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MAYUR FF..Weaving the Magic..Part 15 on pg 85 (Page 67)

-Mansi- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 5:18am | IP Logged
omg so damn cute! every chapter of yours is so realistic :) Loved the last line ;) ahem.

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sariska_mnarti IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 5:23am | IP Logged
Awww it was such acute update

nupur's driving classes r so amazing

I'm waiting for them to finish

cont sooooooonnnn

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Payal-15 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 6:02am | IP Logged
Mehak Part 4 was so beautiful....Embarrassed

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Fantasia. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 6:14am | IP Logged
Thank u so much guys..Hug

@rubab & bushra..u both are most cutie pies..HugHug

PART 12:

Nupur was blushing very hard, and mayank was trying to see her cheeks turning pink in between her hair, he slowly started tucking all the fluttering hair on her cheeks behind her ear, and nupur's eye's were firmly closed when..the door bell rang, and both of them sprang apart!.

i just hate these bells, phone bell, door bell, all on wrong timings", mayank was very furious and nupur couldn't control her laughter, "what?, why are u laughing?", nupur controlled her laughter, making a very serious face. Mayank got up from the ground, brushing dust over his knees and walked  twords the gate, and nupur also came out of the car.
Mayank opened the gate and went outside, while nupur was standing beside the car, thinking about the beautiful time she just had, trying to sink in the wonderful feelings her heart was feeling, the contentment she was..

"diiiii", nupur came out of her thoughts and saw gunjan running t words her, before she could make sense of what happened, gunjan hugged her,. "di, kaisi ho tum?", gunjan was ecstatic, and nupur was shocked , separating gunjan from herself, "gunjsn, tu yahan?", finally realizing her younger sister was here , she hugged her back, "gunjan tu yahan kaise?", gunajn broke form the hug, "di tum tu hum sab ko bhol gayi per hum tu nahi bholey na, uffff, kitni payri lag rahi ho,", gunjan looked at her sister from top to bottom with appreciating eyes, "hmmm..pata hai, per hamesha ki tarah, tujh se thori kam hi pyari lag rahi hon", both of them broke into a giggle.

"di maa , bauji bhi ayen hain,",
"sach", nupur was very happy listening to this and as she turned she saw her parents walking towards her, her heart filled with joy, and she ran towards them but stopped in the middle way,

"mar jao, thora bhoj tu kam hoga na"...

everything ran in front of her eyes, her peals, her tears, but these people did not not listen her, threw her away like trash, as if..

'kaisi ho nupur?", her father's voice collided with her ear drums and she controlled the tears, her anger shot up at this question, why would her father be bothered, why would he be?
"nupur, tum ne ik phn bhi nahi kiya, is liye hum milne a gaye, bhol gayi hamien?", this was her mother, again the boils become vigorous,when was she ever remembered by them ,her eyes became red and was about to speak her heart out when she saw mayank standing behind them, carefully observing her expressions.

She controlled her anger and, tried to smile, "thek hon",   her mother hugged her and without even wanting nupur's eyes brimmed with tears she couldn't understand, whether it was anger or helplessness, but all she knew was that she didn't want to talk to any of them,

Mayank was closely observing each and every expression of nupur, her excitement on seeing gunjan, then sudden joy of running towards her parents, then stopping, then that strange redness in her eyes and then tears, he couldn't put anything together to form a meaning, but he sensed something is wrong, "chaliye ander chaltey hain", mayank finally spoke up because strangely according to him nupur was not behaving properly.

They were walking inside, and nupur was not talking to her parents, she was  talking to gunjan and fro mayank it was a very surprising behavior, he knew she was a very friendly girl, but for such a warm person not to talk to her parents was surprising for him, or he thought may be he was over-reacting, may be he was observing her too much, well that he couldn't help!, but he shrugged off the thought.

They entered the lounge and nupur opened the drawing room for them, they all were sitting and mayank, mayank was talking with her parents, they were being so nervous and confused that even mayank got embarrassed and didn't know how to make them comfortable , nupur was quiet most of the time and the only time mayank saw her talking or smiling was only with gunjan, even when her parents tried to talk she tried to ignore.

mayank couldn't understand the reason, forced marriage did cross his mind, but according to him, she was happy with the marriage now, or had started trying to be happy, then she had no point in being angry.

They were served with tea, although nupur was serving everyone but the coldness was very evident, and for the first time, mayank started to feel angry on nupur, he was not liking the way she was behaving with her parents.

finally after two hours, nupur's parents left, mayank sent the driver to drop them home, he saw that they were being very nice to him and they so wanted to talk with nupur but she was not at all responding, and mayank didn't like this fact at all, rather he felt angry.

They all left and nupur went in the kitchen, mayank wanted to talk to her , but he observed she was disturbed, he was double minded, they didn't share a deep relation to the extent that she would right away tell her everything or he would right away question.

He thought may be she will tell her self, so he went to the study,

Nupur was disturbed, suddenly she had started feeling a heavy burden on her shoulders and heart, she thought now i won't matter what her parents thought of her , she had such a lovely partner, but it meant and it hurt!...she so wnated mayank close to her but he was no where.

They both didn't had much ineraction that day, nupur was exploring the house, alerting the setting where she needed, exploring the kitchen and mayank was mostly in the study, because he and his books, could spend  a lifetime together.

After the dinner, nupur came into the room, and mayank was sitting on the bed readinga book again. She slowly closed the door again, went to change and when she returned mayank was till reading.

She quietly stepped on the bed and walked on her knees to mayank's side, and sat down. staring him. Maynk was lost in the book,

 "ap mujh se naraz ho?",

mayank turned towards her, dressed in a white night dress, wet hair fluttering on her cheeks and slightly wetting her sleeves, and the innocent look that could melt even stones,

"nahi,", he again shifted his eyes to the book when nupur took the book form his hand and placed it away, "nupur ye",

"main sara din wait kar rahi thi ap ka", her voice was weakening and mayank again looked at her and finally his heart surrendered, her huge eyes became more huge showing worry and her face seemed swelled due to pouting, her innocence was too difficult to resist, he slid his hand across her waist and pulled her close, "so my wife is complaining?"

he tried to look into her eyes,
she closed her eyes and placed her head on his chest "ap ne dophar se mujh se baat nahi ki hai", her voice seemed even more fragile, today she was feeling so vulnerable, and mayank was shocked at her first attempt of closeness but then he placed is arms around her, completely wrapping her, thought may be now he could ask, even after trying he was not able to let go off her behavior, and nupur was trying to absorb the warmth of his closeness, "why were u rude with ur parents nupur?",

the voice was soft and tender as always, but nupur sensed something which was never before, and it was strictness and she knew he was NOT faking it.

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perkilicious IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 6:19am | IP Logged

haye kinzu.......Day Dreaming

the startin was soooooo cuteBig smile i loved it.....n his cute anger wen d door bell rings lol......
all was so cute.......
n then her parents came.......n all......well i really donno if they r bad or gud....or else nw that shes married toh they r being sweet her but watevr they r her parents na.....
i liked d way mayank was concerned.......thats totally adorable....
n the ending.........finally nupurz started gettin so affected by his silence......aww......m totally lovin that.....
n his ques.......hope shez able to pour her heart out in front of mayank.....n we'll get to c sum emo bondinBig smile m sure he'll hndle d situation very nicelyEmbarrassed.waitin for d nxt update as usual.....u always stop at a crucial point!!
anyways my magical rockstar u were mindblowing as usual!Hug
tc keep smiling:)

Edited by Nikita-Sharma - 03 February 2011 at 6:32am

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varsh-mayur Goldie

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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 6:20am | IP Logged
hey mehek nice one yippe i think im the first one to comment......loved itSmile

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princess_dj IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 6:20am | IP Logged
Fantastic update Mehak.......... Do continue soon.........Big smile

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Silent.Dreamer IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 6:25am | IP Logged
awesome update yarr..

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