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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 4:23am | IP Logged
Acp giraftar episode...

After all drama Abhijit shoots acp....and man from press captures the photo.

Everyone cries.
Abhijit: mein...mein....goli unhone chalayi....
Fredy: sir, aapne kya kiya....acp sir ko mara? Me ab kya karoo???

He sat down and cries....
' naheeeeee....utho sir.....utho'
Hits his chest for making his heart working.

Acp coughs.

Press man was about to leave...but hears coughing he comes back.

Who is coughing?
Daya: mein....wo muje dead body dekhne se cough ho jata hein.

Fredy : sir...utho sir...utho....

At last acp flies for his life and scolds fredy.
Acp: FREDY KYA KIYA TUMNE?SARA PLAN BARBAD KAR DIYA



Edited by chinnu_manikyam - 23 January 2011 at 4:43am

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 4:33am | IP Logged


OK now am writing same scene OF visrom with twist.



 



One goon ready to shoot Abhijeet and press the trigger'and
Suddenly Maya came in between and she 
took the bullet on her body.Abhijeet got confused rand and came near
Maya and took her on his lap.



Abhi: Maya ye tumhe kya kiya? Tumane..



Maya: Mere yahi harsh hone wala tha Abhijeet.Tum bahot achhe
ho,Mein tumase kuch kehena chahati hun.



Abhi: ha bolo..bolo Maya.



Maya: Abhijeet mein tumase behataya pyar karti hun mere liye
tumhari jaan besha kimati hein.meri sirf aakahari tamanna hein.



Abhi: Maya tum ye kya kehe rahi ho.tum muzase pyar karati
ho.aur bol kya kehena ho chahati.



Maya:Abhijeet abhi jo meine kaha hein wo Tariaka se mat
kehena.mein tmhare jhindagi mein complications nahi khadi karana chahati,sirf
eak request hein tumhare liye ye platinum ki anguthi lekar aayi thi wo pehen lo
mere aakhari yaad.



Abhi:Lekin mere haath mein to already eak anguthi hein.



Maya:Malum hein muze lekin wo rusted hein.Malum hein tum
muze pyar nahi karate lekin mera pyar too 15 saal prana hein.



Abhi:Hann'15 saal prana?



Maya:Ha tum college mein mere saath padhate the.mere achhe
dost the lekin ye dosti pyar mein kab badal gayi muze pata nahi chala.fir
hamare zindagi mein naya mod liye college ke baad eak dusare se bichhad
gaye.lekin mein tumhe bhul na payi.ar jab 15 saal tum mere samane aaye tab
tumhare zindagi mein Taraiaka aa chuki,es baar mein tumhe khanoa nahi chahati
thi aur meri esi kamjorika meine fayada uthaya.Mujhe ho sake to maf kar dena
abhijeet aur ye anguthi hamesha mere pass sambhal ke rakhana.



Abhi: Mujhe pata nahi tha ki koi muze etana pyar karta
hein.lekin Mein kya karu mere etani chahane waliya hein mein kis kis ko
sambhalu.aakhir mein sirf eak ka hi ho sakata hun.



Maya:Abhijeet tum sabake ho.aur ye mujhe pata chala hein,ab
mere pass vakat kam hein.



Abhi: Nahi nahi maya'mein tumhe bachayunga.,,tumhe kuch bhi
nahi hoga,



Maya:Nahi Abhijeet Vakat hatse reth ke tarah niakal chukka hein..ab
muze ja na hi hoga(And Maya suddenly stop)



Abhi:Maya nahi Maya...tune pyar kyo kiya''???





Edited by jiya. - 23 January 2011 at 4:35am

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 4:41am | IP Logged
I really liked the Khooni Ki holi thing Vis !!! Yeah I agree we can go OTT with such a drama only !!! Go ahead if you all want !!

@Chinnya supercool the ACP giraftaar one !!! Just one suggestion regarding the hindi words Make it 'Utho' 'Utho' please !! Udo mans fly !!! but seriously it's awsome !!

Good work Jiya dii !!
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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 4:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jiya.




Abhi: Mujhe pata nahi tha ki koi muze etana pyar karta
hein.lekin Mein kya karu mere etani chahane waliya hein mein kis kis ko
sambhalu.aakhir mein sirf eak ka hi ho sakata hun.

 
ROFLROFL

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 6:29am | IP Logged

OMG Smiley i fell off my chair

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 6:33am | IP Logged
ROFL... loved all of these Bolly-inspired scenes!! ROFL 

These are especially priceless -

Daya: Tumne CID chod diya, toh main bhi ek khoon karke CID chod doonga!!!!

Her hand opens and he finds in her hand a paper torn out of his lecture notes in his handwriting on which they had played hangman in a class.
 
Abhijeet: MAYA!!! Tumne itna bada raaz mujhse chupaya, main tumhari maut ka badla loonga!!!!

Suddenly, someone pushes Maya to get her out of the way.
Abhi turns back to see what's going on.
it's none other than Tarika.
Tarika: Yeh goli tum nahi main khaungi. Abhijeet mujh pe 2-3 saal se line marta hain.
Maya: Nahi main Abhijeet ko 2-3 hafte se chahti hoon.
Then thety start a vigorous cat fight.

Daya: Mask ke bachche...main tumhe mask ke saath maar daloonga....and catches his neck. tighly.

ROFLROFL

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 7:52am | IP Logged
Her hand opens and he finds in her hand a paper torn out of his lecture notes in his handwriting on which they had played hangman in a class.LOLROFL
 
Where did she get that piece of paper?  did she always carry the paer in one hand and gun in another?


Edited by auntyno1 - 23 January 2011 at 7:53am

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 12:13pm | IP Logged
what if....maya stopped her brothers and decided to join CID herself and got married to abhi??? ( i liked her better than tarika...yesterday's sequence was terrible)

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