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Its complicated!! (FF on Rajeev) part 15 pg 63 (Page 5)

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 10:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Revolutionbreez

nice intro nandu !!!Big smile thank u manaliiii.. Big smile
but ab aage jaldi continue karo...  thank u for commenting.. Embarrassed

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 10:05am | IP Logged
veryyyyyyy complictd titleeeeeeee u c............;)
hope that u remember me.....mujhe bhool to nai gayi na.. i mn i'm also honestly n truely reader of ur fic...
well nice concept ..i mn hamara rajeev is sooooooo young na so isliye...
well let me clear my imagination this time also.
well here again main lead will be rajeev n aamna for me;)u understand na..i cnt help:) welll eagerly waiting for fic start so pls dearrrrr try na n cont it a.s.a.p...
keep smiling!!!

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 10:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by suhana_dixit

Hi Nandini hii dii.. Big smile 
How r u?? am gud.. aap kaisi hoo?? Big smile
 
Firstly add me in your pm list soon..Smile already did.. Big smile
Now coming to the fiction the title is very different and I hope the story will b interesting too.Big smile hehe.. abb kya bolu main?? LOLLOL
Rajeev plays Ridit here(nice name) and who is playing Rehan?? waise to i imagined iqbal khan(aka angad of KYPH) but aap jisko imagine karna hoo karlo.. LOL
anyways Ridit is not happy to leave his school but he has to...he seems to b a perfect gentleman but most of the people dont really understand him..Smile
U have written a very short part ..next time it shud b long enoughBig smile i will try.. Tongue
 
Pls continue soon hmm.. Big smile
Bye bye n thank u soooooo much for commenting.. Hug

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 10:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by pinky901

veryyyyyyy complictd titleeeeeeee u c............;) mene socha na isliye.. LOLLOL
hope that u remember me.....mujhe bhool to nai gayi na.. nahi.. aap bhi yaad hoo aur apna promise bhi yaad hai mujhe.. Big smile i mn i'm also honestly n truely reader of ur fic... thank u soo much pinky.. Embarrassed
well nice concept .. thanks.. Big smile i mn hamara rajeev is sooooooo young na so isliye... hehe.. Tongue
well let me clear my imagination this time also.
well here again main lead will be rajeev n aamna for me;)u understand na..i cnt help:) welll eagerly waiting for fic start so pls dearrrrr try na n cont it a.s.a.p... i will try to UD today only.. Big smile
keep smiling!!! u too.. n thanks for commenting..  Big smile

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 10:15am | IP Logged
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Originally posted by ladybird9

Hug Lovely introduction Nandini Thumbs Up looking forward to the rest of the story...Day Dreaming jaldi karoo I can't wait.....EmbarrassedApprove


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hiii shivani(mommyyyyyyy) Hug thank u sooooooooo much for commenting.. Big smile love u.. muahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh..  Hug

Hug muaaaahhhhhhh Hug Love U 2(much) HugSmile

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 11:02am | IP Logged
hinal, sweetangel(sana), revolutionbreez(manali), aamirkhanfan, pinky, rituka, suhana dii, maanmishti, ronojoy_ria, golu, sumaiya, spvd(deepa), ladybird9(shivani), ansar ji, monika, puri, chinmayi, oliveya thanks for pressing the like button..  Big smile




Part 2



ridit n rehan both got selected in IIT and got admission in IIT guwahati.. rehan was all prepared to do everything except study i.e. attending classes.. but as always he was bound to follow wat ridit decided for them..

rehan - kya re ridit abb kya college me b hum regularly classes attend karenge??(he was making faces..)

ridit(with full attitude) - bro agar attendance kam hui na toh parents ko phone kar dia jaega.. hum bunk karenge magar jb tak jhel sakte hai tb tak jhelenge kyuni yeh IIT hai koi mazak nahi.. aur waise bhi u know na meri kisi faculty se patne wali nahi.. aaj first day first show dekhle phir aa jaenge na apni wali pe.. jaldi bhi kya h.. abhi to bahot tym hai aish karne k liye..

rehan - haan waise baat to teri sahi h.. class me jaenge tabhi to pata chalega apne layak koi item h bhi ya nahi..(he said dreamingly..)

ridit gave him a disgusted look..

ridit n rehan were standing near the display board.. tabhi ek hairaan pareshan si, dikhne me ekdum bholi bhali dari sehmi si ladki dikhi.. shayad woh b classroom dhund rahi thi apna.. usne display board pe apna classroom no. dekha.. ridit n rehan guessed that she is in der class only.. both felt like helping her as she seemed very innocent..

rehan - excuse me.. can i help u..

girl(she was almost in tears) - do u know where is classroom no. 18??

rehan - noo.. but we belong to same class.. soo if u want u cn come with us.. we will find it together.. n dnt take tension class wont start soo soon..

girl - okk..(she was a bit relieved now..)

rehan(while walking) - tumhara naam kya h waise??

girl - sarakshi gupta.. aur aapka??

rehan - rehan sharma.. aur yeh mera dost ridit mehra..

ridit - nice to meet u..

sarakshi just smiled..

 

rehan ' kaha ki rehne wali hoo aap??

 

Sarakshi 'mumbai.. aur aap??

 

Rehan ' wat a coincidence hum dono bhi Mumbai se h..

 

Sarakshi ' that's grt!!

rehan(suddenly) - yessssss!!! wo raha 18!!!!!!!


sarakshi - yayyyyyy!! mil gaya.. thank u rehan.. (she said like a 3 yr old kid)


rehan - my pleasure.. chalo andar chalke dekh liya jae Mr. ridit k layak class h bhi ya nahi..


sarakshi giggled.. first two rows were empty.. rehan aur ridit jaldi se sabse last row me jakar baith gaye.. rehan ne sarakshi ko bhi last row me ane ko kaha but she refused.. she chose to sit in second row first seat.. its her fav seat since school days.. she always prefers to sit on second bench.. soon more girls came in n now the third row was third, second was second n first was first..


sarakshi (to herself) - kitni padhaku lag rahi h sabb.. kaha phass gayi main..


she turned n saw rehan laughing at her.. as if he understood wat sarakshi was thinking..


"Good morning class"  mam entered the room n greeted the class.. but nobody greeted her back..


"I said good morning class" again nobody replied..


"GOOD MORNING STUDENTSSSSSSSS" now the whole class wished her in unison..


ridit(to rehan) - wow am impressed..


mam continued - baccho aaj apka pehla din h isliye aaj introduction aur kal se regular classes lagegi.. abhi thodi der main vyas sir ayenge aur wo aapko college library aur student section kaha h ye bata denge..


tabhi somebody yelled - "aur canteen madam??"


mam preffered to ignore.. she gave few more instructions n then left the class without taking the intoduction of students..


sarakshi ka zara bhi mann nahi lagg raha tha class main..


lunch break -


sarakshi bass bahar jane hi wali thi tabhi rehan ne usko rukne ka bola..


rehan - aur miss padhaku second bench pe kesa laga??


sarakshi - mazak mat udha.. itti piche jakar b kya maza aa gaya.. mujhe to waha dekhne me bhi ajeeb lagg raha tha.. kaise kaise gunde type students h.. tumlog unse frndship mat karna.. ache nahi h wo log..(she said cutely..)


ridit n sarakshi were nt talking to each other bt they were stealing glances at each other..


rehan - chal canteen chalte h..


sarakshi - naiiiiiii.. canteen?????? pagal h kya?? seniors honge waha..


rehan - darpok.. hum h na..


sarakshi - nai waise b mujhe nahi jana canteen vanteen.. typical cllg student nai banna muje.. mess main hi kha lungi main..


rehan - heroine chup chap chal..


sarakshi - hooooooo tu kuch b bolta h.. muje baat ni karni tujse.. katti!! huh!!


ridit(to himself) - isko admission kisne diya?? bachchi h bachchi..


rehan - are heroine hi to bola.. tu pehli ladki hogi jise heroine sunke gussa aa raha h.. (he laughed n she made a face..)


ridit was quietly sitting on the desk n was watching all this..


rehan - acha chal nahi jate canteen bass.. par bhuk bahot lagi h hum dono ko.. kya kare??


sarakshi - aur muje b to bhook lagi h.. par canteen?? naiiii.. umm acha chalo.. par agr muje aaj acha nai laga na to phir hum nai jaenge.. okk??


rehan - okk mam..


ridit - not okk.. rehan kya h yaar.. tuje nai ana to mat aa main ja raha hoon..


sarakshi felt extreeeeeeemely bad.. extra bad coz he said dis.. he didnt care abt her.. for him she doesnt exist.. and it hurted her, hurted her a lot.. she felt like crying.. she doesnt hv feelings for him, how cn it be possible wen they just met before 4 hrs n usme b they never talked thats wat she kept telling herself.. she was disturbed n was nt able to concentrate in any lecture.. she even forgot to stand up n give intro wen her chance came..


ridit n rehan both knew she is disturbd bcoz of ridit's behaviour..


the hostel rooms are one seater.. but rehan is in ridit's room only..


ridit - yaar mene aisa b kya keh diya tha ki usko itna bura lagg gaya..


rehan - wahi to main soch raha hoon..


ridit - bahot sensitive lagti h yeh chori.. touch me not types..


rehan - acha beta bht observe kiya lagta h.. hmm kya baat h?? waise b sochne wali baat to h ki tune use kuch nahi kaha par tu chala gaya isliye use itnaaaaaaa bura laga.. aur tu b use pareshan dekh k kabse pareshaan ho raha h.. hmm kuch to gadbad h..


ridit(showing fake anger) - hamesha bakwas hi karni h na tuje.. aur kuch sujta h tuje??


rehan - nahii hihihi..


ridit - hihihi(imitating him).. pagal!!(he gave a serious look n then both burst out laughing..)





hiii mere pyaare readers.. LOL dekho maine kitni jaldi UD kiya.. Approve abb chalo jaldi jaldi comment bhi kardo.. phir main jaldi jaldi 3rd part bhi post kar dungi.. Evil Smile LOL eagerlyyyyyyyyyy waiting for ur precious comments.. tata, gn, sd.. Big smile



Love

Nandini



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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 11:20am | IP Logged
great update......

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 11:21am | IP Logged
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lovely really nice intro
continue soon



hii hinal.. thank u soo much for commenting.. Big smile i always wanted to read ur comments in Me n my.. Big smile
i am really very sorry woh exams chal rahe the to mein bass UD padh ke like button press karti thi. phir socha ke exams ke baad kar dungi par time he nahi mila par iss baar mein try karungi ke comment kar saku.
 
 
2nd part was really nice. ab to heroine ke bhi entry hogai.
lovely intro if heroine too.

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