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MAYUR FF..Weaving the Magic..Part 15 on pg 85 - Page 62

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Posted: 13 years ago
WOW!! 2dayz update was truley waaving magic🥳...by god mehak ur amazing🤪 writer.....seriously....waiting  eagerly 4 ur next update....😍..kab tak hum karengy yu intezaar bhala...want jaldi...😍

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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 14 was awesome as usual!!

I totally loved the morning scene…it was so sweet…Nupur's kiss on his cheek and then Mayank's little teasing and her blushing.. It was such a perfect Mayur moment!!

 

Nupur Mayank Sharma…it does sound perfect.

 

I'm so happy u included the part where Nupur calls her parents...and glad to see things worked out. Like u said, no matter what we love our parents and nothing will change that. Though Nupur's parents may have been wrong about how they went about her marriage or anything else, they surely love her.

 

Swing part – do I even have to say I loved it? IT was so romantic and Mayank was awake in the morning? Naughty!!! Finally Nupur have said those 3 magical words…and the moment was just perfect!!😍 By the end of it, I was blushing like crazy. ☺️

 

Please don't end it too soon….pretty please. I want to see more of their life after the confession.

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Posted: 13 years ago
😊wow it was truely magical😊
Posted: 13 years ago
my gosh.. m only blushing...... it was so cute
waitin for ur next update.... thx for the pm..... do pm me wen u update....
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Posted: 13 years ago
you've done it again girl- created magic!
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Posted: 13 years ago
BEAUTIFUUULL..!! WOW! WOW! WOW! 🥳
Kinza! you have outdone yourself.... AMAZING! 🥳

Nupur itniii Cute and Innocent and toh 😍 😍 *siigghhhss* 

I just TOTALLY Loved it! 

GREAT JOB! 👏 👏 👏 
Posted: 13 years ago

Cinderella this was uterly bewitching i could not remove my eyes from the screen for one moment even. The morning part where nupur woke in the same position as last night meaning his arms...was cuteeeeeee😳😳😳 and the peck on his cheek but mayank was awake...even though he pretended to be asleep

And then FInally at night the part outside on the terrace when nupur joined him...OMGSHH!!☺️ i really have no worrds....but was veryyyy happy to hear nupur say ILY back to him finally they weaved the magic!😳😳😳
 
Outstanding....you never fail to leave me stunned
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey mehak loved u r update , u r full ff was just too goooooooooood loved each and every part of it👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
my little magician!.....thats my new name for you......sucha touching update....i hope this wasnt the last one!.........naina
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing part!!!👏👏
really it was the best part so far!!
it was so magical!😍
cont soon!😊