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MAYUR FF..Weaving the Magic..Part 15 on pg 85 (Page 88)

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 8:19am | IP Logged
wonderful update...Day Dreaming ....mehak n superb ending...but sad it ended...Cry...!!!
it was one of my fav....luved both character....mayur was superb...!!!

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 8:20am | IP Logged
Mehak...Hug
what an outstanding part!!ClapClap
u wrote each phase of life so beautifully....hats off to u..StarStar



 


Will be waiting for ur next FF..WinkBig smileBig smile


Edited by jes_jade - 06 February 2011 at 12:33pm

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 8:33am | IP Logged
wowww... it was a through out a magical journey mehek........Smile
it was a dream life......
pls cum soon wid a new magical ff.......Clap
Hug

Edited by drmaha - 06 February 2011 at 8:33am

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 8:38am | IP Logged
BRAVO! BRAVO! What an awesome ending after your last FF which was also really good but at the end i cried a lot but this made up for it. awesome ending Mind Blowing.

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 8:50am | IP Logged
such a perfect ending to such a perfect story........thanx Smile.......but i hope your next one is just around the corner haha......naina

btw i liked what you wrote about him calling her aap....though i was kinda wishing they would both start calling each other tum


Edited by sumonetolub - 06 February 2011 at 8:53am

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 8:58am | IP Logged
nice ending.
a perfect ending of a perfect love story.
want more from u.....waiting for new magic.
thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 9:10am | IP Logged
Angel why do your stories end sooo soon???CryCry

I feel like you just started this one the other day and its already endedCryCry

Anyways it was a lovely update and a lovelier storyBig smileBig smile

I loved the way you showed the different stages of their lives at the endBig smileBig smile totally awesome, AngelBig smileBig smile

please please pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee write one soonBig smileBig smile

you gotten an idea already i hopeBig smile

Cant wait for your next oneBig smileBig smileHug

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 10:56am | IP Logged

First of all, what an awesome ending!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

The chapter was just beautiful….

…..the morning after was soo romantic & poor Nupur, Mayank was making her blush more than ever

…..Honeymoon: I loved the spot!! Florida is one of the best holiday spots ever & so no wonder Nupur was still talking about it in their room. Lol, loved how he reminded her they were on their honeymoon.  

…..Driving License: Loved the little teasing!

…..Phone convo: Cute! It's nice to see their normal routine life..

…..Family: Poor Baba! He was stuck b/w these two. Mayank was just adorable frowning and all. Wow, Nupur openly flirting? Looks like Mayank's effect. Naughty Mayank!!

…..Addressing: Mayank is really a gem!!

…..Pregnancy: Mayank's initial reaction and then later picking her up was so real! A new Journey ahead of them..

…..Juice: Mayank is taking such good care of her and it was so cute when he was talking to the baby. The last bit was very touching..and I loved how Nupur supported him with her little gesture

…..Angels!!: It was really a picture perfect moment!!

 

 

As usual, I have nothing but praises for you and your writing. Seriously, ur stories are too good!! Ur style is so simple but they really touch a person's heart. U really are a magician! I'm really going to miss this ff. Please come back with another ff, soon!! Please……………

 



Edited by Ishita16 - 07 February 2011 at 7:11pm

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