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MAYUR FF..Weaving the Magic..Part 15 on pg 85 (Page 41)

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Posted: 29 January 2011 at 3:15pm | IP Logged
Brilliant update Mehak.
Loved the bhindi scene. But why is Mihir leaving so soon??
Waiting for the next part
Thanks a lot for the pm

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Posted: 29 January 2011 at 9:35pm | IP Logged
The bhindi scene reminded me of MayUr's paneer scene where poor mayu had to eat paneer because of nupurLOL
Wonder why mihir is leaving so suddenlyConfused there'll definitely be a strong reason for it.Big smile
thanks for the pm and keep up the great work, the simplicity of your writing makes it even more beautifulHug

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Posted: 29 January 2011 at 10:39pm | IP Logged
Fab update Mehak loved it. thanx for the pm.

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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 12:33am | IP Logged
bhindi is my fav too...very cute n sweet update....

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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 12:49am | IP Logged
looking forward to an unfolding of baba's mystery and the budding love
of our MN..
nice update!! 

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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 1:27am | IP Logged
thank u so much for ur lovely comment sweets...Hug

@amy..OMG.Shocked.u are getting naughty angel.LOL.lolz..yes they will be alone at home now! Embarrassed

@divya di..awww.. u ate kerala as mayank ate bhindi..so sweet..Embarrassed


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PART 8:

Three of them sat in the car, mayank on the driving seat and mihir on the front seat and nupur on the back seat.

Mihir was talking constantly with nupur but nupur sensed that mayank was silent, a strange silence.

They reached the airport, and Mihir's luggage was shifted to the trolley,

"bye dad", mayank hugged him tightly and nupur was standing beside them, "bye beta, ", he kept on standing like this for a moment, "acha ab choro mujhe, apni beti se bhi milne do".

Mihir shrugged him off because he was fearing to cry,

Bye nupur beta", Mihir side hugged nupur

"bye baba, ap dobara kab aao gey?", mihir's heart melted, eh kissed her forehead, "jab ap bualo gey beta"

He held both of their hands and placed them over each other, "khush raho dono, God Bless"

He again kissed their foreheads and left.

Mayank knew he always came for going but still he always had to normalize himself.

"chalen?", mayank finally broke the silence between them,

They both went to the car and nupur again opened the back door,

"nupur ye kia kar rahi ho?,

"gari main beth rahi hon", she innocently replied,

"pata hai mujhe, peche ku beth rahi ho?"

It suddenly dawned on him what did mayank meant; mayank walked towards the front door and opened it for nupur, "plz Mrs Sharma, apne husband k sath front seat per bethiye"

He looked straight into her eyes and she lowered them blushing, and sitting, mayank closed the door.

Mayank sat on the driving seat and nupur started stealing glances at him,

He IS SO HANDSOME, she was loving the way he was driving, she had never seen anyone drive in her life and when she saw, it was her husband, eyes fixed on the road, right elbow resting on the door, the other hand on the gear, revolving the steering wheel, changing gears, her heart was skipping beats.

"kai dekh rahi ho nupur?",

she was caught!

"kuch nahi". She managed to utter, "ap bht achi gari drive karte ho,"

Mayank started giggling, "thank you, ap ko sekhni hai"

"driving?, main?", she was again amazed

"haan ap, itna heran hone wali kaunsi baat hai?, sekhni hai?"

'mujhe kaun sikhaaye ga?", she was still confused

Mayank shook his head in disbelief, "main sikhaon ga aur kaun sikhaye ga, bolo sekhni hai?"

She was pleasantly surpsied, "gi, sekhni hai", she had such an excited voice, mayank glanced at her smiling, "ok fine!, kal shoro karen gey"

Rest of their journey was in silence, they reached home,

"nupur  dinner kar len?"

"bhindi?", she said it sarcastically and started laughing, "very funny!,", mayank got irritated and took steps towards the dinner table, "sirf ap k liye main ne life main pehli baar bhindi khayi", he pulled out chair for nupur and nupur again blushed.

They both were served with  paantheeli,

and then both of them were moving upstairs together, mayank was  lost in his mobile, while nupur was feeling strange  walking towards the room, she was trying hard to  control her beats.

They entered the room, the lights were off, nupur went to the switch board and mayank went to change , he returned after changing and the CDs were still lying on the bed,

"hmmm, lagta aj se sab CDs bhi hamare sath bed share karen gi, ku nupur?"

"main utha deti hon, taunt ku ka rahe hain?', nupur made a face and mayank started giggling, and helping her to collect CDs.

"in ko rakhen gey kahan, ap ka rack tu full hai", she was confusedly staring at the rack, when mayank came behind her

"tu jaga bana len gey, whats the big deal!",  he turned her neck finding him so close to her, her beats again loosing on their rhythm, he slowly took the CDs from her hand, deliberately brushing his hand on her's, leaving her in shivers.

He moved all of his CDs to one side and as the rack was on almost half of the wall, so he made enough space, nupur turn by turn handed him CDs and every time he brushed his hand, he had this naughyt 'innocent look, his eyes confessing what he was upto and face giving the expression of whats wrong?

"nupur aur CDs do", he kept looking at the rack, and nupur placed it on the shelf,

"pakr lijiye khud hi, rakh di hain main ne", this time she enjoyed bcz she had also made a smart move, while mayank's smile vanished, he saw CDs lying on the  shelf, but he was not that sweet to be caught in traps, "gi nahi, ik tu main help kar raha hon, and u are not at all bothered, mujhe khud pakrao", he said in an orderly tone

Nupur was not clever, she always tried to be clever, as a result she had to give up soon, she picked up and handed him.

Mayank couldn't believe at her innocence, he took the CDs , this time not brushing his hand and placed them in the rack, and then he took steps towards her, nupur was busy admiring the rack when she sensed him coming close,  she was startled.

"itni innocent kasie ho nupur?", he was not mocking, not making fun, not teasing, he was asking,

 nupur's lips started to tremble a bit.

"u are so smiple!", he wasn't  able to figure out how to admire this girl, how MORE to admire this girl, and nupur couldn't understand that was it a compliment or a taunt, 'wo, ..main", she wanted to dig an excuse, his eyes had caught hers, "main aur CDs"

"kahtam ho gayi hain", he calmly replied crossing his hands on his chest and she looked back at the bed, and it was empty now, nupur bit her tongue, "main change kar k.."

She couldn't even mange to speak properly and almost ran to the dressing, leaving mayank smiling.

Unlike yesterday, today she was feeling a blush, she smiled to herself, again opening the closet, today choosing a pink gown,

She entered the room and the lights were off, she was surprised, somewhere she was expecting to talk to him more'

She shrugged off the thought and walked towards the bed, mayank was lying facing her side, although his eyes were closed but still she felt awkward stepping on the bed.

Mayank was awake, he knew she was waiting that may be he would turn his side, but mayank was determined not to turn his side, she waited for a couple of more moments, then finally giving up she slowly sat down and finally lying down facing the opposite side of mayank, slowly pulling a bit of blanket towards herself.

Mayank smiled that they had made some progress since last night, and then laughing on his own stupid thought he closed his eyes, he was very sleepy himself.

Nupur was wide awake, although she was very happy, she got carried away with all the things, but she couldn't let go off ONE confusion.

There was no fault in mayank, no fault in his house, he was the most perfect person she ever met, he could have so many options, than why she, moreover he was being so kind and soft to her, why would he?

"Suniye", she finally managed to utter after thinking much

, "hmmm", he was almost in his slumber

"ap ne mujh se shaddi ku ki??'

And mayank opened his eyes immediately.

Nupur turned her side towards him, even in dark, mayank could see her questioning eyes,

"ye kaisa sawal hai nupur?", he was shocked that still she wasn't able to read his eyes!

"jaisa bhi hai, batiye na, ku shaddi ki ap ne?, ap tu kisi se bhi shaddi kar sakte they?, mujh se ku?"

Nupur was determined to have an answer and mayank couldn't understand but he was not liking her questions," so jao nupur, subha baat karen gey, good night", he turned to the opposite side, now his back facing nupur.

"plz, ku ?, mujh se ku?',

mayank sighed  and sat up,  nupur was already sitting, he moved a bit close to her.



Edited by -Mehak - 30 January 2011 at 1:32am

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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 1:32am | IP Logged
Mehak
wow - what a surprise
u updated this ff so early

thank u so muchhhhhhhhhhhh

Edit''''''''''''''''''

beautiful update mehak
yup loved mayur moment
mayanks naughtiness and nups innocence were perfect ........
veryyyyyyyyy cuteeeeeeeee and niceeeeeeeee update
keep it up


Edited by -Faria- - 30 January 2011 at 4:23am

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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 1:40am | IP Logged
You updated so early todayBig smile
As usual it's brilliant. Love naughty mayank and shy nupur.. It will be interesting as to how mayank answers her question. Maybe after getting an answer she'll realize how much he loves herEmbarrassed mayank's going to teach nupur how to drive how sweet!Embarrassed
thanks for the pmHug

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