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MAYUR FF..Weaving the Magic..Part 15 on pg 85 (Page 83)

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Posted: 05 February 2011 at 10:53am | IP Logged
Angel....what a romantic part this wasEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

I loved the way she placed a kiss on his cheek and did not want to move away thereafterLOLLOL and then also when she called her parents and all...it was really niceBig smileBig smile

And then the way she promised herself that she would never leave him and allBig smileBig smile wow..and well the last part.....it was totally cute....the way she cuddled up to him and him returning the kiss...naughty guy was awake all the while in the morningLOLLOL...and then the kiss.....hayyeeeeEmbarrassedEmbarrassed Oh btw i hope this aint the end of the story....want to read more....nowadays i feel your stories end sooo soon :((

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Posted: 05 February 2011 at 11:00am | IP Logged
just read both the previous parts right now.....the poem in prev part touched my heart....thanks for posting it here kinzaSmile
part 14......just so lovelyEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
plz tell me u are not ending this ff,,,,,,,,,,
loved the last line....actually everythingLOLLOLLOLLOL

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Posted: 05 February 2011 at 11:25am | IP Logged
wow <3Big smile

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Posted: 05 February 2011 at 12:32pm | IP Logged
Wao  Kinzuu its sooooooooooooooooo romantic 
My cheeks are getting hot Blushing
I love it
I love when nupur her Parents after understanding Mayank
and the last part was so great
thanks for [pm
cont soon

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Posted: 05 February 2011 at 12:41pm | IP Logged
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
it was Day DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushing

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Posted: 05 February 2011 at 3:06pm | IP Logged
Beautiful update Mehak - loved it a lot. But you forgot to pm me.
I hope this is not the end of this FF becoz I would love to read more.
Please do pm me when you update.

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Posted: 05 February 2011 at 5:10pm | IP Logged
Sorry for not commenting yesterday. I'm sick so have been doing nothing but sleepingOuch
the previous part was amazing. Love the message you gave through the updates, kids usually forget the value of their parents until they don't actually lose them which is really sadUnhappy I was really shocked to know mihir wasn't his real dad. But still you have shown that you don't need a blood relationship with someone to think of them as your dad which is again very sweet.Embarrassed
coming to the last part, love the kiss nupur gave to mayank and the fact that she called her parents and it's good that they were regretting the way they treated herBig smile finally the end was super cute and romantic.Embarrassed hope this isn't the end, I want to read about their honeymoon Wink
Thanks for the pmHug

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Posted: 05 February 2011 at 6:58pm | IP Logged
wow!!!
wonderful update...
i liked tat nupur called her parents n talked...Smile
love the way how mayank teases nupur.....
atlast both confessed....Big smile
continue soon

divya

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