SS Nivren: Kahani Mohabbat Ki Pt 3 Pg 5

Posted: 13 years ago
 
Kahani Mohabbat Ki
 
Part 1
 
Nivedita spots the injury mark on Viren's back and looks completely shocked. She starts moving backwards and Viren says, 'Nivedita, main samjha sakta houn. Mujhe ek mauka toh do.' Nivedita bumps against the wall and looks at Viren with tears in her eyes. Viren says, 'Nivedita, ro mat. Kuch toh bolo.' He tries to touch her but she moves his hand away and says, 'Mujhe haath mat lagana, Viren!' Viren takes his hand back and tears start forming in his eyes. Nivedita says, 'Tum kyun ro rahe ho, Viren? Kya tumhara bharosa toota hai? Kya tumhara dil toota hai? Kya tum jisse pyaar karte ho, usne tumhe dhoka diya hai?' Viren looks up at her shocked to hear her saying that she loves him. Nivedita realises what she has said but continues, 'Haan, Viren Sood. Main tumse pyaar karne lagi thi. Tumhari woh chhoti chhoti baatein dil mein jagah kar gayi. Na jaane kab Siddharth ki har yaad door chali gayi tumhari wajah se. Aur tumne mere saath yeh kiya?'

 

Viren is crying now and sits on the corner of the bed with his head in his hands. Nivedita wants to console him but the scene of her being attacked keeps playing in her head. She slides on the floor down the wall and hugs her hands around her knees. Viren runs to her and says, 'Nivedita, please utho.' Nivedita raises her head slowly and says, 'Yahi kaha tha tumne, Viren. Utho apni mushkilon se, apne dukhon se aur maine tumhari baat maani thi. Toh phir batao aisa kya hua ke tumne yeh sab kiya?' Viren is quiet and does not answer. She shakes him and says, 'Batao na, Viren!' He looks at her apologetically and her eyes widen is realization. She says, 'Dushman ki beti?' Viren's head snaps up at her words. He says, 'Nahi Nivedita, aisa nahi'' Nivedita cuts him short and says, 'Bas Viren! Ab bas. Sach toh yahi hai na? Main Keshav Sharma ki beti houn. Main pagalon ki tarah sochti rahi ke tum mujh jaisi ladki se pyaar karte ho? Baat toh saaf hai, tum jaisa ladka mujh jaisi ladki se kisi maksad ke liye hi shaadi kar sakta hai.'

 

Nivedita stands up and Viren follows her lead. Viren says, 'Nivedita, maine jo kiya hai woh galat hai lekin mera pyaar saccha hai.' Nivedita looks at him sadly and says, 'Phir jhoot. Viren, tumhe jhoot bolne ki zaroorat nahi hai. Main sacchayi janti houn ab.' Viren says, 'Tum sach nahi jaanti. Maine yeh sab tumhare pyaar ke liye kiya.' He holds her shoulders but she moves his hands away and says, 'Main chhote shehar ki houn, Viren lekin bewakoof nahi. Pyaar mein insaan apni patni ko duniya ke saamne paagal dikhane ki chaalein banata hai? Pyaar mein ek pati apni patni ko darata hai? Nahi Viren, yeh pyaar nahi tumhara badla hai. Aur tumhara badla tab khatam hoga jab main iss ghar ko chod dougi, hai na?' She tries to move but he blocks her way and says, 'Tum yaha se kahin nahi ja sakti aur agar gayi toh'' Nivedita looks at him defiantly and says, 'Toh? Toh kya karoge? Uss din hamla karvaya tha, aaj maar daaloge?' Viren moves his hand away quickly and says, 'Main aisa soch bhi nahi sakta, Nivedita.'

 

Nivedita goes towards her cupboard and starts to take out her clothes. Viren takes her hands and pins her against the cupboard door. Nivedita says, 'Viren, mujhe chodo.' He loosens his grip but does not let her go. He says, 'Nivedita, main tumhare bina reh nahi sakta. Please mat jao.' Nivedita is confused and says, 'Yeh kaisa mazaak hai? Jis ladki ki tumne jaan le li thi, uske bina reh nahi sakte.' Viren says, 'Main tumhare dil mein se Siddharth ki yaad mitana chahta tha.' Nivedita stops struggling and says, 'Siddharth ki yaad?' Viren touches her hair and says, 'Nivedita, main tumhare saath rehta tha lekin tumhara dil Siddharth ke liye tadapta tha. Main tumse baatein karta aur tumhari nazrein usse khojti. Mera paas hokar bhi tum door thi. Meri hokar bhi meri nahi thi.' Nivedita looks at him quietly as his head drops on her shoulder and he says, 'Meri Nivedita meri kyun nahi thi? Siddharth ki wajah se. Mera pyaar adhoora kyun tha? Siddharth ki wajah se. Meri Nivedita ke zindagi mein toofan kaise aaya? Siddharth ki wajah se.' Nivedita is crying listening to her words as he raises her head and says, 'Meri har dhadkan mein tum ho Nivedita. Main tumse pyaar kaise nahi kar sakta?' At these words, he faints and Nivedita screams for everyone.

 

The doctor has recommended rest to Viren and has asked for no one to give him stress. Nivedita is standing outside when Vandana comes and says, 'Nivi, tu theek hai na?' Nivedita wipes her tears and says, 'Kya kahoun, chachiji? Kuch samajh mein nahi aata. Jo dekhti houn uss par yakeen karoun ya kissi ki kahin baat par.' Vandana pats her head and says, 'Apne dil ki sun beta. Sab theek ho jayega. Mujhe yakeen hai.' Nivedita says, 'Chachiji, Viren ne apne khandaani dushman Keshav Sharma ki beti se shaadi kyun ki?' Vandana is taken aback and says, 'Yeh tu kya keh rahi hai, Nivi? Tum ek doosrein se pyaar karte ho na?' Nivedita nods and says, 'Lekin Viren ko apne parivaar ka bohot hai toh woh unke khilaaf kyun gaye?' Vandana says, 'Nivi, tu thak gayi. So jaa, hum kal baat karege. Theek hai?' Nivedita nods and goes inside. She closes the door behind after going to the room and sits next to Viren changing the cold water napkins on his head. At one point Viren stops her hand and says, 'Nivedita, tum hamesha se meri thi lekin Siddharth ne tumhe mujhse le liya.' Nivedita looks at him shocked at his words and says, 'Yeh Viren kya keh raha hai?'

Edited by eternal_maaneet - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
Good catch from the last episode...
Thanks for "NivRen
Kahani Mohabbat Ki"
Will you continue?
Posted: 13 years ago

i love what u wrote......good to read viren loves nivi a lot.....hope to get the same from the show too.....pls continue soon.....thanx for "kahani Mohabbat ki"....๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

Edited by kinha - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
I am new to this forum and had been reading comments since viren entered the show. I just love nivren chemistry and i liked what u wrote. would like if u continue..
Posted: 13 years ago
Wow.... awesome... Well written....
Plz continue soon.... Can't wait for the next part.... ๐Ÿ˜Š
Posted: 13 years ago
OMG brilliant made me teary, please do continue x
Posted: 13 years ago
Woww Dear lovedd it so much . Cn imagine Viren n Nivi in dis scene . Plzz continue Soon . I cn see Both of their pains .
Posted: 13 years ago
Nice continuation from last episode. Loved it. Please continue soon. Can't wait for your second part. 
Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome, outstanding..
Please Continue๐Ÿ˜›
Posted: 13 years ago
nice love  it sooo much update the second part sooooon   cant wait for it

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