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TWOS!!#7 A Bunch of Yahoos!! pg77 [note pg 150] (Page 9)

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 3:08pm | IP Logged
loved the update zapppy...... i loved each n every bit of this part... its has almost all the ingredients that made it look and taste even better,,,

i m just loving every bit of Armaan riddhima's relationship... the way they love she each other is exceptional... 

thanku for such a wonderful story n updates........

continuee sooooooon

Love

Taliah

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 4:10pm | IP Logged
The continuation of the last part was veryy sweet, and i can totally imagine riddhima shopping until all her money was gone.LOL
I loved their entire stay in Singapore, its truly a memirizing place, i went there when i was really small, but now i feel like going there again since youve described everything so beautifully..and ill remember to go during christmas time haha lol
And then, AR's home...i hope they go back to Singapore for a vacation or something, and hmmm now lets see what mumbai holds for them, and im really glad riddhima handled the situation about shanky nd stuff nicely...i hope shanky doesnt seperate them or anything, but i guess this was needed for shanky to let his daughter go and for armaan to be 100% sure that him and riddhima wont seperate.
I love the entire flow of everything in your entire ff, its like after every part, theres always something to look forward to !
Cant wait for the next part, update soon zappy :)
Take careee ;)

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 5:34pm | IP Logged
Okay i read the last part and i have to say it was really good
I expected them to do more in Singapore but yeah
anyways awesome stuff
Shanky like usual is a pain
I loved the part
write soon again

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 6:42pm | IP Logged
Congrats :)
I just finished reading the update! I loveed it :) it was soo cutee! I can't wait to see what happens. I loveed every bit of the moments they spent in singapore. Although I do agree with Aliya i too was expecting that there would be more moments in Singapore!
You're an awesomee writer and this is one of the best best best FF I've read!
Continue soonn

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 7:37pm | IP Logged
I liked Armaan's outburst on how they are no longer teenagers running away from home, but responsible adults. I hope he holds his metal in front of shanky too, because sure there will be a show down!.
Good going... update soon
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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 7:42pm | IP Logged
Zappy..what an update..
It was lovely..
you ended ti on such a great note...
It has perfect balanced emotion...
Now finally it seems that 2 weeks separation is overcome by them

Now im wondering what next coming to AR..  


N i loved the tittle it was surely Planet Paradise for them

P.S:I am kinda missing gang too..Hope we get something abt all of them together n having fun time:-D...I guess you were talking something abt new year na ;-)


Edited by taniyaarman - 25 January 2011 at 7:45pm

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 9:25pm | IP Logged
first of all...congo for the new thread Big smile You deserve it Clap
and the last firs is rally good..I loved it Big smile
I visited singapore & it's really beautiful & the way you mentioned it, it's really niceBig smile
Armaan is such a baby sometimesLOL
and riddhima was  offering kiss at the time of packing..just like that she is offering chocolateLOLLOL
and shangy...I have no words for this personOuchLOL
hope he'll not create problem..in coming parts Ouch
very nice part & TWOS is my fav FF & You are the best Big smile
update soon WinkLOLLOL

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 9:49pm | IP Logged
hey hi!!
IN ANOTHER WORLD is amazing...they're sooooooooo cute n caring n loving...they understand each other like no one.. 
Armaan tellin' her to not call him baby is soooooooooooooo cute n wen they were leavin' made me teary...the singapore was indeed like they were in another world; their own lil' happy, romantic n full masti place...

now back home shanky's waitin'..hope he doesn't create any prob bt i dn't think so bt he'll be angry dat 4 sure cuz he's a father n dat too Dr Shashank Gupta!!!

love ur update
continue soon, will be waitin' eagerlySmile

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