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MAYUR FF..Weaving the Magic..Part 15 on pg 85 (Page 30)

zarfishanzahid IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 5:19am | IP Logged
awesome update

thx alot for the pm

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Fantasia. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 6:23am | IP Logged


They both opened their eyes together, seeing each other ..

Mayank's eyes were still droopy, but he could see how beautiful she looked with her slightly messed hair and her half open eyes, lips slightly curve in a smile..

"good morning nupur"

Nupur felt his voice so husky, she smiled back, half in sleep, "good morning", meanwhile the phn was constantly ringing, but mayank was just staring at her, nupur could feel the blaze in his eyes, but the phn was constantly ringing., "phn", she spoke up and mayank blinked to search the phn on the side table..

"hello", nupur saw that his eyes were closed, may be he was too sleepy, and she saw the slight irritation on his face, "ye sab baad main nahi ho sakta?", he again paused and nupur was waiting for his answer, "ok fine, half an hour", he closed  his eyes more firm, placing the phn again on the table.

"kia hua?", she asked in a soft voice, mayank turned towards her smiling, "kuch nahi, mera stupid staff hai, aj bhi meri meeting arrange kar di hii, tu jana pare ga"

He got out of the bed and nupur also sat up and was about to step down "ap ku uth rahi ho?", nupur looked up at him and didn't get down, "its ok,  so jao, waise bhi abhi bus 10 baje hain, itni subha uth kar kia karo gi?", he smiled and went to the dressing,

10 'o clock, in her home, this was regarded as afternoon and here he was so normal at 10 and was asking her to sleep again,

A HUSBAND WAS ASKING HER WIFE TO SLEEP AGAIN!, she had seen her father fighting with her mother, she was never allowed to sleep and when she was sick, and here..

"nupur", she got out of her thoughts and found that he was sitting right in front of her on the bed, dressed in a white shirt and blue jeans, she noticed his hair were wet but neatly set, and she could smell the perfume, which was so strong,  she cuddled unconsciously, "sorry mujhe jana parr raha hai, per main jaldi a jaon ga, I guess ap so jaon, ap k uthne tak main a jaon ga", he was smiling so sweetly and nupur also smiled back,  "koi baat nahi", shrugging off the thought that she was falling so badly for his physical charms.

'hmmm..ok, tu main chalta hon, aur agr ap ko breakfast karna hoga tu ye intercom hai, yahan se mangwa lena, "he pointed towards cordless phn at the side table, nupur looked at it strangely "ye bikul phn jsa hi hota hai", he again smiled hoping that her nervousness would decrease a bit,

"thek hai?", mayank was not assured of her convenience and  this time she smiled making him assured.

"hmm..good, tu main jaon?", he innocently asked and she nodded lightly, making mayank go flat at her innocence, he so wanted to kiss her forehead, but he controlled his urges , just patting gently on the check, "bye", nupur felt a strange shiver through her body on his micro second touch.

He got up and walked towards the door when he turned smiling, "bye nupur, so jana ok!," He left closing the door and nupur  lied down  looking at the room again smiling, it looked much more beautiful than night ,she got out of the bed, went to the window, where she saw mayank standing talking on the phn,

She smiled, looking at him constantly, he was taking smell steps , talking on the phn, then he sat in his car an left, nupur saw his car moving out of the garage way, and then it disappeared,

She didn't feel anything, she just wanted to see him leaving.

Although it was only one night, but she felt so brave with mayank, but now she was alone. She was confused, but first she decided to change, she chose a blue sari from the ward robe, she loved blue.

She took a bath and wore the sari, next she sat in front of the dressing table, lightly brushing her hair, she opened the drawers of the table, they were full of jewelry boxes, she slowly took out each one of them, they all were so beautiful, she decided upon a set of earnings matching with her sari, wearing them she felt so happy, she used the cosmetics applying makeup, her heart was so jolly and vibrant, finally she felt satisfied with her appearance, then she checked upon all the perfumes, she liked all of them, but deiced to use one of them.

Now after getting ready, she didn't know what to do, she wasn't hungry, she was feeling this strange awkwardness, whether she should go down or not, she slowly opened the door, she saw a comparatively old man sitting downstairs on the sofa, reading newspaper, she knew he was mayank's dad, she swallowed a lump in her throat and went inside the room again.

She was feeling scared, she so wanted mayank to come back, but she gained strength and started walking down stairs.

Mihir sensed footsteps and shifted his eyes from the newspaper, seeing nupur coming down stiars nervously, he smiled standing,"nupur uth gaye beta ap, aao!", he came near the end of the stirs and nupur managed to smile , she came down stairs and bended slightly to touch his feet,"arey nahi, hamre ghr main betiyan paon nahi chooti", he brushed his hand over her head, "khush rahiye"

Nupur could see the affection in his eyes, and she also smiled,"ayien bethiye", she slightly placed his hand over her shoulder and both of them sat on the dining table, "pata hai main kab se wait kar raha tha k ap dono k sath breakfast kaon, per mujhe abhi nakul ne bataya k mayank chala gaya hai",

Nupur nodded,"gi, wo"

"kamal hai, aj kia kaam par gaya hai usey, aney do zara"

"nahi, wo jana nahi chatey they, wo keh rahe they un k stupid staff ne meeting rakh di hai", she really got scared, she didn't want mihir to scold mayank, somewhere she didn't want any harm even approaching towards him.

Mihir smiled,"jo bhi hai, punishment tu usey mile gi", he giggled and nupur also joined him

"acha beta ap kia nastha karo gi", she didn't knew what did she like, "umm..kkcuh bhi"

"chalo phir aj main ne halwa banwaya hai, tu wohi khatey hain, nakul beta halwa serve kar dijiye"

Nupur turned and thought may be nakul was the other son but she was surprised to see that nakul was the servant, she really liked the way a servant was addressed, they finished their halwa

"nupur kaisa laga pa ko beta"

"bht acha hai uncle", mihir smiled a bit", waise mayank mujhe dad bulata hai, ap deicde kar lijiye ap ko kia bulana hai, dad bauji, baba, ya kuch aur, ku ki uncle tu nahi cahle ga"

He was ordering and nupur noticed the fake strictness in his tone, she started giggling, "baba thek hai"

"jasi ap ki marzi, waise main mayank ka best friend bhi ho, so hum bhi dosti kar sakte hain"

He put forward his hand, and nupur took it smiling"

"Wow, ab dekhna mayank kitna jelaous hoga, sharmne ki bikul zaroart nahi hai, ye ap ka ghr hai", nupur had started feeling comfortable, "chaliye ab ap ko ap ka ghr dikhata hon",

They both stood up, seeing the home, it was a very big house, nupur really enjoyed mihir's company, he was making her laugh so much,, she was getting fascinated by everything in the house

"yahan bus ap aur ye rehtay hain?"

"ye kaun?", Mihir decide to tease her too, after all she was also his friend now

"ye..wo..", nupur was shy taking mayank's name

"kaun ye nupur?", he was innocently asking and nupur was going red, finally she found out a way

"ap k betey", she said thinking she had made a clever move, "mtlb ap k pati?", mihir was much more smart than her, she blushed and nodded and Mihir silently blessed her for her innocence,'nahi, yahan bus mayank hi rehta hai"

"tu ap?"

"main yahan nahi rehta, thorey dino k liye aya hon", she noticed something sad in his eyes, "tu ap?"

"lambi kahani hai , khair chalo main ap ko terrace dikhata hon"

She was surprised that fathers like him also existed, she just knew her own father, upon whose entry the whole house went silent.

Mihir also made her talk to gunjan, she was the only one she missed, she talked to her and then she went to her room, Mihir had asked her to go to her room.

After entering the room, again mayank's thoughts captured her heart she looked at the clock, it was 12, mayank should have returned, she sat down again seeing her dresses and things when she heard a car horn.

"a gaye!",she jumped room her bed and ran to the window, seeing  mayank coming out of the car, holding big shopping bag, and as it was transparent, she could see what was inside

"meri movies!!", she was  shocked and ecstatic, and ran down stairs.

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perkilicious IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 6:27am | IP Logged

i knw m lateOuch but thankfully b4 the nxt updateBig smile

mahak.......i loveddddddddd it......i mean.........
sply mihir toh i just adore!! awwwwwww hez so sweet!!Embarrassed
n the starting........awwwww.....finally nupz is gettin comfortable there......
n the whole update was really sweet n cute.......
i seriously loved it like every update of urs!
now me eagerly waitin for todays update.........n the way she was excited movie dvdz dekh k ...awwwwwwww.......EmbarrassedLOLEmbarrassed
sorry for d delay!Embarrassed

Edited by Nikita-Sharma - 29 January 2011 at 5:24am

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 6:46am | IP Logged
Loooooved it,loved it, loved it.Hug omg Mehak how do you do it every time? you really are a magician i must say. can't wait for the next installment of our cutie-pies. thanx for the pm.

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Faria. IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 6:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shubhie

Loooooved it,loved it, loved it.Hug omg Mehak how do you do it every time? you really are a magician i must say. can't wait for the next installment of our cutie-pies. thanx for the pm.

Veryyyyyyyyyyyyyy Truuuuuuuuuuuuueeeeeeee

Love u Mehak
will comment soon

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 7:00am | IP Logged



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o....o Senior Member

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 7:04am | IP Logged
Sooooooooo cute! Day Dreaming
idk if I said this before but I just LOVE Mihir's character... Great job kinzu! Clap Clap 

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varsh-mayur Goldie

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 7:09am | IP Logged
hey mayank & his father r so understanding........i loved it

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