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Its complicated!! (FF on Rajeev) part 15 pg 63 (Page 56)

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Part 13


ridit sabse pehle gift shop gaya aur waha se gift lene ke baad woh kisise milne gaya aur kuch zaruri kaam kiya.. jab ghar pahocha toh his mom n dad were looking at him with suspicious eyes.. he prefered to ignore der gaze n sat beside his mom..


ridit(extra sweetly) - mum aapne gift lane ko kaha tha so main le aya.. umm mumma woh mene bahot socha aur muje laga ki airport pe milna acha nahi lagega aur thik se baat bhi nahi hoo payegi.. aap aisa karo ki airport ke paas jo restaurant hai na use waha ane ko bol do.. aur haan aap uska number mujhe de do aur mera  number aap usko de dena aur bolna ki main hi usko call karunga..


mom - restaurant?? number?? aur achanak restaurant main milne ko kaise taiyaar hoo gaya tu?? tu koi shararat to nahi karne ki soch raha hai na ridit?? ( mom ne ridit ka kaan zorrr se pakda..)


ridit - aahhh mum chodo dukhta hai.. (mom ne kaan chod diya..) aap na hamesha apne bete pe shaq hi karti rehti hoo as if main roz kuch na kuch shararat karta rehta hoon.. huh!!(saying huh he realised its sarakshi's signature expression.. a smile automatically crept over his lips..) its just airport me sukoon se baat kaha ho paegi mom.. life ka itna important phase h to waisa environment bhi to hona chahiye na.. (he tried to sound as serious as possible)


mom - dekh ridit mann to nahi maan raha par tujhpe bharosa karne k alawa aur koi rasta nahi hai mere paas.. agar kuch gadbad ki na to mujhse bura koi nahi hoga.. (his mom showed him fake anger..)


ridit - haan mother India main uss ladki se kuch nahi kahunga.. abb main jau?? u see ridit mehra aise hi muh utha kar apna exhibition nahi karwa sakta..


mom - kyaaa??


ridit - arey sirf main hi dekhunga kya use?? woh bhi to dekhegi na mujhe..


his mom slapped him lightly on his cheek..


mom - chal ja abb..


ridit apne room main aya aur usne rehan ko call kiya..


rehan - kya baat hai aaj bahot yaad aa rahi hai meri??


ridit - shut up!! ye bata ki sarakshi ka rishta kisse hone ja raha hai??


rehan - kyu??


ridit - yaar tu bhaav mat kha abb.. sabkuch to janta hai tu..


rehan - pehli baat ye ki mujhe pata nahi aur dusri baat ye ki abb kuch nahi ho sakta.. usse baat ki thi maine thodi der pehle aur woh shadi karne ka faisla le chuki hai..


ridit - jo janna chahta hoon woh pata karke bata..


rehan - sunn abb kuch nahi hoo sakta.. woh aaj shaam ko uss ladke se milne wali hai aur sarakshi ki taraf se to haan hi hai aur am sure milne ke baad woh ladka bhi haan kar dega..


ridit - bakwas mat kar.. aur haan ek baat kaan khol kar sunle sarakshi sirf meri hai!! abb jaldi pata karke bata woh kaha aur kisse milne wali hai..


ridit ne phone cut kar dia..


rehan(to himself) - abb kya karu?? kahin plan chaupat na hoo jae.. me bhi gadha hoon.. kya zarurat thi use batane ki ki sarakshi aaj uske wld be se milne wali hai.. par abb jawab to dena hoga na ridit ko.. rehan kuch kar betaaa..


rehan ne ridit ke papa ko phone kiya..


rehan - namaste uncle ji.. musibat hoo gayi hai.. ridit mujhse puch raha hai ki sarakshi kis ladke se aur kaha milne ja rahi hai.. abb kya kahu usse??


papa(after discussing with his wife) - usse keh de ki sarakshi aaj kisise nahi milne wali.. milna cancel hoo gaya..


rehan - ohh matlab woh aur ridit aaj nahi mil rahe??


papa - tumhe kya naukari rishwat deke mili thi??


rehan - umm sorry uncle ji.. main samajh gaya.. ridit ko sirf aisa batana hai taki woh kuch gadbad na kare.. samajh gaya samajh gaya.. waise main mumbai pahochne wala hoon bass..


papa - thik hai.. ridit jaise hi ghar se niklega main tumhe bata dunga..


rehan ne ridit ko call kiya aur jaisa mr mehra ne kaha tha waisa use bata diya..


ridit (to himself) - i must tell u ridit u r veryyy lucky!!



at gupta house --


sarakshi ki mom uske paas ayi..


mom - saru yeh le saree mene tere liye kharidi thi.. aaj tu yahi pehan ke jana..


sarakshi - mumma aap bhi chalogi na mere saath??


mom (after laughing) - buddhu.. main kya karungi tere saath chal kar?? hmm?? tu bilkul ghabra mat.. hum tuje aise hi kisi se milne thodi na bhej rahe hai akele.. bharosa rakh bachcha..


sarakshi - hmm..


mom - chal abb tu taiyaar hoja 1/2 ghante main nikalna hai na tujhe.. jaldi taiyaar hoke niche aa jana.. driver chod dega tuje.. aur yeh le uska number..


sarakshi - umm mumma kis naam se save karu??


mumma(after thinking) - prince..


sarakshi - kyaaa?? (she raised her eyebrow)


mumma - hmm.. naam usise puch lena..


mom ne sarakshi k sar pe pyaar se haath phera aur chali gayi..


sarakshi never applies makeup.. par aaj toh muh dhone ka bhi mann nahi kar raha tha uska.. she wanted to look ugliest possible.. but she knew she has taken such a drastic step just for her parents sake n now watever she will do she will do that for her parents..


wen she came downstairs she saw her parents looking at her affectionately.. she felt lump in her throat but she promised herself she wont cry atleast infront of her parents..


sarakshi(not looking into der eyes) - aap dono aise kyu dekh rahe hai mujhe??


papa - meri princess bahot pyaari lagg rahi hai.. bass ek hi chiz ki kami hai..


mom - kya kami hai?? meri beti bilkul perfect lagg rahi hai..


papa - bass ek muskaan ki kami hai jo pata nahi kaha kho gayi hai.. maine dhundne ki koshish to ki hai shayad abb mil jaye..


sarakshi was trying hard to supress her tears.. she managed to give a fake smile n quickly turned  face soo that her parents cant see her moist eyes..


sarakshi - main chalti hoon papa.. jaldi aa jaungi.. meri chinta mat karna..


here ridit too left for meeting THE girl.. 


restaurant ke bahar ridit ne kisiko paise diye..


person -  sir agar kuch gadbad hoo gayi toh??


ridit - arey kuch nahi hoga.. itna kyu ghabra raha hai?? ladki ko impress thodi na karna hai.. tu bass waise hi karna jaisa maine sikhaya.. woh khud-b-khud bhaag jaegi.. chal abb phone kar use..


sarakshi ne phone uthaya..


sarakshi - hello..(she was feeling awkward)


person - helll-lllooo jiii.. kem cheee??


sarakshi(to herself) - OMG!!


sarakshi - j j jii hello..


person - kem cheee madam?? jawab do ne..


sarakshi - kuch nai cheee..


person khud ghabra gaya.. ridit ne usko encourage kiya..


person - abe mane batawo ke tham kya che??


sarakshi - kya??


person - jagah, place, mane(means) ur locasssioonnn..


sarakshi ne usko reception pe ane ko kaha aur phone kaat diya..


person(to ridit) - sir kaha fasa rahe hoo.. jute khilwaoge aap..


ridit - arey me bol raha hoon na kuch nahi hoga.. woh ladki aisa kuch nahi karegi.. tu ghabra mat yaar..


person - sir aap jante hoo usko??


ridit - nahi.. (he smiled shamelessly) chal abb jaldi ja.. aur ye le gift le ja..


person - sir issme kya hai??


ridit - tere kaam ki cheez nahi hai.. bass usko de dena aur bolna mummy daddy ko chugali na kare aur jaise hi woh gift khole waha se bhaag jana..


person - sir meri to abhi tak shadi bhi nahi hui hai aur agar meri iss harkat k bare main ladkiyon ko pata chal gaya to kabhi hogi bhi nahi..


ridit - arey yaar kitna darta hai tuuu..


person - haan bass main hi darta hoon na.. aap bade sher hoo to jao khud de aao..


ridit - oye.. de ata main hi par agar meri mom ko pata chal gaya na to woh kaise bhi karke zabardasti meri shadi kara degi isse.. abhi kam se kam yeh bahana to rahega na ki mene kisi aur ko bhej ke aisa kiya aur phir woh ladki khud hi kabhi taiyaar nai hogi mujhse shadi ke liye.. sabb samjhana padta hai tuje.. aisa bhola rahega na to teri biwi bhi maregi tuje.. chal ja abb bilkul sher ki tarah.. vijayi bhava..


ridit ne usko bhej diya aur khud chupp kar live dekhne wala hai..


sarakshi ka muh dusri taraf tha isliye ridit usko pehchaan nahi paya par jaise hi woh person uske paas jakar khada hua woh palati aur ridit ko minor attack sa feel hua.. usko samajh nahi aa raha woh kare kya.. 


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person - hell-looo bole to aap hi ho ne wo jisse meri shaddi hone wali hai??


sarakshi - aap?? phone par??


person - haan jii me hi hoon wo jisse aap phone pe baat kar rahi thi thode waqt pele..


sarakshi - okk.. umm hiii(she saw the person frm head to toe n desparately wanted to give weird expressions but she had to control..)



actually ridit ne uss person ka pura huliya badalwaya tha.. itna dirtyyy banne ko bola ki koi dekhna bhi na chahe..



person - hii ne byee baad me karenge pele to aao kahin beth jate hai hoo.. aur tum muje bhuke pet yaha se jane mat dena hoo.. wo kya h ne k khana hamesaaa waqt pe hi khata hoon me hooo.. aur haan iss baar bill tum hi pay kar dena.. agli baar tum dogi ya me ek hi baat hogi hai ne??


sarakshi - yyyeahh.. (she faked a smile..)


sarakshi(to herself) - mumma papa ye kya dhundha mere liye.. ewww.. nahi sarakshi mumma papa ne kuch soch samajhkar hi itna bada faisla liya hoga.. aur waise bhi tu pehle hi haan kar chuki hai abb sochne ka sawal hi nahi uthta..


ridit bahar khada hokar kabhi khudko to kabhi uss person ko koss raha tha tabhi kisine uske kandhe par haath rakha.. he turned n was shocked to see rehan infront of him..


ridit - oye tu to nahi ane wala tha na??


rehan - haan.. par jab raat ko tujse tera hal-e-dil suna to raha nahi gaya.. aur phir pune se mumbai ane main waqt hi kitna lagta hai..


aur phir ek ek karke ridit k papa mumma aur sarakshi k papa mumma bhi ridit k saamne aakar khade hoo gaye.. ridit ki mom ne ridit ka kaan pakda zorr se..


mom - nalayak.. kya harkat hai ye?? kaha tha na mene koi shararat mat karna hmm??


ridit - mom mene bhi to kaha tha me usse kuch nahi kahunga.. see me usse mila hi nahi.. abb plsss kaan chod doo plsss..


mom ne kaan chod diya par she is still angry..


rehan - ridit apne hone wale saas-sasur ke peir to chu le nalayak.. (he said indicating towards sarakshi's parents in order to let him know who they are..)


ridit - samjha!! too aap sabb ne milkar mera popat kiya.. haina??


rehan - beta popat to tu apna itne saalo se karata aa raha hai.. tu bhi aur teri sarakshi bhi.. hehe.. ek number ke gadhe hoo tum dono sach me!! aur aaj bhi jab hum logo ne itni mehnat karke tum dono ko milana chaha to tune apni bandbuddhi ka istemaal kar liya..


ridit was feeling stupid.. usko abb sabb samajh aa gaya tha..


ridit - acha aap log yahi ruko me apni sarakshi se milke ata hoon..


he tried to escape but rehan ne pakad liya uskoo..


rehan - kaha ja raha hai mera laal mera peela.. jo b tune plan kiya hai na wo sabb execute bhi ho jane de na.. hum bhi to dekhe teri bandbuddhi ka kamaal..


ridit - dekh rehan waise hi meri love story complicated hai upar se agr abhi isi waqt mene sabb roka nahi na to ye complicacy k sare records tod degi..


rehan - naah.. abb to tuje bilkul nahi jane dunga..


sabb andar ka nazara dekh rahe hai..


uss person ne dher sara khana order kar liya.. usko khate dekh sarakshi ko lagg raha tha ki woh abb zindagi me kabhi khana nahi kha paegi..


khate khate usse person ne jhoothe haatho se gift utha liya


person - ben tumne apna naam nai bataya muje??


sarakshi - ben??


person(after laughing) - ohh soryyy hoo galati se tumko ben bol diya.. (he blushed)


sarakshi made a face..


sarakshi - mera naam sarakshi hai..


person - arey waah kitna badiya naam hai saraksiii


sarakshi - its sarakSHI not siii.. umm forget it.. huh!!


person - ho ho ho(he laughed) ye huh kya h hon?? pagaliii hehe.. chalo wo sabb chodo pele ye gipht laya hoon ne me tumhare liye wo kholke dekho..


the moment she removed the gift wrapper n opened the box a pichkari kind of thing popped out n splashed stinking water on her..  ridit's father n sarakshi's parents were laughing but his mom was fuming with anger.. ridit hid his face..


person - o ben muje maaf karna ho.. aur apne mummy pappa ko chugali mat karna hoo.. abi me chalta hoon.. (saying this that person literally ran awayyy)


sarakshi bass rone hi wali hai..


sabb log sarakshi k paas aye.. sarakshi was shocked to see ridit with her parents n her wld be inlaws.. 


ridit (bending on his knees) - am sorry sarakshi(holding his ears) muje nahi pata tha ki tum ho.. wo ye sabb jo tumhare saath hua wo mene plan kiya tha par muje nahi pata tha wo tum ho.. am really sorry sarakshi (he said while making a puppy like innocent face..)


sarakshi ko kuch bhi samajh nahi aa raha aur yeh ridit ko samajh aa gaya..


ridit - actually sweetheart(all raised eyebrow n sarakshi blushed) ye sabb inn logo ka plan tha hamari complicated state ko simplify karna ka.. baki sabb me tumhe baad me bhi bata sakta hoon detail me.. par abhi mere paas sirf 1 hour hai sarakshi.. n i want to spend this tym with u.. bahot kuch kehna hai aur clear karna hai..


ridit's father - tum dono araam se baat karo hum sabb jate hai yaha se..


ridit(extra sweetly) - nahi papa aap log yaha rukiye na.. bethiye plss.. me sarakshi ko apne saath le ja raha hoon kuch der k liye..


bina kisiki permission ka intezaar kiye ridit usko lekar chala gaya.. iss bich sarakshi jo ho raha tha use hone de rahi thi.. now she wants to live in present which is much more beautiful than anything..




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hello frnds.. EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed Embarrassed EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed LOLTongue me to hu hi besharm.. LOL well i want to thank all of u for waiting for the update patiently.. i didnt receive any rotten tomato, potato, egg, chappal, jhuta, belan, crockery, etc etc.. EmbarrassedLOL


bhul gaye ho to bata du am nandini mathur saab's BlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingLOLLOL

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Posted: 21 June 2011 at 1:33pm | IP Logged
I love Ridit...Blushing

Nahi seriously...tujhe panga lene ke liye nahi keh rahi hu...mujhe iss part me sach me wo bahuuuttt zyada achha laga!!EmbarrassedEmbarrassed Uske tactics...gosh!!LOLLOL Kya kya karta hai...LOL

But come to think of it...ye sab tune likha hai...and tu to hai hi pagal...hai na?LOLLOL To isse kam kuch thodi likhegi...LOLLOLLOL

So Ridit ne apni jagah kisi aur ko bhej diya and Sarakshi was almost abt to cry!!LOLLOL Now dont think am mean...uske rone pe nahi hass rahi hu main...main to Ridit ki smartness pe khush hu...Big smileBig smile...wo bhi meri tarah...bachpan se smart hai!!Wink

But finally he got to knw wat it was all abt...LOLLOL...game sirf wo nahi...baki log bhi khel sakte hai...LOLLOL I guess he wud have argued wid them for all this drama...lekin bechare ke paas tym kam tha na...to romance Sarakshi...isliye argue kiye bina usne wo kiya jo sabse zaruri tha...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed...and andar Sarakshi ka expression sochke mujhe phirse hassi aa gayi...LOLLOL

U better hav sum sweet cute romantic scenes btwn them...hamesha bas jhagarte hi rahe dono...LOLLOL...now w8ing for the next part, huh!!Wink

And I LOVE RAJEEV!!! Embarrassed

Gr8 to have u back stupid,
Summu. Hug


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Posted: 21 June 2011 at 9:13pm | IP Logged
Nandu!!! Ab bata main tera kya karoon???
Kabhi toh aati hai achanak se...ek badhiyaaasa update deti hai aur utne hi jaldi bhaag bhi jaati hai...
ladki pakad mein nahi aati !! warna itna late update karne keliye main teri achchi khabar leti !!!
khair koi gal nahi...
and lemme tell u the update was superrrbbb ! and i loved it !!
continue soon !!! 
and soon means REAL soon ! LOL

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Posted: 21 June 2011 at 9:48pm | IP Logged
damn cool
loved it

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Posted: 21 June 2011 at 10:15pm | IP Logged
Hi... Mathur Saab's Nandini TongueTongueTongue...now i know why Nandini didn't have a dialogue  LOLLOL... nandini Blushing ki bolti jo band ho gayi hogi LOLLOLLOL ...

coming to Ridit EmbarrassedEmbarrassed... good to see him after long time EmbarrassedEmbarrassed ... & his plan ROFL ... my god...LOLLOLLOL ... must say very Smart Ridit LOLLOLLOL...but his parents are smarter than him LOLLOLLOL...bechare ka popat kar diya LOLLOLLOLLOL...

wud like to know where exactly ridit took Saraksii  LOLLOL...& usko bahot sari baatein karni hai LOLLOLLOL...wat baatein Wink Wink... will the boy will be able to talk LOLLOLLOL...

continue soon TongueTongue

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Hi Nandu

Where were u yaar??? It has been a really long timeBig smile
Update was just wonderful and loved it completelyClapClapClap
 
Ridit as usual was busy in complicating his love story further by using his band buddhi dimaag according to Rehan..well said!!ClapClapClap
Sarakshi was horrified to meet the guy..Ridit is really too much..itna ganda banane ki kya zaroorat thiROFLROFL
He was so shocked to see Sarakshi in the restaurant with that guy.. and then he almost fainted when he saw his parents along with Sarakshi's and Rehan to..ShockedLOLLOLLOL
His mom was really angry after seeing that gift LOL
finally Ridit did the right thing when he took away Sarakshi with him...Big smileLOL
 
Pls continue soon
Bye
 
 


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awesome update...loved it

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wow you are hereAngry tnx for letting us know that you are existed on ifLOL mathur saab ki nandini ko blushing karte hue 2 weeks lag gaye ki wo sharmaate sharmaate update karna bhi bhul gayinWink  ladaai baad me karte hain update ki baat karte hainTongue update was superb and fantasticClap lekin update yahin per kyun rokaDeadDead ab aise hi achche waale updates jaldi jaldi karna ppplllsssEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
update soon 
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