MAYUR FF..Weaving the Magic..Part 15 on pg 85 - Page 12

First of all Yay!!  U started another ff!! I was waiting for this. Second, so sorry for not commenting till now. Was kept busy with an assignment for uni but I had read all the parts. Now that I'm done with my assignment, will try to catch up with the comments soon.

Part 1 – Great update!

Wow! I liked how u described Nupur's little actions at the beginning…it really helped to understand the character and her background. To me, she seems like a little child…all her actions, excitement were so cute and innocent.

"She was married..it was her wedding night..her husband had entered the room.." – this was a bit of a shocker…coz I didn't expect it to be her wedding night…

Part 2

Excellent update! Mayank admiring her beauty, then apologizing to her was so sweet!!

Mayank staring at her – Well who could blame him when he has such a beautiful wife? And Nupur getting conscious of that…normal considering they were strangers AND married.

"per ap se ziyada nahi" – Reminded me of the date anniversary night ….

Mayank talking to himself was so CUTE!!

""per main kia karoon", he looked in the mirror

"I cant help it when she smiles"." – Awww…………cho chweet!!

Part 3

Another awesome part! I felt so bad for Nupur at the beginning…she was trying to tell him she didn't do anything when there was no need of her to do that.

Nupur talking about love and shaddi after that…it shows how she wanted to fall in love b4 marriage…It is a dream of every woman to marry the man she loves….I feel so bad for her.

"shaadi k baad pyar nahi ho skata" – Aww…Poor Mayank. He loves her so much and it's like he is asking for a chance of fulfilling her dreams…