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MAYUR FF..Weaving the Magic..Part 15 on pg 85 (Page 27)

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 9:04am | IP Logged
awesome update....awww mayank's love at first sight!.....nupurs so lucky to have unknowingly got it all......a man who loves her and also a better life for herself......and her in-laws seem great as well....i guess she just needs to realize that mayank may just be the man of her dreams.....actually hes so sweet that she will definitely accept it......naina

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 9:14am | IP Logged
awesome update 
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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 9:16am | IP Logged
Embarrassedawwww lil genius i jus loved da lines 

"di sapney porey na b hi hon tu zindagi guzr jati hai, zarorat pori na ho tu zindagi nahi guzarti"

gosh.....i jus love u alot jaani....Embarrassed 

luv  u loadzHeart

brilliant update Clap

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 9:21am | IP Logged
hey mahek...wonderful update yaar! nupur's family background u described so well.no wonder she was paying more attention to other things than mayank before...& mayank cute guy -love at first sight hpota  hai, uske liye to shadi at first sight hogeya! he really have a nice dad who understand him well!
but i lik the last line u put...that night they had turned their sides towards each other..it shows the the start of the journey of love they r abt to begin!
loved it...update soon!

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 10:08am | IP Logged
loved it.....Smile
cant w8 to see both of their chemistry.......Blushing


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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 11:32am | IP Logged
i just loovvveeddd mayank's dad! he is ultra-cool! and their relation is soooo cute and adorable... the best lines " one sacrificing the dreams and the other fulfilling them" ClapClap 
I felt sad for nupur dat her one and only dream cudn't be fulfilled but she is lucky to have mayank! Day Dreaming great update! 
u make me proud Kinzuuu..!Embarrassed Tongue LOL Hug

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 12:22pm | IP Logged
First and foremost - you have written a beautiful chapter - just amazing ...

Let's first come to Nupur's family :I don't feel like addressing her parents as her family ... Is this what is called family??? I feel that in a house everyone has a right to say what they feel and that parents have a role to decide the future for their children but not without the consent of their sons and daughters ... Marriage is the biggest decision of her life and her father doesn't feel like asking her whether she is ready or not??? 
Gunjan's words were practical yet were so hurting - Money is important but what would life be without any love and just tonnes of money?? Wardrobes, television, refrigerator, washing machine - they are not going to wipe your tears or hold your hand when you are in trouble or give you strength to fight - it's the love and affection that helps you through all stages of life ...

Coming to Mayank and Mihir - they were like a whiff of fresh air for me - bonds like these are rare and should be cherished ... what a wonderful father and what an adorable son ... Rocking duo - Mayank is a sweetheart in this story ... I didn't understand one thing though - "Tumhe meri biwi ka nahi pata?" Is it something like Mayank's mom died and then Mihir remarried or something - I know I am stupid, no need to mention it ....
But I loved how you showed the drastic contrast - brilliant ...

Special mention to the beautiful dialogues - they hit the right chord and lift the scenario to another level ... Brilliant job Di!!!


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