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MAYUR FF..Weaving the Magic..Part 15 on pg 85 (Page 82)

-SupriyaluvsMN- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 4:13am | IP Logged
nups finally confessd her luv 4 mayu!!!BlushingBlushingBlushingBlushing
i'm stil blushin...hereBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushing
beautiful update mahek!

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sariska_mnarti IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 5:16am | IP Logged
First of all so sorry for commenting late

part 13 was awesum

simply loved it

I'm happy tht both of them shared their problems with each other

cont soon

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stuti123 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 6:01am | IP Logged
OMG mehak....that was such an amazing update...i was blushing badly throughout while reading itBlushing..very beautifully wriiten........cant wait to read the next part.......

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sariska_mnarti IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 6:09am | IP Logged
Awww man mahak

part 14 was too romantic yaar.......

Gosh nups takin all d first step

n the kisses

so sweet

loved it

cont soon

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 6:12am | IP Logged
Thank u so much guys...Hug

PART 15:

Nupur was slowly coming out of her slumber, sensing a ruffle in her hair, knowing who it was, she slowly opened her eyes, now sensing a  strong grip around her waist, automatically her cheeks turned pink and  she started fearing opening her eyes, because most probably her heart would pump out of her body, she reached for the grip and tried removing it, but it was of no use, she knew it would be strong but still she was trying and suddenly she was kissed on her cheek, "good morning beautiful", his sleepy, coarse and husky voice collided with her ear drums, making more difficult to keep her heart normal, she opened her eyes, and on seeing his smile, there was no sign of shyness, her heart filled with love affection for mayank, "good morning", she smiled as he snuggled further into her neck, making nupur loose her senses all over again, "ummm..time kia hai"

"pata nai,", he was not at all interested in these useless questions while nupur raised her head and saw the clock, it was 3,"huh?, 3 baj gaye?", she patted mayank's arm, "dekhiye 3 baj gaye hain"

he raised his head, outlining her face cut, "darling if u wont let me sleep the whole night tu 3 baje tu baj hi jayen ga na", his grip around her waist was increasing and with the same speed her heartbeat too, then he left her waist reaching for her cheek and nupur regarding this as golden moment pushed away the comforter and rushed away to the dressing,"that was not fair!..mayank was shocked at her quick tactics and all he could hear  were nupur's giggles from the dressing, which made her frown vanish, he so loved her!.

"i love u nupur", he spoke loud enough for her hear, and didn't expected an answer, because he knew she would be too shy and he was right, nupur inside was turning a tomato..


Both of them went for their honeymoon..


pata hai mujhe lagta tha k main kabhi mumbai se bhi bahir nahi jaon gi aur..", she was constantly rambling since they had reached Florida and now even reaching their room she was still speaking, and mayank was sitting beside her waiting that may be she would realize they were on their honey moon,"aur sab se ziyada tu mujhe yahan ka airport psnd aya, kitna..

"nupur", mayank placed his finger on her lips, "hum yahan tourist guides nahi hain, we are on our honey moon, remember", and nupur slowly removed his finger from her lips and nodded hugging him..


Finally nupur learnt driving..


Finally now i own a license, "nupur was proudly flaunting her driving license and mayank was giggling,"well ap hans ku rahe ho?,thx to that driving institute, ap se tu kabhi sekh nahi pati nain, "

"acha!..tu is main mera kia qassor hai k u stare at ur teacher?", and nupur ran away before her cheeks could turn more red.


after the initial phase of marriage,
 their lives had taken the normal routine of a normal couple


"nupur main thora late ho jaon ga, tu ap dinner kar lena,", mayank was working on his files and simultaneously talking to nupur on phn, "koi baat nahi, main wait kar lon gi", she was already sitting on the dining table

"nupur kitni baar

"kaha hai k behave reasonably, "she imitated mayank's deep voice and mayank chuckled, "thek hai, kha leti on, per main ne gajr ka halwa bhi banaya hai, wo tu hum sath hi khayen gey, and no arguments, come soon, i am waiting"

she hung up before listening to mayank and all he could do was smile ..


their families were also a part of their weaved magic..


"baba dekhiye na mujhe ghr nahi jane de rahen hain", nupur was complaining to mihir on phn  and mayank was frowning, he snatched the phn from nupur, "dad main ne mana nahi kiya hai, main bus itna keh raha hon k rehne ki kiya zarorat hai, office jate hoye drop kar don ga ur wapsi pe pick kar liya karon ga, ap ko pata hai 10 din k liye jane ka keh rahi hai"

mihir was listening to both of them, it was gunjan's marriage and nupur wanted to stay at her house whereas mayank wasn't agreeing, "dekho beta, yahan pe tu nupur thek hai, us ki behn ki shaddi hai, tu wo tu rehne zaroor jaye gi," mihir announced his verdict nupur was ecstatic, "thank u baba"

she started packing as tomorrow morning she had to go and mayank was frowning and scowling and giving her angry looks which were so adorable for nupur, she sat beside him and kissed his cheek, "ap naraz ku ho rahen hain?"

"tu aur kia karon, u are going for 10 days, main akela kia karon ga", he pouted and nupur's heart filled with love, she moved close, "awww..ab 10 din bhi nahi hain, shaddi pe tu ap bhi aao gey na, tu bus 7 din hain", she thought may be it would help, but it didn't, "very funny", he was about to get up from the bed when nupur held his hand, "acha what abt a deal?"

"which deal?"

"ap mujhe smile kar k jane do, then when i will return i would compensate for ur 10 days", nupur was openly flirting, smirking and opening her eyes even wide and mayank couldn't believe, he slid his hand cross her waist pulling her close, taking a deep breath, "hmmm..compensation se pehle advance installment chaiye", he moved close and  nupur blushed, giving him all the love he had right off..


there was something else than love binding them


waise main ne kisi husband ko apni wife ko ap keh kar bulate hoye nhai dekha?"
, mayank was watching news and nupur was sitting beside him filing her nails, "ye kia baat hoyi?"

"nahi, normally wives hi ap keh k bulati hain"

"respect should be equal nupur", he normally replied and changed the channel, leaving with nupur another reason to love him..


life was moving..bringing happiness at every moment,,


"suniye", nupur finally manged to speak after thinking much, "hmmm", mayank was fixing the garden hose, "i am pregnant", mayak left the hose and water started falling on both of them, for  a while mayank was quiet and then he took small steps towards her, the water was constantly falling on them, "u are serious?",

she smiled fully nodding and mayank picked her  in his arms,"wow!", and nupur had never seen him happy like this


God provided them a chance to fulfill their short comings


Chalo nupur ye juice pi lo", mayank was forcefully putting juice down her throat, "umm..aram se, abhi tu piya tha main ne"..

"tu?, merey baby ko jaldi bhok kag jati hai, hain na baby", he placed his ear next to her stomach and nupur slowly ruffled his hair, he placed his head in her lap and closed his eyes, and nupru felt a tear coming out of his closed eye, it felt someone had caught her heart in a fist, but she didn't say anything, she waited for him to speak, finally he opend his eyes, "hum apne baby ko kabhi akela nahi choren gey nupur..kabhi bhi nahi, our child will never miss his parents"

his broken voice pierced her heart and she took his hand gripping it very firmly because her emotions weren't allowing her to speak..


and they both experienced the most beautiful feeling on this world..


congratulations Mr Sharma, its twin daughters
.,the doctor handed him his daughter and mayank felt it was the most beautiful feeling he ever experienced, he went inside the ward to nupur was playing with the second daughter, and seeing mayank she smiled and mayank sat beside him, kissing her forehead and taking his second child in his arms, and soon mihir and nupur's parents entered the ward to celebrate the most special moment of their lives..


They both spent the perfect life..
the happily ever after life..
with the perfectly weaved magic..



Edited by -Mehak - 06 February 2011 at 10:46am

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 6:20am | IP Logged
Fantastic Mehak.........

Another brilliant FF comes to an end........Cry......... but then all good things come to an end some day............Do write more......Big smile

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 6:23am | IP Logged


hey mehakHug
a perfect ending to a perfect love storyDay Dreaming
loved itHeart

plzz do come back soon wid another oneSmile

Edited by jiya_angel - 06 February 2011 at 6:59am

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wow wt a magical journey Day Dreaming
the ending was simply awsomeSmileDay Dreaming
Hugthanks 4 the pm

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