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MAYUR FF..Weaving the Magic..Part 15 on pg 85 (Page 72)

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Part 12 – Simply Superb!!!

-LOL! Once again, bells disturb them…Poor Mayu!

-Nupur-Gunjan convo was so sweet…Nupur's interaction with her parents: u've portrayed this part so good.. It's so real. I mean no matter what they've done to her, they r still her parents and her initial happiness shows that but then she remembers the past and ignores them…I wonder why the sudden visit?

-I like the fact that Mayank questioned her behaviour. Though I understand Nupur's reasons, I think Nupur should give her parents another chance. Yes, they were mean to her in the past and said a lot of things parents shouldn't say but maybe it was their helplessness that made them say such mean things….

-"because he and his books, could spend  a lifetime together." – Mayank and his books!!! LOL

-Mayank's silence affects Nupur? Their equation is changing slowly…and the way u described Nupur when she asked 'are you angry with me' was so vivid…I could just picture her and ofcourse, Mayank can't keep quiet after that. I'm loving the fact that they are slowly getting closer and practising their rights on each other.
-I can't wait to read the next part…Hopefully Nupur will open upto him.

 



Edited by Ishita16 - 03 February 2011 at 10:53pm

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Awesome Mehak!!!ClapClap
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It was really adorable.....I love the understanding they have for each other..
Nupur shud share her troubles with Mayank...
Waiting for next..

Cont soon..Smile

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Brilliant update Mehak.
Thanks a lot for the pm.

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i think mayank is starting to act wid autority =wid nupur.....loving itTongue

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Nice update....
M liking the progress in their relation...
Very gud...
continue soon pls.. 

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wonderful update Smile
loved the last bitSmile
continue soonn

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terrific update Mehak loooved it. tum mujhe pm karna bhool gayiUnhappy. agli baar mat bhulna plz. don't want to miss this beautiful story.

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