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MAYUR FF..Weaving the Magic..Part 15 on pg 85 (Page 33)

JaeeDevRathore Goldie

Joined: 21 September 2010
Posts: 1046

Posted: 28 January 2011 at 9:58am | IP Logged
I have edited my comment on Page 27 Smile

The relationship between Mayank and Nupur is so pure and innocent - She cares about him but needs time to understand it and he is so full of love - I am sure soon enough, she would understand his love for her and hers for him ...

His father is a wonderful man, the way he made her comfortable was so nice ... And she wanting Mayank next to her was a sign of a new beginning ....

Her childish expressions to everything stings me because now somehow I understand why she is like that - yes she is still a bit weird for me but not that puzzle anymore ...

You are writing beautifully Di - each and every thing has that essence of love and innocence in it ... Perfect ...

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cutiepie12 Goldie

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 10:12am | IP Logged
awww lil genius superb....
i jus loved da bond mayank n nupur shared wid deir dad....seriously its rarely hard to find such a great dad

Edited by cutiepie12 - 28 January 2011 at 10:14am

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Mou. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 16744

Posted: 28 January 2011 at 10:15am | IP Logged
another nice update mahek...i love the way the story is progressing here......nupur is gradually knowing things abt mayank & his father & their relations.........& i must say u r the most regular updater of FFs here......thank feels nice to read to this ff every day!!!!!!!!!

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-DreamzGirl- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 10:24am | IP Logged
loved this update now i understand this is ajourney of a middle class girl in a very rich family.............

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rads14 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 11:03am | IP Logged
awesome part!!
really sweet!!
loved it!!
cont soon :)

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Alisha2887 Goldie

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 11:10am | IP Logged
Another fabulous update Mehak. Loved it a lot.
Loved the conversation between Nupur and Mayank's father. Both Mihir and Mayank are trying to make Nupur feel comfortable in the new surroundings. It's all very new for her but I'm sure Nupur will adjust soon.

Looking forward to the next part.
Thanks for the pm Mehak.

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DhanakZ IF-Dazzler

Joined: 18 June 2010
Posts: 3583

Posted: 28 January 2011 at 11:22am | IP Logged
wao so beautiful update dear
Mayank  is so good and his Father is to much good
I really liked the update 
Thanks for Pm

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AmyArTiMayUr IF-Rockerz

Joined: 10 November 2009
Posts: 6287

Posted: 28 January 2011 at 12:01pm | IP Logged
Ahhh angel....fabulous man!!!!!Big smileBig smile

My mood wasnt good at all but it improved when i read thisBig smileBig smile

Loved Mihir-Nupur interactionLOLLOL he was teasing herLOL

She is seeing sooo many changes from her own family.....Big smileBig smile

What i loved the most was the ending....when she heard Mayank hoot and she jumped and shouted "Agaye"LOLLOL she seemed sooo eager to have him backLOLLOLLOLLOL Meri MoviesLOLLOL God she is such a sweetheartLOLLOL

Loving this more and more there any way you can update twice a day??? lolsTongueTongue

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