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Its complicated!! (FF on Rajeev) part 15 pg 63 (Page 44)

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ridit saturday ko ghar aya..



ridit's mom(to herself) - tu kitna nakhush hai ye tere chehre se dikh raha hai ridit.. sab kuch kho diya hoo aisi shakl bana rakhi hai.. aur woh sarakshi bhi aisi hi surat banake baithi hai.. tum dono pagal hoo.. sabb kuch itna complicate karne ki kya zarurat thi tum dono ko.. tu samajh nahi paya ridit ki sarakshi ki nafrat asal me uska pyaar h.. frustration hai ki woh jo tujse expect karti hai tu woh nahi karta.. tu uske pyaar ko samajh nahi pata aur iss frustration ko woh nafrat se zahir karti hai.. khair jo  kadam humne uthaya hai usse tumdono ko jaldi apne pyaar ka ehsaas hoo jayega..


ridit apne room me baitha tha.. lappy pe kuch kaam kar raha tha.. uski mom aakar baithi uske paas.. 


mom - busy hai??


ridit - nahi.. am always free for u mumma.. muje aapki gaud main sir rakhke sona hai.. sar bahot bhari hoo raha hai..



mom - yeh bhi koi puchne ki baat hai.. 



ridit mumma ki gaud me sar rakhke lait gaya.. abb kuch sukun mila use..



mom - kab jana hai wapas??



ridit - kal shaam ko.. 8 baje flight hai..



mom - acha to phir uss ladki se kab milega?? 



ridit(to himself) - kabhi nahi.. kaash aisa keh sakta.. kya karunga milke?? kya bolunga?? am not interested mummaaaaaaaa.. agr aaj mila to aisa na ho ki kal bhi milna padh jaye.. ohhh noooooo yeh families bhi na.. koi na koi zarur dimaag chala lega ki ladka chennai me job karta hai baar baar kaha ana ho payega.. 2 din h yaha to ache se mulaqat ho jani chahiye.. blah blah.. kya karu?? umm idea!!



ridit - mumma aaj nahi plss bahot thak gaya hoon.. thik se baat bhi nahi kar paunga.. aur kuch ulta sidha bol diya toh 



mom - chal thik hai phir kal subah ka bol deti hoon..



ridit - nahiiiiii.. subah me milne ja raha hoon wo wo mere kuch frnds bhi aye hue hai.. kafi waqt se mila nahi aur phir aksar sabb saath ghar nahi aye hue hote hai.. isliye sabb kal subah mil rahe hai.. 



mom - to phir?? shaam ko to tu ja raha hai na??



ridit - haan mom(he said making an innocent face) umm 



mom - beta phir kab milega bata??



ridit - umm kal shaam ko airport pe?? me thoda jaldi nikal jaunga.. wahi baat hoo jaegi.. only if u like the idea(he said cutely) warna main aaj shaam ko hi mil lunga though am extremely tired..(he again made an innocent face) but anything for u mom.. (he very well knew how to make his mom do wat he want.. he was sure that his mom wld postpone the meeting.. but this tym his mom was one step ahead than him.. n he was completely unaware!!)



mom - thik hai.. main keh dungi unse.. waise acha to nahi lagta iss tarah airport pe bulana par abb kiya bhi kya ja sakta hai..(ridit's plan failed n he was twisting his lips..) main uski tasveer la deti hoon pehchanne me asaani hogi.. aur tune to uska naam tak



ridit(cutting her) - no need mom.. just give me her number.. me contact kar lunga usko.. haan bass ane ka aap bata dena.. baki i will handle..



mom chali gayi.. she knew ridit ne kaha hai to zarur milega.. though she cld smell something fishy.. but she was relieved as she wanted him to see her once..



ridit(to himself) - aapne kaha hai to pakka milunga par kitni der k liye yeh i will decide.. am sorry mom par main majbur hoon.. bahot uljha hua hoon..


ridit ki mom ne sarakshi ki mom ko sabb bataya.. par abb ek nayi tension ye khadi hoo gayi ki sarakshi milne ke liye mushkil se mani thi par kya woh AIRPORT jane k liye manegi??



sarakshi ki mom uske room me gayi baat karne.. sarakshi apne room me muh phulae baithi thi.. uski mom k liye sarakshi ko aise dekhna koi nayi baat nahi hai.. 



mom - saru abb kya hoo gaya??


sarakshi - abb kya manwane ayi hoo aap??(she said rudely..)



mom - bahot badtameez hoo gayi hai tu.. maa baap se sidhe muh baat tak nahi karti.. har pal tere bhale k liye hi to sochte rehte hai hum dono.. tere alawa aur kaun hai jiske liye jiye hum?? na jane kya hua hai tuje.. yaad bhi hai tuje ki akhri baar kab haske muskurake baat ki thi tune?? janti hai na teri bass teri khushi mayne rakhte hai hamare liye.. tuje hasta dekhne k liye taras gaye hai hum.. 



sarakshi started crying.. 



her mom too started crying seeing her..



mom - main bass yeh batane ayi thi ki kal tuje uss ladke se milne jana hai airport.. par abb hum tuje kuch nahi kahenge.. tere jo jee main aye woh kar.. jaise jina hai waise jee.. apna koi faisla thopna nahi chahte hum.. bass teri khushi chahte hai par dikh raha hai tu isse zara bhi khush nahi hai.. aajse teri zindagi main dakhal nahi denge hum..



sarakshi ki mom uth kar jane lagi.. though she knew her daughter will stop her..



sarakshi - kal kitni baje jana hai usse milne?? n i want to marry him mom.. i will do watever u decide for me.. i love u n papa a lot.. both of u r my life..



she turned towards her daughter n hugged her..



mom - humne tere liye kuch galat nahi socha hai beta.. tu khud jaldi hi jaan jaegi..



sarakshi - i trust u mom..



mom chali gayi.. n then sarakshi locked the door n sat on floor.. tears were rolling down her cheeks.. she was cursing herself for agreeing for this.. but she herself knew how much her parents are worried..



"i cant give more pain to my parents bcoz of u ridit.. mere parents ne hamesha mere bare main socha hai hamesha khushi dii hai muje aur tumne hamesha dard.. i hate u ridit.. i soo hate u.."



dining table pe ridit was playing with food..



ridit's father - yeh kya kar rahe hoo ridit?? ladki se kal milna hai aur abhi se mann nahi lagg raha hmm?? 



ridit - papa plss.. muje bhook nahi hai bass isiliye..



papa - ohh matlab bhook pyaas sabb gayab?? hota hai hota hai.. dhire dhire neend bhi udd jaegi.. (his father laughed..)



ridit - papa y r u pulling my leg?? bhook nahi hai to nahi hai.. aap dono na haath dhoke mere peeche padh gaye hoo.. aur waise bhi abb mujhe bahot bhook lagg rahi hai so let me eat peacefully.. waise bhi waha tasty khana khane ko tarasta hoon..



ridit engrossed himself in eating in order to save himself frm der teasings..



ridit's father n mom looked at each other n smiled..



after some time ridit was standing near the window of his room..he was feeling restless..



"mom se wada to kar dia magar main yeh rishta kaise nibha paunga nahi janta.. sarakshi ko bhul pana namumkin sa lagta hai may be coz main kabhi izhaar nahi kar paya aur yeh baat hamesha mere dil main hi reh jaegi.. pyaar ka ehsaas hone mein bahot der hoo gayi.. janta hoon woh muje pasand nahi karti aur agr izhaar kiya tab bhi uska jawab na hi hoga magar kam se kam dil pe yeh bhoj to na hota ki maine ek baar bhi koshish tak nahi ki.. par abb maine khud apne haatho har darwaza bandh kar diya.."



her cute smiling face was coming again n again infront of his eyes.. he had even started imagining her near him n no need to say his condition was "complicated"..




hiiiiiii readers.. Big smile i know itne din ud na karne ke liye sorry word bahot chota hai.. Ouch par kya karu isse bada word meko kisine sikhaya hi nahi.. CryLOLLOL  aur haan ye part b chota tha kya?? Ouch ye to mene 2 parts ko merge karke post kiya h yaar.. ConfusedLOL abb chota hai to hai me kya karu me to bht pehle hii  parts likh chuki hoon ApproveLOLLOL abb next 2-3 parts b pehle se hi likhe hue hai to chota tha bada chahiye ka koi mtlb hi nahi..Wink isiliye to muje sunayi b nahi deta.. LOL waiting to read aap sabki commentssssssssssss Hug LOL



love

Nandini Big smile



Edited by ~~~~ - 27 February 2011 at 1:19pm

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 1:49pm | IP Logged
Thumbs Up lovely update worth the wait...can u plzz telll 2 things...one when is ur next ud n 2) when r they both gg 2 see each otherEmbarrassedLOL n i'm hopeful, ur gg 2 b honest 2 me..Wink Love UHeart

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 2:03pm | IP Logged
Awesome part hun
Loved it

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 2:15pm | IP Logged
hi
the up is good
so ridit came back to his hometown and now his condition is worse as his mom is forcing him to meet the girl whom they choose for him
but ridit he loves sarakshi and even cant tell this to his mom about his feeling haai becchara isliye usne plan bana liya ke woh us larki ko airport pe mile par ridit mom toh maan gaye aur ridit aur sarakshi ke mulaqat ab airport pe hoge
plz cont soon and pm me

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 7:50pm | IP Logged
nice part....

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 7:55pm | IP Logged
lovely update...........waiting eagerly for their meeting

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 8:01pm | IP Logged

Hi Nandini

How r u??
Update was really nice and cute..Yeh Ridit apni life khud hi complicate kar raha hai..if he wud have met Sarakshi then his life wud have taken an entire U turn but nahin inki akal kuchh zyaada hi chalti hai..IITian hone ka ek plus point to hai hi..he knew how to manipulate things according to him..LOLLOLLOL
but his mother was one step aheadLOLWink she arranged his meeting in airport only.
Sarakshi too gave up her consent to meet Ridit coz she has already given up any hope regarding Ridit..Cry
Ridit's was so irritated with his dad's teasings..Wink
Ridit is so much in love with Sarakshi and so is she..Their parents r aware of their state now lets see wat happens when these two meet in the airport..
I seriously hope they dont spoil the things this time..LOLLOL
 
Pls continue soon
Bye


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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 8:15pm | IP Logged
Hii sweetu....part bahut achha tha....and darn.....Ridit is gonna regret hard for his over working mind....haha. I am awaiting the tym when they face each other....whoa....pata nahi kya hoga?? As for the part's length is concerned....I dont think isse zyada tujhse hoga....so will let that be.

Now an imp thing....next tym se shayad mera comment nahi hoga....zyada se zyada ek 'like' hoga......boards nazdik hai na....chal all the best wish kar....hehe!!

But anyways....jaldi se RS ko mila de....will try to peep in the story whenever I can....bye!!

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