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TWOS!!#7 A Bunch of Yahoos!! pg77 [note pg 150] (Page 77)

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Posted: 14 February 2011 at 8:24am | IP Logged

happy valentines day to you too zappy

the 1st time oh no no 2nd time on TOWS hiostry i am thefirst to comment yayyyyParty

sakshi

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wow hahahahaha!!!!i am still laughing!!!lolLOL ROFLROFLgod you were awsome with all the selectinos of the songs sung by atul gosh the whole part was hilarious and ammy has become quite shameless but you told rite'jab pyaar kiya to darna.....'and the mugle aazam thing was hilarious and a little bit true (the shanky-akbar)thing god you were amazing in the last para they actually took the girls on their sholdresLOLlol

i can imagine the boys singing 'chahe koi mujhe......'and ammy doing beat boxing gosh agin hilariousROFL

i am sure the lonavla thing is going to be fun and yes a laughinh gig!!!LOLROFL

plss complete it soon

sakshiStar



Edited by arshbest - 17 February 2011 at 3:47am

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Posted: 14 February 2011 at 8:24am | IP Logged
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Originally posted by zephyrr

A Happy Valentines Day to everyone!.. i hope you guys had (and some of you must still be having) a wonderful time with all your loved ones!! Hug

Lots n lots of Heart
Rachna! Smile


Hey Rachna, Wish u the same Big smile

Originally posted by zephyrr

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Is this meant for an update?Embarrassed Wink




Edited by perfectsmile - 14 February 2011 at 8:25am

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Posted: 14 February 2011 at 8:39am | IP Logged
Hey Rach Hug

I cant believe i finished off reading all the missed out parts.. Embarrassed n u knw wat! m so short of words to express how much m loving the track of the story ...it went so flawlessly throughout...!
The 2weeks blunder that happened made me soo low.. it was such a pain yaar.. But i loved the way Shanky mended his mistakes... esp the airport fiasco LOL... It was actually shocking .. so much happened in a single day.. without exaggeration .. hats off to u for that ! I loved the way things moved on from then.. as they say, bad times make u stronger and help u introspect ... the same happened here too. .. AR both ,in their own ways, realized their mistakes.. u knw for almst 2-3 parts then i cudn't actually believe that AR got engaged!

The way Shanky was trying to be a cool dad actually made me laugh at certain points..poor thing !LOL The best thing i liked was the fact u jst didnot change his character abruptly in the fic .. His insecurities still remained .. though i was hating him for being such a kabaab me haddi but still his feelings and suspicions were not baseless .. they had to happen since he loved Ridz so much.. I was over the moon when he sent Ridz to Singapore .. that was jst the perfect way to make AR overcome the fear of that place ... and m glad they formed some cherishable memories there...

What turned out after that was like 'pheww!!' .. Evrythng was jst messing up for both of them .. but finally m glad everythng got cleared .. and sorted.. The way this track went was really nice! U took care of each n everyone's feelings and emotions ..

I love the way AR bickered throughout.. it was soo funny ! And that reminds me, the tattoo on Armaan's hand had ridz name on it na but u even mentioned that the last four letters meant 'love'... is there something m missing out? Confused

M really excited to knw wat lonavala holds for them ! U knw ,Everytime its Ridz who feels jealous when some other chic flirts with armaan, i was really wondering how much fun it ll be to see the vice versa Wink..jst a thought!

Continue soon ya.. i really wanna read the latter half of this part .. thanks for all ur pms..

Keep up the great work! Its ur writing only that keeps us all captivated to this FF Big smile

Love
Vini


Edited by coolvini4u - 17 February 2011 at 12:50am

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Posted: 14 February 2011 at 8:41am | IP Logged
Hey Rachna!

Thanks and Wish u a very Happy Valentine's day too... Big smile

Love
Vini

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Posted: 14 February 2011 at 8:44am | IP Logged
hey zappy.happy valentines day to u too.......
 by any chance are u planning to upd8 tonite???

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Posted: 14 February 2011 at 9:40am | IP Logged
sorry for the late comment zappy :( i was busy..
great update im soo glad the whole shanshank vs rddhima vs armaan argument is over! phew!
continue soon x
happy valentines day to u too :) x

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Posted: 14 February 2011 at 9:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by arshbest

happy valentines day to you too zappy

humph the ones who are still having are verrry lucky

vaise u here not with anyone!!!!huh????kidding

why are these res for???

sakshi

 
i hardly had a valentines celebration.. been working all day. and 'anyone' is not there to celebrate valentines with me.. Ouch
but its ok.. i have my family to celebrate with!
res : you guess.. lol!
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Posted: 14 February 2011 at 9:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by perfectsmile

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Originally posted by zephyrr

A Happy Valentines Day to everyone!.. i hope you guys had (and some of you must still be having) a wonderful time with all your loved ones!! Hug

Lots n lots of Heart
Rachna! Smile


Hey Rachna, Wish u the same Big smile

Originally posted by zephyrr

reserved


Is this meant for an update?Embarrassed Wink


 
what do you think?! Tongue

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