MAYUR FF..Weaving the Magic..Part 15 on pg 85 - Page 67

Mehak...🤗
what an outstanding part!!👏👏
u wrote each phase of life so beautifully....hats off to u..⭐️⭐️



 


Will be waiting for ur next FF..😉😃😃
Edited by jes_jade - 13 years ago

wowww... it was a through out a magical journey mehek........😊
it was a dream life......
pls cum soon wid a new magical ff.......👏
🤗Edited by drmaha - 13 years ago

BRAVO! BRAVO! What an awesome ending after your last FF which was also really good but at the end i cried a lot but this made up for it. awesome ending Mind Blowing.

such a perfect ending to such a perfect story........thanx 😊.......but i hope your next one is just around the corner haha......naina Edited by sumonetolub - 13 years ago

nice ending.

Angel why do your stories end sooo soon???😭😭

I feel like you just started this one the other day and its already ended😭😭

Anyways it was a lovely update and a lovelier story😃😃

I loved the way you showed the different stages of their lives at the end😃😃 totally awesome, Angel😃😃

please please pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee write one soon😃😃

you gotten an idea already i hope😃

Cant wait for your next one😃😃🤗

First of all, what an awesome ending!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

The chapter was just beautiful….

…..the morning after was soo romantic & poor Nupur, Mayank was making her blush more than ever

…..Honeymoon: I loved the spot!! Florida is one of the best holiday spots ever & so no wonder Nupur was still talking about it in their room. Lol, loved how he reminded her they were on their honeymoon.  

…..Driving License: Loved the little teasing!

…..Phone convo: Cute! It's nice to see their normal routine life..

…..Family: Poor Baba! He was stuck b/w these two. Mayank was just adorable frowning and all. Wow, Nupur openly flirting? Looks like Mayank's effect. Naughty Mayank!!

…..Addressing: Mayank is really a gem!!

…..Pregnancy: Mayank's initial reaction and then later picking her up was so real! A new Journey ahead of them..

…..Juice: Mayank is taking such good care of her and it was so cute when he was talking to the baby. The last bit was very touching..and I loved how Nupur supported him with her little gesture

…..Angels!!: It was really a picture perfect moment!!

 

 

As usual, I have nothing but praises for you and your writing. Seriously, ur stories are too good!! Ur style is so simple but they really touch a person's heart. U really are a magician! I'm really going to miss this ff. Please come back with another ff, soon!! Please……………

 

Edited by Ishita16 - 13 years ago

perfect ending Mehak!!!

lovely ending!!
really perfect!!
i really loved this ff..
do write more😊

W3o mehak great  and brilient update