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#Devil's Den Shubh mangal Savadhan#2 (Page 34)

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 2:35pm | IP Logged
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Wanna yap?


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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 2:36pm | IP Logged
@deepika: its in the heart i mean pain..so skull wont go..
thoda sa aur accha kar i will use it..rest of the senetence soinds fine..hang on let me see if it work..

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 2:40pm | IP Logged
Hey deep what u have in your mind
@ Shreya   Pain is so unbearable as somone is taking out my souls ,

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 I had given up when I
heard the last bit of the news. I had no courage to face it anymore. Hadn't I
dealt with enough when it came to my life? I had almost lost the one I loved to
death, I had lost myself in this mad rush of world and today the lady standing
in front of me gave me the news that I was about to lose the little one that
had not even entered the world. I had to tell her, but I didn't know how. I had
made sure that I give her everything she wanted, I had made sure that I had
smiled even though the pain in my heart felt like it would tear me into two . I
didn't know how to face her but for now I let her sleep. She was sleeping on
the bed with a smile on her face. I still hadn't told her what the doctor had said
earlier that day. I was scared. Scared of how she will react, I knew her
decision and it was making me more scared. I was scared of losing her and the
doctor had told me if she wouldn't let the baby go I would lose her. I was not
ready for it.



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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 2:43pm | IP Logged
now tell is this fine..

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 2:45pm | IP Logged
@ Sreya outstanding  deep emotion playedEmbarrassedClap.    so you wanted to bring out MSK's pain of loosing Geet and Baby.  sorry could not help

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 2:47pm | IP Logged
@shreya 

It's good. simple and eloquent . 

instead of tear use split me into two

@polly,

I am just bored yaar. Came back from grocery shopping. I am in the mood for Chinese take out. I don't want to cook tonight. so have some free time to kill.


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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 2:50pm | IP Logged
@polly: yup..u guessed it right...i am not gonna kill GEET dont know abt the baby..i am confused..hehe..thnks..
@deepika: thnks..
waise both of u it will take time so bear i just wrote one para..will finsih it in a day or two..

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