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Its complicated!! (FF on Rajeev) part 15 pg 63 (Page 13)

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 10:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ronojoy_ria

hi hi ria.. Big smile
the up is good thank u.. Big smile
so ridit aur rehan sarakshi ke saath ab aur bhi log shamil ho gaye
par yaar yeh ridit aur sarakshi ek dusre se bilkul pasand nahin karte
sakrashi is character is really confusing woh studious bhi nahin haai aur nahin bindas aur on the otherside ridit is very studious as well as friend loving
sarashi rehen ke liye laddo dene boy hostel chali sach mein us mein dimaag he nahin
par thank god ridit ne usse samal liya warna
ab dekhte haai kya hota haai aagee
plz cont soon and pm me hmm pakka.. Big smile thank u for reading n commenting.. Big smile

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 10:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by pinky901

very interesting part dear  thanks pinky.. Embarrassed
i really really like the concept yaar kitna maza hai... thank u sooo much for liking it.. Embarrassed
well really like this cold war b/w the duo hehe.. loved this line.. Tongue
so saraskhi hav so many frnds .both type..studious + fun loving so she must havin gala times of her life but ya hw cn she realise this na..i mn jab baat dil ki ho aur us specific person ki ho jisse hum na chahte we bhi  chahte hai ki baat ho aur chakar bhi nahi chahte ki milna ho so.... lovely.. Big smile
well i really like the scene when she dares to enter in the 'boy's hostel'wo bhi akele.. hehe.. but yaar agar wo aise nai karti to ridhit se itniiiiiii pyari baat kaise karti but ha finally rehan ko aana tha aur uki convo ka mis convo main badlana tha so all the misunderstanding game started n reach to this level hmm.so uhe bhi ye pata hai ki ek dusre se kuch prob hai but kya wo na jane kab jane ge ye log..i jus want thm to be together wo bhi abhi se..jus 3 parts main hi hahaha ..its really lovely fic yaar..pls cont soo soon dear..it really make me feel high... loved ur comment sweetie.. Big smile thanks for reading n commenting.. Big smile
brilliant work dear. thank u.. Embarrassed
or ha saraskhi ka pata nai but i to luvvvvvv mumma's haath ladooo hehe.. shoooo shweeet.. Big smile

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 10:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ansarSsssS

nice  Nandni jee,,Clap thank u.. Big smile
sory main late ho geyaLOL its okk.. Big smile
par main ne dono part read kar liye,,thanks por the PM,,,Smile
thank u for reading n commenting.. Big smile

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 10:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by spvd

Happy Republic Day to u too dear....................
nice part............... thanks.. Big smile
ridit and sarakshi's bond is very ajeeb..................... its complicated.. ROFL
even in their awkwardness and hatred theres something very strongly brewing.........................cont soon dear..................... thank u for reading n commenting deepa.. Big smile

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 10:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ladybird9

I am new to this interaction and i loved the feelings expressed by Suhana, Pinky and RiaBig smile, I cant pen down anything specifically rt now...but I am excited 2 see how this story moves. looking forward.to next part.....hopefully  soon Day Dreaming



u r shooooooooooo cuteeeeeeeeeeeee shivani.. Big smile u always express wat u feel n i really like this quality of urs.. Big smile Hug

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 11:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by PrincessFlavia

Hi Nandini... hi guglu.. gud to see u here.. Big smile

Read all the parts.... so sweet of u.. Big smile really very  nice... thanks Big smile par exam ke baad dhang se comment karungi....haan haan..LOL all the best for ur exam.. Big smile 4 more papers to go.... m bored now.....exam me bore hoo gayi?? ShockedLOLLOL but comments pakka,...okk...??? okk sweetie.. Big smile thank u for reading n commenting.. Big smile

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 11:24am | IP Logged
natasha, chanmayi , hinal, pinky, rituka, oliveya, suhana dii, maanmishti, aamirkhanfan, sumaiya, deepa(spvd), monika, shivani(ladybird9), ansar thank u soooooooooooooooo much for pressing the like button.. Big smile




Part 4

 


next day in lab –

 

sarakshi se galati se circuit me ek wire nikal gaya.. n she was clueless wat to do.. she knew agr neeta mam ko pata chala to she will almost force her to die with shame.. hehe.. rehan dusre grp me hai aur apne grp me sarakshi akeli ladki hai aur woh kisiko nahi pehchanti siwae RIDIT k.. ridit aur grp k baki ladke baatein karne me busy hai aur kisika dhyan anhi hai ki experiment kit ke saath kya hoo chukka hai..

 

sarakshi is quietly standing near the kit n is making various kinds of faces.. she even tried to tell rehan but she was afraid agr mam ya grp k baki ladko ne sunn liya to madad to koi nahi karenge aur sunaege alag specially Mr perfect Ridit..

 

sarakshi (to herself) – kya kare k na kare ye kaisi mushkil haye.. ridit plssssssssss plsssssssssss pehli aur akhri baar galati se hi sahi meri madad kar do aur plss bina gussa dikhae plssssss.. I promise main umm noo noo promise plss.. aise hi madad kar do pls ridit pls.. tum bahot ache hoo bahot samajhdar hoo.. har semester me tum hi top karoge aisi main dua dungi.. abb to madad kar doo.. sunn loooooo meri pukaar.. hey ridit kripaya meri awaaz sunoo aise

 

n she got a shock of her life wen she heard mam's voice..

 

mam – kya hoo raha hai yaha par??

 

sarakshi(to herself) – ohh nooo abb yeh guwahati ki species mujhe kisiko muh dikhane layak nahi chodegi.. she is lucky she got a chance to insult me.. mam aap bhi kya yaad rakhogi ki kiski insult karne ka saubhagya mila tha.. mummmyyyyyy muje bachaoooooooo.. nahiiiiiiii.. uhhhuuhhhuuuuuuuuuu..(fake crying)

 

she was too scared to even look at mam's face..

 

tabhi her saviour came..

 

saviour – mam actually we all were one by one observing the circuit.. actually we decided that we will observe it carefully n then all will discuss on how to simplify it n make it more efficient..(he said with confidence)

 

mam seemed impressed..

 

mam – hmm.. gud.. go ahead then.. (she proceeded towards the next grp but turned bak n…….) u r enthusiastic abt wat u r doing.. that's a gud sign I tell u.. always keep this enthusiasm alive in u then only u will be able to survive here in IIT ridit.. n yess give some piece of mind to others too who r simply directionless n r wasting der n our time too.. (she said looking towards sarakshi..)

 

ridit tried hard to suppress his laughter but then sarakshi noticed it.. n was damn damn damnnnnnnnn angry on him.. she even forgot to thank her saviour.. or may be she was tooo angry at him..

 

sarakshi(to herself) – I soooooooo hate u Mr ridit.. u r too full of urself.. huh!!

 

Ridit enjoyed her expression though he felt bad for her deep inside..

 

sarakshi didn't attend the last two lectures which were of that lab wali mam n went to her room n locked herself.. she was fuming with anger.. she drew various ugly cartoons n pasted them on the display board of her room.. she even pasted a slip (writing RIDIOT on it)  above those cartoons.. she even made photo of that mam n made mustache, scar, covered her one eye, n drew horns on her head  n pasted that photo too on the display board n gave it title "krur singh gabbar/CHAMPAKALI"

 

next day she was scared as she will again get scolded by that guwahati species bcoz of nt attending her lecture..

 

just before her lecture sarakshi almost ran towards the last bench n sat near ridit as only that seat was vacant..

 

sarakshi(to herself) – koi nai.. thodi der ki to baat hai.. uss krur singh gabbar ki nazar b nai padegi mujhpe yaha.. yessss!!

She fist pumped but stopped wen ridit gave her "wat r u doing" kind of look.. she made a face..

 

Mam entered n aate hi attendance lena shuru kar diya woh bhi last se!!

 

Sarakshi (to herself) – yeh champakali aaj ulti ganga kyu baha rahi hai?? Hey bhagwan bacha loo plss.. agey se kabhi apna dimaag nahi chalungi.. bhul kar bhi bunk nahi karungi.. plssss bhagwanjiiii plssssssss

 

"sarakshiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

 

She opened her eyes n due to shock she almost tossed the pen which she was holding..

 

Mam took her name once, twice n third time she roared..

 

Mam – Ms sarakshi were u sleeping in my class??

 

Sarakshi – nno mam..

 

Mam – then?? I think u need to get ur ears checked Ms gupta..

 

Sarakshi – am sorry mam..

 

Mam – BTW where were u in last two lectures yesterday?? N plss dnt even try to tell a lie as am not gonna buy any of ur lies.. I saw u in lab messing up with one or the other thing..

 

Sarakshi – wo mam actually main wo mm m

 

Mam – get out!!

 

Sarakshi (with teary eyes) – am ssorrryy mam.. I wont do this again.. plss..

 

Mam – I wont give u another chance to repeat this ms gupta.. just get lost..

 

Sarakshi never went thru such humiliation.. she felt like killing that CHAMPAKALI.. she almost ran out of the class..

 

Rehan followed her.. ridit too wanted to go but he thought situation will get worse..

 

Sarakshi was sobbing sitting on stairs.. wen rehan came she insatantly looked up n whispered "ri" but realized its rehan not ridit..

 

Rehan – haan rehan.. expect nahi kar rahi thi kya muje?? Iss mam se kuch pange hai kya tere?? Itna kyu chidh rahi thi tujh pe?? Aur samajhdar lab attend karke lecture attend nahi kiya.. kyu?? 

 

Sarakshi said nothing.. she was already very veryyy embarrassed.. n this time too she was hating Mr perfect to noo limit as mam ke taunt se jyada ridit ka hasna bura laga tha use lab main aur isi liye lecture attend nahi kiya....


unn dono k jate hi ridit class main khada hoo gaya..


ridit - excuse me mam plss.. i want to tell u something..


mam - u r in a very bad company ridit.. stay away frm those two stubborn, disorriented fellows.. otherwise they will ruin all ur probabilities of a good career..


ridit - mam actually aap galat samajh rahi hai.. woh sarakshi ki tabiyat kal bahot jyada kharab hoo gayi thi.. woh to aapko inform karke jana chahti thi par mene usse kaha ki main aapko bata dunga.. par main khud bhul gaya.. galati meri hai mam.. aur rehan sarakshi ko apni behan manta hai isliye uske piche piche class chodkar chala gaya.. mam woh dono innocent hai.. agr punish karna hai to muje kijiye unhe nahi..


mam seemed convinced..


mam - ohh.. okk.. am very impressed with u ridit.. u dared to say the truth.. mark my words u will go places.. now go n call them.. ohh wait i will send someone else tum waha se uth kar mat aao.. (ridit k sare frnds ek k baad ek khasne lage..)


mam ne rehan aur sarakshi ko bula liya..


mam(extra sweetly) - sarakshi beta abb tabiyat kaisi hai tumhari?? hmm?? tumhe batana chahiye tha na ki kyu chali gayi thi.. mene khamakha daant diya tumhe.. chalo abb agey se dhyan rakhna thik hai.. jao betho dono..


sarakshi sooo wanted to show her tongue to that mam but she was surprised as to y this champakali suddenly changed her tone, wat must hv happened??

 

rehan knew ridit ne hi kuch kiya hoga.. par kya??


hostel pahochte hii jo question ridit kabse avoid kar raha tha uska jawab usko dena hi padha..


rehan - tune yeh kyu bola ki me sarakshi ko apni BEHAN manta hoon?? ye kisne keh diya tujse??(he said teasingly)


ridit(perplexed) - umm kyu nahi manta kya?? aur uss waqt jo sujha bass bol diya mene.. ek to logo ka bhala karo uppar se unke sawalo ka jawab bhi do.. agli baar nahi bachaunga tuje kabhi ja..


rehan - mujhe bachaya ya "use"?? (he again said teasingly)


but this tym ridit threw him out of his room..


rehan (to himself) - kuch to hua hai kuch hoo gaya hai.. beta ridit mujhse nahi chupa sakta tu.. (he was actually feeling really happy for the two ppl who r his dearest n closest frnds n who live in his heart..)


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helloooooooo readers.. Embarrassed how r u all?? am sure nobody will reply me.. huh!! LOLLOL kal UD nahi kiya uske liye sooooooorrrrrrrrryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy actually mere cousin ki shadi hai.. isliye kal tym hi nahi mila.. Tongue
aur abb kuch din tak me UD nahi kar paungi.. Embarrassed peej muje maaf kar dena.. LOLLOL dekho iss baar me naye tarike se galati kar rahi hoon.. ApproveLOLLOL



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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 12:09pm | IP Logged
last 2 parts were superb.......................
 
con't soon dear...........................

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