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MAYUR FF..Weaving the Magic..Part 15 on pg 85 (Page 27)

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 11:32am | IP Logged
i just loovvveeddd mayank's dad! he is ultra-cool! and their relation is soooo cute and adorable... the best lines " one sacrificing the dreams and the other fulfilling them" ClapClap 
I felt sad for nupur dat her one and only dream cudn't be fulfilled but she is lucky to have mayank! Day Dreaming great update! 
u make me proud Kinzuuu..!Embarrassed Tongue LOL Hug

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 12:22pm | IP Logged
First and foremost - you have written a beautiful chapter - just amazing ...

Let's first come to Nupur's family :I don't feel like addressing her parents as her family ... Is this what is called family??? I feel that in a house everyone has a right to say what they feel and that parents have a role to decide the future for their children but not without the consent of their sons and daughters ... Marriage is the biggest decision of her life and her father doesn't feel like asking her whether she is ready or not??? 
Gunjan's words were practical yet were so hurting - Money is important but what would life be without any love and just tonnes of money?? Wardrobes, television, refrigerator, washing machine - they are not going to wipe your tears or hold your hand when you are in trouble or give you strength to fight - it's the love and affection that helps you through all stages of life ...

Coming to Mayank and Mihir - they were like a whiff of fresh air for me - bonds like these are rare and should be cherished ... what a wonderful father and what an adorable son ... Rocking duo - Mayank is a sweetheart in this story ... I didn't understand one thing though - "Tumhe meri biwi ka nahi pata?" Is it something like Mayank's mom died and then Mihir remarried or something - I know I am stupid, no need to mention it ....
But I loved how you showed the drastic contrast - brilliant ...

Special mention to the beautiful dialogues - they hit the right chord and lift the scenario to another level ... Brilliant job Di!!!


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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 12:35pm | IP Logged
Awesome...beautiful update Mehak!!ClapClap

Nupur's family scenes were so realistic..
Loved Mayank & his dad's convo..
Can't wait for next...Plzz cont soon..Smile

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Beautiful update Mehak. It was fantastic Clap
The way you desribed Nupur's family was brilliant and very real. And it was love at first sight for Mayank Embarrassed Loved Mayank's dad as well. I'm sure Nupur will start loving Mayank soon because he is so sweet.
 
Looking forward to the next part. Thanks for the pm Mehak.


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hi kinza

awesome update..Smile
i liked mayu's dad alot!!!Smile
n liked also the convo between nupur and gunlan...
liked the way the difference between reality n dreams were spoken...
continue soon..Smile

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