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SS Nivren: Kahani Mohabbat Ki Pt 3 Pg 5 (Page 5)

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Please update the next chapter..Tongue
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Please continue the next chapter  Tongue
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i love what u wrote.....pls continue soon.....thanx for "kahani Mohabbat ki"....SmileSmile
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Part 3

 

Viren wakes up the next morning to see that Nivedita is not in the room. He searches for her everywhere and bumps in to Vandana who asks, 'Kya baat hai, Viren? Tu itna pareshan kyun lag raha hai?' Viren helplessly replies, 'Woh Tayiji, aapne Nivedita ko dekha hai?' Vandana replies, 'Nivi? Mandir mein hogi, Viren.' He says, 'Nahi Tayiji, maine poora ghar dekh liya. Nivedita kahi bhi nahi hai. Woh aise bina bataye kaha ja sakti hai?' Vandana says, 'Viren tu pareshan mat ho. Main jakar Keshav bhai saab ko pouch aati houn, shayad unhe kuch pata ho.' Viren nods and goes back to the room. He sits on the bed with his hands locked under his chin unable to understand where Nivedita would have gone when Dadaji passes by his room. Viren rushes to him and asks, 'Dada sahib, aapne Nivedita ko dekha hai?' Dadasahib replies, 'Kal raat ko hamare kamre mein aayi thi, beta. Tumhari school ke baare mein pouch rahi thi.' Viren is shocked to hear this and says, 'Meri school? Aur kya kaha usne?' Dada sahib says, 'Kuch zyada nahi. Maine jab poucha ke wouh yeh sab kyun pouch rahi hai toh usne kaha ke woh bas kuch sawaalon ke jawab chahti hai.' Viren thanks Dadasahib and rushes to his room to change. On the way out he meets Vandana who starts to say something when Viren stops her saying, 'Mujhe pata hai woh kaha hai, Tayiji. Main aata houn.' She is confused and Viren leaves in a hurry.

 

Nivedita is sitting with a teacher who is looking at Nivedita with a strange expression. She says, 'Zaroor koi bohot khaas baat hogi tum dono ke beech ke Viren ne shaadi kar li. Warna itne sehme hue ladke aasaani se shaadi nahi karte.' Nivedita says, 'Sehma hua?' The teacher nods and says, 'Yes, Mrs. Sood. Viren ek bohot hi brilliant baccha tha lekin bohot dukhi tha. Boarding school mein do tarah ke bacche hote hai. Ek jo ghar se door aakar khush ho jaate hai, with the new found independence. Aur doosre jo nakhush hote hai aur apni family ko dosh dete hai unhe unse door karne ka. Viren un mein se tha. Shayad sadma lag gaya tha usse iss baat se ke uski family ne usse door bhej diya.' Nivedita says, 'Lekin woh bohot shararati tha na?' The teacher smiles and says, 'Kaun sa baccha shararati nahi hota, Mrs. Sood? Lekin kya har case mein usse apne aap se door kar dena samajhdari hai?' Nivedita goes over her words and is very confused.

 

Viren reaches his school campus where he finds Nivedita waiting outside the gate. Her eyes are closed and tears keep escaping her eyes. She senses something around her and thinks, 'Yeh toh Viren ki aahat hai lekin woh yaha kyun aayega? Maine usse kya kuch nahi kaha?' She slowly opens her eyes and sees Viren looking at her apologetically. She stands up and he says, 'Tum yaha kya kar rahi ho?' Viren replies, 'Yahi sawaal main tumse pouch sakti houn, Viren. Maine kaha tha tumse ke mujhse door raho.' Viren says, 'Tumhare kehne se mujhe farak nahi parhta. Agar tum chahti ke main tumse door rahoun toh tum meri school mein kya kar rahi ho?' Nivedita does not meet his eyes and he says, 'Sach janne aayi thi na? Pata chal gaya?'  Nivedita says, 'Mujhe sirf tumhari karvahat ka kaaran pata chala hai, Viren. Lekin yeh nahi ke tumne mujhe apna nishana kyun banaya? Jis ladki se bachpan se pyaar karte ho, uske raastein mein tumne kaatein boye? Kaise yakeen karoun tumhara? Kaise Viren?' Viren comes close to her as she steps back unsurely.

 

Viren stops and smiles sadly. He says, 'Itna darti ho mujhse?' Nivedita has tears in her eyes and says, 'Yeh darr hota toh mujhe itni takleef nahi hoti, Viren. Main tumhare dono chehron ko jod nahi pa rahi houn. Ek woh jisne mera saath diya aur doosra woh jisne ek pal mein sab kuch barbaad kar diya.' Viren replies, 'Main pyaar karta houn tumse, Nivedita.' Nivedita looks in to his eyes and says, 'Yeh kaisa andaaz hai, Viren? Tumhare pyaar se mujhe ghabrahat hoti hai, tumhari baaton par mujhe vishwaas nahi hai. Ek rishta bharose ke bina aage kaise barh sakta hai, Viren?' Viren says, 'Mujhe ek mauka nahi dogi? Phir se mujhe bhej  diya jayega?' Nivedita looks at him concernedly thinking back to the teacher's words about Viren being sent away. She feels bad for him and does not know what to do. She is quiet and Viren says, 'Zindagi wahi aakar ruk gayi, Nivedita. Ek baar phir main akela ho jaouga. Tab parivaar ne chod diya. Aaj tumne.' Nivedita cannot take the stress and faints in his arms.

 

Nivedita wakes up in a room and is freaked out not see Viren around. She walks around fearfully and looks for Viren. She cannot get herself to speak due to her nervousness. She hears a noise and turns around screaming only to look at Viren. She looks at him thankfully and hugs him without thinking. He crushes her to himself never wanting to let her go but knowing that she will realise soon. But for a long time, Nivedita does not pull back and when finally she does, she looks lost. Viren shakes her and says, ' Nivedita, kya hua hai tumhe? Kuch bolo toh sahi. Please, Nivedita. Aisa mat karo.' Nivedita does not answer and he just takes her in his arms and places her on the bed worried about what to do. He thinks, ' Yeh maine kya kar diya, Nivedita. Tumhe pane ke iraade mein maine tumhe kho toh nahi diya?' He cries at the foot of the bed not knowing what to do or say.



Edited by eternal_maaneet - 15 March 2011 at 4:18am

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thanx alot 4 updating...loved d new scene...impatient to know wat happened to nivi now...pls update soon...
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Thanx a lot for  this awesome update....it was well written and so touching....!!!!

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