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MAYUR FF..Weaving the Magic..Part 15 on pg 85 (Page 52)

Alisha2887 Goldie

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Posted: 31 January 2011 at 12:44pm | IP Logged
This update was so beautiful Mehak. It was so adorable and cute.
Loved the part when Mayank said he would wait for her to fall in love. He is so sweet.
Can't wait for the next part.
Thanks a lot for the pm Mehak.

Edited by Alisha-MJHT - 31 January 2011 at 12:44pm

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-DreamzGirl- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 31 January 2011 at 12:58pm | IP Logged
nice one ..................

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-SAISakura16- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 31 January 2011 at 1:21pm | IP Logged

Part 4

-As a girl, I can totally understand Nupur's pain and nice to know that Mayank see through her.

-Nupur was so cute when she was listing all the actors...reminded me of my nephew when he is asked what he wants for

-So Mayank's love has started affecting her?

-I was upset too when Nupur took the ring off!!! Esp when he has given it to her with so much love. But am so glad that she asked him to make her wear it again. Loved the little eyelock.

-Mayank is so sweet, he is trying so hard to make her feel comfortable.

"It was now he, who had to cover the distance, take the first step every time, and she would follow,

and destiny knew they will...WEAVE THE MAGIC,

because all that was separating them was... a heap of rose petals..." - I totally loved these lines.

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-SAISakura16- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 31 January 2011 at 1:41pm | IP Logged

Part 5 - Very touching!!

-It was sad to see Nupur's family paying no heed to her wishes and then telling her to die. I understand that coming from a background like theirs, it was natural for them to agree to a marriage since Mayank was rich and they thought she would get everything she wanted. But they should take her opinion into account as well.

-I loved the little flashback of Mayank about his first meeting with Nupur. So well described. LOL, he actually followed her into her house....Mihir dreaming of grandkids and Mayank's reaction was hilarious.

-Gunjan speaking of the reality was really touching.

"during the night, they had tuned their sides towards each other.. " - aww...

Part 6 - Great!

-Mayank is such an understanding caring husband!!

-Nupur being scared to go out was so real...I mean she was in an unknown house where she knew no one but her husband and he wasn't there either...

-Nupur not wanting Mihir to scold sweet!

-Mihir and Nupur's bonding was really nice to see!! Nupur blushing when he referred to Mayank as her pati was so cute!

Part 7

-Aww..I felt bad for Mayank. He thought maybe she had missed him but she replied about the movies.

-she was waiting for him to call her & feeling guilty without knowing the actual reason...sweet! looks like someone is slowly falling in love AFTER marriage.

-Poor Mayank! He had to eat bhindi & Mihir was enjoying it LOL. Mayank's dad is so cool. The things u do for love....LOL

-What's up with Mayank's dad? Why is he leaving so soon?

I still have 2 more parts left to comment on...will do it later today or tomorrow for sure. Take care. Thanks for the pms.

Edited by Ishita16 - 31 January 2011 at 1:51pm

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sumonetolub IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 31 January 2011 at 11:10pm | IP Logged
omg so cuteeeee!!!....of course nupur wouldnt be able to resist his so happy they said exactly what was in their heart......she seems like shes already in love with him!.....though it will take her time to finally accept and confess it to him......will wait for the next update Smile........naina

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Auroni.92 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 31 January 2011 at 11:26pm | IP Logged
Came here after a whole week and first thing i did read the parts in one go...
It ws damn cute mehak..ClapClap..And it ws the best part of this ff...Full of innocence...At first i got shocked to read 'SHE ENVIED HIM'...But then finally SHE BLUSHED..Day DreamingDay Dreaming..Loved the line ' I dnt think u will have to wait for long'..Day DreamingDay Dreaming.The blushing nupur and satisfying mayank just stole my heart...SillySilly
U made me love them more day by day...thnxxx so much for this...
Love u..HugHug..keep pming me!!!

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Zehnaseeb IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 1:58am | IP Logged
First of all really really sorry for such a late replyEmbarrassed
This update was so cute. I feel kinda bad for nupur, she was forced into marriage but mayank is the perfect guy. He's the type of guy every girl would want to fall in love with. I loved the way she was blushing so adorable!! And so was her I dont think you'll have to wait very long answer Day Dreaming
You write romance with a lot of innocence, I love the way their feelings are being projected.
Keep up the great workHug and once again sorry for such a late replyEmbarrassed

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dynamic_doll IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 2:41am | IP Logged

Hey Mehak!

sorry for the late comment
coming to the was so sweet nd romantic EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
mayank is soo adorable...........anyone can fall in love with him
hope Nupur falls in love with Mayank soon
waiting for the next update
continue soon
nd thnx for the pm Smile

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