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MAYUR FF..Weaving the Magic..Part 15 on pg 85 (Page 54)

Bhawna_arti IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 3:24am | IP Logged
Nice part.Smile

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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 5:53am | IP Logged
mehaku jaldi update kar 10th part.........I m waiting eagerly

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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 5:53am | IP Logged
nice part  =)

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thank u so much guysEmbarrassed, and bushra sweet, when did u see me blushing in clg?AngryEmbarrassed

PART 10:

The sunlight shined in their room, wishing them a good morning, a morning which will mark a new beginning in their lives.

Mayank was getting irritated at the constant rays falling on his face; he placed his arm on his eyes, turning his face towards the other side, and again hi phn was ringing!, nupur 's sleep was also disturbed by the phn bell, but both of them were not opening their eyes

"Oh God!, ab aj kaun hai!", he placed the cushion on his eyes, nupur opened her eyes, and mayank was very near him, facing her side, cushion on his eyes, she remembered what happened last night, again blushing her heart started beating with a high speed, but phn again intruded her thoughts, she patted mayank on his arm.

"uthiye, ap ka phn",

Mayank was not opening his eyes, his phn was on his other side , she slightly leaned over him to get hold of the mobile, it was flashing. ..DAD

"uthiye baba ka phn hai"

This time mayank slightly opened his eyes, finding nupur sitting beside him, hair pulled towards one side

"good morning nupur,"

How was his voice always so soft, her heart melted when she heard her name from him, so soft, so tender, so full of

 but again the ring!..

"ummm..good morning, ye phn"

mayank held the phn, constantly looking at her and nupur lowered her eyes and was about to step down the bed when mayank caught hold of her hand and pulled her back, so she fell, back on the bed, beside mayank

mayank attended the call..

"hey dad, phonch gaye ap?", he was tightly holding nupur's  hand, whereas she was constantly trying to free her hand, staring at him but he was not bothered at all, 'how was ur flight?"

Nupur this time used her other hand, but mayank's grip was strong, he looked at nupur, giving him a "IT's NOT GONAA WORK " look, and nupur was blushing hard

"nupur ko bulon?, ik minute" ..he cleared his throat, "nuppppppuuuuuuuuur"

Nupur was shocked , as why was he shouting she was lying next to him, he looked at her laughing

"yahan aao, dad se baat kar lo", nupur was shocked at his tactics, he was holding her hand so tightly and shouting as if she was in the next room , while mayank winked at her, she gave him an angry glare and tried snatching the mobile from her other hand,, but mayank moved the cell away

"a rai rahi dad, ik minute," he again cleared the throat "nupur a bhi jaooooo"

This was enough, she snatched the mobile while mayank turned, held her hand by both of his hands,

"namste baba, thek se phonch gaye ap?", she was trying hard to sound normal,

Mayank was constantly looking at her, "gi main..woo..", she glared at mayank, and he understood that Mihir was asking abt where was she, "main kitchen main thi", she gave mayank a triumphant look that she did not get confuse, and mayank again stared at her with love filled eyes, again making her confuse.

"gi baba, bye",she handed the mobile to mayank, and he disconnected the phn..

"ye kia kar rahe they ap", she spoke up as soon as mayank placed the phn away

"kai kar raha tha?", again a soft voice, which always touched the strings of nupur's heart, she looked away.

"acha ab mera hath choriye"


"ku k ab uth jate hain"

"ku nupur, so jao dobara", he closed his eyes, holding her hand more tight

"9 baj gaye hain, aj ap ko kisi meeting pe nahi jana hai?"

"nahi, kal main ne sab ko mana kar diya hai office main k mujhe 1 hafte tak disturb nahi karen"

"ik hafte tak!, ku?", she was really shocked, while mayank opened his eyes , moving bit close, "ku k Mrs Sharma meri 2 din pehle shaadi hoyi hai, aur main apni wife k sath time spend karna chata hon, na k stupid files aur computers k sath", he smiled again closing his eyes and nupur's cheeks again turned red.

"acha dulha g, ap mera hath choren gey"

"ku choron?, kai kaam hai?, so jao chup kar k", he held it more tightly, "per mujhe neend nahi ayi", she helplessly said, "per mujhe a rahi hai, waise bhi its just 9!, so jao",

Nupur gave up, mayank closed his eyes,  and nupur started looking at the ceiling, thinking abt her life, the strange happiness she was feeling with mayank, she remembered how she used to hate orders, but whenever mayank asked her something, she so wanted to full fill it,

Because he was always so soft, so tender, so understanding, so loving, so caring, so sweet, so..

.her mind was running out of adjectives, he was just the the perfect, the perfect anyone could wish for ..

She slightly tilted her head towards mayank, he had slept again, she felt the grip of his hand on her hand was weakening, she smiled thinking now she could sneak out, but she didn't want to, she wanted to see his smile when he would see her beside him, she knew it would be a heavenly smile, so she started waiting for him to get up.

She herself closed her eyes, but she  slept again.

After sometime, thinking that she had been closing eyes for only 10 minutes, she opened her eyes, stretching her arms, and she saw mayank sitting beside her, hidden behind the news paper,she realized that she herself slept, and she knew that mayank would tease her now, so she slowly tried to get off the bed and run to dressing before mayank could even know, as he was so involved in the newspaper.

She made a prayer and slowly pushed away the blanket, and was about to step off when her hand was caught again,"good afternoon"

Nupur turned towards him, shying, "Good afternoon, ap kab uthey?"

"thori dair pehle"

"tu mujhe utha detey ap"


Nupur lowered her eyes, wanting to change the topic

 " acha kia time hai?"

She looked at the clock and it was 1.00!

"1 baj gaya!, main itni dair so rahi thi?"

"ab itni bhi dair nahi hai, koi baat nahi",mayank was normal but  nupur was really shocked but she figured out the reason, "sab ap ki waja se, keh rahi thi na k mujhe nahi sona, per zabardasti sulaya ap ne, wiase ap k sone k baad main utne lagi thi.."

She suddenly stopped, she was speaking at a spree and mayank was very closely observing her,

"phir ku nai uthi?"

He looked into her eyes, knowing the answer though, but nupur couldn't tell him that she wanted to see his smile,"wo.."

Mayank was waiting for an answer, "wo..mujhe breakfast karna hai", she jumped out of the bed, before mayank could further confuse her , she rushed into the dressing.

She returned in a light green shalwar suit and the room was empty, she came down stairs and mayank was sitting on the table with  breakfast in front of him and eyes glued to newspaper, she sat beside him and mayank looked at her,

"aj sari nahi pehni?", he was a bit cross,

 "bus asiey hi nahi pehni"

Mayank made a face, "well, chalo breakfast kar lo, phir ap ki driving classes start karte hain."

Nupur had again forgot abt it, but he had not!, this person was surprising her every moment,.."ap apna koi wada nahi bholtey?"


merey jaisey lakhon milen hon gey tujh ko piya...mujhe tu mila tu hi..

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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 6:05am | IP Logged

mehak mehak mehak.....i loveddddddddddddddd it!

kinzu u knw ur this sweet si story takes me to mn dreamland everytym......i mean d way u write is just awesome......the cute tactics of mayank d super adorable nupur........everything is just so perfect!! seriously..........i love it........awwwwwwww.........sari ku nhi pehni.....waitin for d driving lessons!
isoooooooo love d idea!!Embarrassed
n mayankz magic on nupur is so evident nwBig smile she was right he wont need to wait for long!!EmbarrassedLOLEmbarrassed
n u r my rockstar........everytym u manage to create a superbly adorable update n m eagerly waitin for d nxt part...though i knw u will update tom i cant wait!!OuchLOLEmbarrassed
anyways like nupuz didnt hav adjectives to decribe mayu i dnt hav either to describe how gud u r n how much i loveddddddd it!
tc! keep smiling n keep writing sweety!Embarrassed

Edited by Nikita-Sharma - 01 February 2011 at 6:44am

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mulan. IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 6:10am | IP Logged
mayank and Nupur are just too cute , not to forget romantic for words!!!!!!!! Wink
so this is what was going in ur mind today in colg han?? Wink
beautiful as usual !!!!!!!!!
m looking forward to the driving classes!!!!!! Day Dreaming

p.s. love u!!!!!!!

Edited by mulan. - 01 February 2011 at 6:29am

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well again its an amazing update..

just loved it...

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