MAYUR FF..Weaving the Magic..Part 15 on pg 85 - Page 47

i love ya!!😳😆😳 ...........wat? ...............srsly!😳

awesome update ...i was blushin smiling n laughin all d way!!😃

i lovedddddddd d update!......

m sure u knw drivin right?😆itni details......

anyways i loved d way mayu was instructin her n isnt of conc thr she was busy starin him....awwwww😳😆😳

this update.....nupur was way too adorable........

n d last line..........puri drivin seekhani pe toh..........me being a total besharam here n waitin 😉😆😆😆

nyways yaar u write amazingly well...kitni baar bataun??i can read it agn!!

n m so restless to read ahead........]😍

 

keep writin rockstar😃the magical rockstar i must say!😳

tc sweety n keep smiling!

n a very happy b'day to rubu😃

waise her b'day is today!😃

 

fab wrk dear🤗

 

 

awww loved when nupur hugged him....☺️☺️

loved it alottttttttttttttttttttt.........

luv u loadzzzz❤️

all i can do is read it again and again

awesome piece dear

thnx for the pm😊 

aa haan so you u also knw the driving.....

thnx alot for the pm..

awesome update

 

lovd ur idea of starting ther love story like ths..gr8 update

The little bit at the beginning about her wishes being not fulfilled was sad but am sure Mayank will fulfill her wishes from now on..

 

Both their hands on the gear....😍

Mrs.Sharma concentrating more on her husband and then getting caught...I can't express how much I loved that. I just want to read it over and over again.

 

Finally the best part...their Hug...I was blushing☺️☺️She is just so innocent and cute. I love how u r showing that she is slowly falling for him....Mayank was just adorable & a bit naughty! He is teasing the poor girl but am loving it.

 

Can't wait for the next part!!

 

Way to Go dear.. lovely update