.. cheap ppl.. huh!!


woh jab rehan ke room ke paas pahuchi to kuch seniors ne usko gher liya aur unmein se ek bola "mam rehan to nahi hai.. kya kaam hai hame hi bata dijiye" sabb hass rahe the aur sarakshi ko rona aa raha tha..


sarakshi ne unko ignore karna hi thik samjha.. usko actually abb samajh aya ki usne BOYS HOSTEL main akar woh bhi akele akar kitni badi galati ki.. luckily ridit achanak bahar aa gaya aur usne sarakshi ko dekh liya.. usne sarakshi ka haath pakda aur usko apne room me le aya aur room lock kar liya andar se..


ridit ko bahot gussa aa raha hai unn seniors pe aur unse jyada sarakshi pe..


ridit - r u mad?? itni bhi kya afat aa gayi thi ki tum yaha chali ayi?? tumme akal ki kami hai kya??


sarakshi zor zor se rone lagi.. ridit darr gaya..


ridit - am sorry.. galati hoo gayi.. plsss chup hoo jao.. plsssssssss


sarakshi - woh woh mmain mmain to bass laddu dene ayi thi.. meri mum ma hai na un unhone banake diye theeee.. mmain khati nahi pasandd.. mum ma daantti iskliye to mene so cha ki reeeeeeeehan ko de du.. me to ba har khadi thi fffone kiya us ne nai uthaya sab dekh re the to to main andar aa gayiiiiii aur phir phirrrrr i realised mene ga lat kiya.. (she was sniveling..)


ridit felt bad for her..


ridit - am sorry.. plss abb rona band kar do.. aisa to hota rehta hai u see.. aur unn logo ki mentality hi aisi hai.. aur unki cheap mentality k karan hum khudo kyu takleef de.. right?? (she nodded..) acha baitho yaha.. (he indicated towards the chair) aur yeh lo (usko rumaal diya) aur aansu pocho.. (she obeyed him) acha abb paani piyo.. (he gave her his glass..)


sarakshi ko dhyan nahi raha aur usne jhootha kar liya..


sarakshi - sorry mene jhoo


ridit - koi baat nahi.. abb thik hoo??


sarakshi - hmm.. muje meetha pasand nai par meri mumma ne daant kar bola ki sabb laddu khatam kar dena.. abb main kaha se khatam karu batao?? (he was quietly listening to her) iss liye me yaha aa gayi.. aur phir aur galati ki aur andar aa gayi.. pata hai jab bhi main apna dimaag use karti hoon na tab main aisi hi buri fasti hoon..(sarakshi bass bole ja rahi hai aur ridit uske paas zameen pe baithke sunn raha hai chup chap..) sabb meri galati hai.. huh!! waise woh rehan bewakuf kaha hai??(ridit was just staring at her dreamingly..)


tabhi rehan aa gaya aur darwaza khatkhataya zor se.. ridit hosh main aya aur darwaza khola..


rehan - ridit ye bahar sabb kya bakwas (n he saw sarakshi sitting on the chair) tu pagal hai?? yaha kyu ayi??


ridit - tu mujhse baat kar rehan.. sabb teri galati hai.. bata nahi sakta tha pehle se isko?? zabardasti ki aafat khadi kar di is


sarakshi(cutting him) - am sorry ridit main tumhare liye afat nahi banna chahti thi.. agey se kabhi aisa kuch nahi hoga..


sarakshi rote rote chali gayi..


ridit - yaar mene isko aafat thodi na bola tha..ulta main to ye bol raha tha ki zabardasti ki afat khadi kardi iske liye.. GOSH!! ye ladki mujhe pagal kar degi.. tu bol yaar rehan me to tujse baat kar raha tha na isse kya keh diya tha??

rehan - tu shanti rakh yaar..


sarakshi ko puri raat neend nahi ayi..

"tumme akal ki kami hai kya??"

"tu pehle bata nahi sakta tha kya isko?? zabardasti ki afat khadi kar di is"

his words were ringing in her ears..


a random day --

ridit, rehan were standing on the platform where teachers stand n give lecture.. they wanted to go for a mass bunk for rest of the day.. as they were supposed to submit an important assingment in second last lecture.. studious girls were not ready for it.. ridit was damn angry at them.. but he was controlling himself..


sarakshi(to herself) - iss bande ko ladkiyon se itni problem kyu h?? jab dekho tab hame aise treat karta hai jaise we r brainless creatures.. huh!!


ridit - its final no one will attend rest of the lectures..


all the studious girls together - hum karenge.. kitna syllabus bacha h exam aane wali hai..


ridit - chalo vote kar lete h.. jo b bunk k favour me h wo right side aa jao aur jo oppose me h wo left me jao..


sarakshi simply walked out of the room as she knew she wont be able to tolerate "his" attitude..


majority was in favor soo bunk was declared but ridit was still not happy.. coz he was unable to understand y sarakshi behaved like this..



at night in der respective rooms-


ridit(to himself) - since day one usko mujhse problem hai.. ek sentence to bola tha bass.. agr problem h to just keep it to urself na y she never misses a chance to show this.. life me itna awkward kabhi feel nahi kiya.. she is literally spoiling my college lyf..


sarakshi(to herself) - yeh college lyf jaldi khatm hoo jaye bass..


both were lying on bed n were looking at ceiling..

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Happy Republic Day to all of u.. Big smile

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