MAYUR FF..Weaving the Magic..Part 15 on pg 85 - Page 54

supeerbbbbbbbbbbbb part mehak

these bells na....we need to tell them to stop ringing at the wrong times!😆 but MN are soo cute and Nupurs innocence surpresses all...she is the most fragile and delicate persona i have seen in your ffs...😳

Edited by -Sajjal- - 13 years ago

Angel...as usual an awesome and meaningful update :))

Mehak....Part 8 was awesome....me very excited for part 9 now😆

Wao kinzu So beautiful update

Part 9 was...so romantic n cute...Awww.........😍

i can totally sympathize with nupur being angry at her parents.....but she cant forget that even though inadvertently, they did something for her which made her life the way she must have dreamed for it to be like....and i really like that mayank took a stance on her behavior and questioned her....and i think for him to take interest in that will make nupur feel more comfortable......but the starting was cute as was the end....they already share such a close bond to be able to share this sutff with each other....and it was sweet that nupur opened up so quickly to mayank......naina

Part 12 – Simply Superb!!!

-LOL! Once again, bells disturb them…Poor Mayu!

-Nupur-Gunjan convo was so sweet…Nupur's interaction with her parents: u've portrayed this part so good.. It's so real. I mean no matter what they've done to her, they r still her parents and her initial happiness shows that but then she remembers the past and ignores them…I wonder why the sudden visit?

-I like the fact that Mayank questioned her behaviour. Though I understand Nupur's reasons, I think Nupur should give her parents another chance. Yes, they were mean to her in the past and said a lot of things parents shouldn't say but maybe it was their helplessness that made them say such mean things….

-"because he and his books, could spend  a lifetime together." – Mayank and his books!!! LOL

-Mayank's silence affects Nupur? Their equation is changing slowly…and the way u described Nupur when she asked 'are you angry with me' was so vivid…I could just picture her and ofcourse, Mayank can't keep quiet after that. I'm loving the fact that they are slowly getting closer and practising their rights on each other.
-I can't wait to read the next part…Hopefully Nupur will open upto him.

 

Edited by Ishita16 - 13 years ago

Awesome Mehak!!!👏👏
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It was really adorable.....I love the understanding they have for each other..
Nupur shud share her troubles with Mayank...
Waiting for next..

Cont soon..😊

Brilliant update Mehak.
Thanks a lot for the pm.