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MAYUR FF..Weaving the Magic..Part 15 on pg 85 (Page 57)

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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 7:41am | IP Logged
hi!!!

awesome...i'm totally in love with ur ff....Smile
last two parts read together...n i had a grin on my face the whole timeEmbarrassed
loved it loved it!!
oh mayank n nupur r so so awesome cuteSmile
continue soonSmile

divya

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Part 8

-Another great part! Still curious as to why mihir left so soon…

-"plz Mrs Sharma, apne husband k sath front seat per bethiye" – I'm totally in love with this Mayank!!! He is so perfect….

-Nupur is stealing glances at him? Hmmm....so cute!

-loved the line abt CDs sharing the bed…LOL

-Arranging the CDs part was too good!!!!! Mayank brushing her hand, she avoiding it and then going close to her…aww…I was totally imagining it.  

-They've made some progress…am very happy to see that.

 

Thanks for the pm.



Edited by Ishita16 - 01 February 2011 at 8:12am

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Haaylaa..
Ekdum mast Wink
Love this naughty Mayuuu!!!

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merey jaisey lakhon milen hon gey tujh ko piya...mujhe tu mila tu hi..

this line is too sweet..........

love d part........

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amazing update......Smile

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Part 9

-I totally loved this part!

-the part where he promises fulfill all her dreams and she talks about bhindi, watching bollywood movies…it was so cute and funny!!!

-She blushed!!! God, I could totally picture this. So happy to see these changes in Nupur.

-"I don't think u will have to wait for long'" – Do I even I have to say how much I loved this?? It was so sweet and unbelievable. I didn't really think she would actually say something like this….

-The kiss and his fake anger – I was in Mayur Land…

-"she had started to see a new dream, a dream of loving her husband!.." – Hopefully, this dream of hers will come true…

-Again, loved the lines at the end..

 

Part 10

-U really outdo urself each time. When I thought u had done a great job with the last part, u proved me wrong with this one. I loved the whole morning…it was so mayurly magical!!

-Mayank pulling her by her wrist and not letting go of her and then acting like she is not with him on the phone …Mayank is becoming very naughty!!! Look like their relationship has gone a mile ahead in two days.

-"she could sneak out, but she didn't want to" – Aww…I so loved this.  It shows how she is also falling in love with him.

-She slept again and was caught by Mayank? LOL Nupur is like a sweet child and Mayank is being too naughty…but I really love this Mayank!

 



Edited by Ishita16 - 01 February 2011 at 4:47pm

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Express.. that was just ... just... what do I say...? I so loved Mayank shouting Nupppppuuuuuuuurrrrrrrr.... so full of drama... and she is so full of innocence...
 
Update fast.. raha nahin jaata...

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why is he cross with her? she's just so cute!

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