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TWOS!!#7 A Bunch of Yahoos!! pg77 [note pg 150] (Page 77)

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Posted: 14 February 2011 at 8:21am | IP Logged

A Happy Valentines Day to everyone!.. i hope you guys had (and some of you must still be having) a wonderful time with all your loved ones!! Hug

Lots n lots of Heart
Rachna! Smile


Edited by zephyrr - 14 February 2011 at 8:22am

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Originally posted by ARKJ_4EVER

wow u've completed the part!!!

it's awesome!!! love RM n AA moments - so nice!!1

shanky n Riddhima bonding is so sweet n awesome!!!

n AR wow they're fabulous, superb!!!
it's simply a  Mind-blowing part n u've written it wonderfully!!!ClapClap

cont real soon as Lonavala gonna be great with the whole gang going!!!
thank u 4 the pmSmile
 
Thank you so much! glad you liked RM and AA as much as AR.. and yes the part was mainly bout Shanky and Riddhima.. so.. thanks! 
Lonavla part's posted below.. they just reached! lol!!

Originally posted by jiyaa

what a father daughter comboooooo

gr88888888 realisation part
update next part soon waiting for ur instalment

Thanks.. installment put up, right below this.. lol!

Originally posted by here-i-am

loved the partSmile

Thank you!

Originally posted by ammyluvridzi

Awesum part armaan's such a baby

Thanks.. and yeah.. that he is!

Originally posted by shilpI007

hey zappy..............mindblowing partClapClap...........wowwwwwwwww loved it soooooooo much...........loved ridz emotional point about everything.............shanky n amy gossip session was superb..............thanks for pm........plzzzzzzzzzzz continue soonBig smile


Thanks so much!Smile

Originally posted by nikiksgian

Zaps ! i SOOOO wasnt expecting you to update ! my god !! YAY ! 
im so happy :) 
ur awesome
ok the part was AWESOMEEEE! the pandit is going to come on monday :)) YYAYYY!'
okay i have a question ... how come Armaan and Riddhima slept together , with Shanky and Padma being in the same house???

Thanks.. yes the Pandit will come soon enough.. 
and Armaan and Riddhima fell asleep together.. they didnt sleep together.. lol!!Wink

Originally posted by Anokhee

Hey Rach..................
First of all, I'm sorry coz this comment can lack a little enthusiasm i was feeling at the end of your part..... I really really wanted to comment last night but I got screwed right after finishing your part for being online till 4:30 in the morning...
PARENTS I tell you...
But what they dont know was that your part (which I was reading at 4 in the morning) made me realise how true it is about us taking them for granted and that was the sole reason I didnt back answer my parents and just listened to my dad and went to sleep...
I completely adored the way you put in everything from Ridhima and Shashank's Point of view coz usually, being the young adolescents that we are, we don't think from all POVs and especially our parents'....
Your so brilliant at analyzing stuff from every POV and thats one thing I love about you.....
The way you have described the father-daughter bond makes me go like "Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww............ So Cute"
And for the first time, I dont want to mention any of the AR romance because this update is dedicated to the Daddy Darling!Big smile
Soon-to-be Hubby Darling can wait!
I'm so so so glad you updated.....
But I hope all your work is in order... Don't neglect that!
BUt do keep the updates coming whenever possible....
I love surprises like this one....
But till then, Mahabharat should keep me busy!Tongue

Love,
ME!!

Thanks Anokhee.. i love reading your comments anyway.. enthusiasm or no enthusiasm.. and what a part you chose to get caught.. lol!! 
anyway, i am glad that you liked it so much! 
and are you actually reading the unabridged Mahabharat.. like the epic!.. Shocked wow,, you've got patience man!
another of my silly and stupid updates is up.. you might wanna check if you look up from your Mahabharat.. lol!

Originally posted by ssh57

Superb update as usual. And an unexpected treat too as we weren't expecting it till wednesday. Thanks for making it so quick.

Thank you.. and i felt like writing.. so i wrote.. but i didnt waste too much time on it..Smile Thanks!!Big smile

Originally posted by blessed4

awesum......fantabulous..........superb........mindblowing.............................


Thanks!

Originally posted by shristi sarda

hey the part was soo cool....
wow PSP....
loved ridz-shanky convo.....
thanx for the pm and plzz update asap....

Thank you!

Originally posted by imshveta

Hey that was a surprise. I loved how things were sorted out between all of them. I wish real life could be sorted like that too

Thanks.. and i am sure real life can be sorted out as easily if you talk and express yourself at the right time.. or whenever realization strikes.. or whenever our egos allow us too.. Smile

Originally posted by saniashzadi

hey dear...

i must say this part is just bestest part of this whole ff.... truly dedicated to lovely relationships in r life..that is Father and duaghter.... a big Hug fr u fr writng such part in ur most busy time phase...

Happy Valentines Day to u...

love

sania


Thanks so much Sania!.. Hug
and a Happy Valentines to you too!

Originally posted by kashndsel4eva

awesome update
loved it loadz
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

Thank you!

Originally posted by ARMAANKSGFAN

hiiiii
awesome update
loved it
loved AR
soooooo cute
loved shanky and ridzys convo
loved armaan calling shanky papa
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

Thanks so much!!

Originally posted by kriyaarsh

wow!!
well i was waiting for this! :) 
this was so cute!!!
but i never got what doctors scrabble was...do they make words with anatomy type things? because that would hella legit!! haha

great update though! :) 

Love, 
Kriyaa <33

Thanks Kriya.. and the answer to your question lies in the installment that i have put up below this.. Happy reading!

Originally posted by ashluvdmg

Awesum part yar....luvd evy bit of emotional n funny things..!!cnt stilll gt owt of shanky-armaan shocking convo..lol...n de way u hv writn de scenes btw shashank-ridhima n anjali-atul ws beautiful....!!
gr8 work...n as usual cnt wait 2 read more
 

Thank you so much.. yeah.. Shanky- Armaan convo was shocking indeed! lol!

Originally posted by armaanlover_7

Rachu......this was indeed an amazing surprise.Tongue I didnt expect such a shock from u.Shocked
yesterday i was really busy and when i was about to sign off, I saw ur surprise update.I need to go out,but I wanted to read it too.I was really in a dilemma.When u r busy and dont get time to update, I am waiting for an update from u and when finally u updated,I became busy.Its an irony na?My mind and heart was telling different things that time.Now I know what Armaan and Ridhima might have been gone through during their make outs....LOLBut finally I gave in to my heart and read the update.But I read it very fast in a hurry.So I couldnt get the full essence of it then.
Now,I have read it again very slowly and by relaxing. So...finally u completed the update.! Sigh...lol.
The starting itself was superb.When u were telling about muskaan and rahul...I thought it was Ridhima searching 4 Armaan in his house.I wondered why Armaan made candle light dinner 4 her when he was sleeping sick in Ridhima's house.lol So the surprise started from the very first scene onwards.Its good that they decide to get married again.They also deserve a normal and fun wedding!
Then about the father -daughter scene...what to say yaar.It was really an emotional part.Finally everything is settled between them.But i didnt like the father-daughter calling my angel Armaan 'devil'.How dare they?Angry
And the Ar scene was too cute......I wonder how many times they have slept together.I think I have to take a counting of that.LOLThey are really lucky yaar..! I feel jealous.
Then the baby Armaan frowning for a PSP game....aww....too...too...cute.Cute is not even a word.I love the cute Armaan very much.Loved the way Ridhima teased him.And u know I imagined more to that scene.Like when Ridhima told he wont get the gift till she gets her kiss...instead of giving in instantly..he showing more interest in the gift than the kiss,thus making Ridhima frown.That wud have been a sweet revenge!
I am more excited 4 the lonavla trip.I am sure,this will be more fun than the Mahabaleshwar trip.I expect an overdose of AR.Dont 4get that.Also I love the interaction between Minnie and Armaan.
i cant wait to read that.......Happy valentines day dear.....Heart
You know I love you very much.Hug
 
 

yeah yeah.. its very very ironical that i am busy when you guys wait for an update.. and when i actually do, you are busy!! anyhow.. glad you liked the part.. 
and Lonavla is definitely going to be more fun than Mahabaleshwar.. i hope at least!..
Happy Valentines day to you too..Big smile

Originally posted by coolvini4u

Originally posted by zephyrr

Originally posted by coolvini4u

Oh no...!! It seems i missed sooo much of the story while being almst gayab .... Ouch
Gosh!! I need to buck up.... 
btw, hi rachna..Big smile..hw r u doing.. ?? 

ll comment after i finish reading all d threads that i missd.. i wonder how long wud that take? LOL

love
Vini

Hey Vini.. where did you disappear to?!.. i heard that you came back to IF.. whatever that means.. well i thought you just got bored of my story.. lol!! hope you catch up with the story soon! well at the rate at which i am updating, i doubt you'll miss much!! LOL


U knw wat! U r nuts ... hw cud u even think so... ??? u think  i usd to bug u, for no reason, to update kya? n waise wat do u mean abt ur rate of updating.. ??? *raised brow* ...mujhe daal me kuch kala lag raha h... LOL

well you didnt tell me that you were disappearing.. what was i supposed to think! anywho.. glad you're back!.. and you'll know the mystery of the rate after you wait for a few days.. wah wah!! lol!!LOL 

Originally posted by spln

sorry for the delay in showing up zappy - but i had the longest most tedious 'valentine' week ever, in as long as i can remember (and if valentine is even the word for a week as work-packed) 

anyways, the redemption has finally been accomplished, and to my relief it looks like its here to stay! 

a very happy valentines to you - and shall eagerly look forward to the lonavla love times! 

Thats ok nj!.. and ooh.. tedious Valentines week.. do i want to know what that meant.. lol! sorry.. bad joke.. and so sorry you were so busy.. i was too.. almost at the end of my tolerance level..Dead but the weekend really was a breather for me.. Big smile
and yes.. the redemption is here to stay..Smile 
a very happy valentines to you too.. have a nice time!.. oh and the Lonavla times have started.. not so much of love yet!.. neeche dekh lijiye!.. lol!! Embarrassed

Originally posted by nandinii_goyal

Hey zappy!!!
u r simply gr8!!!
finally read d complete part nd loved it soooo much
cont soon
add me 2 ur pm list
Happy valentines day!!!
tc
luv
nandini

Thanks Nandini.. 
and just add me as a buddy if you want a pm.. i dont have a pm list as such!Smile

Originally posted by shalika

awesome part
loved the father daughter convo :)

Thanks! Big smile

Originally posted by gupta.aditi20

i loved it totally
n thank you for the surprise part..
u know u should give these surprises more frequently.....
we wll love it even more....

Thank you!.. i'll try giving these surprises more often.. did you like today's surprise?!LOL

Originally posted by k_anjali12

Awesome Update Rachna ... Simply Simply Simply LoVed It.

Will Be Waiting For Ur Next Updates.

TakeCare ... LoTs Of LoVe

Heart

Thanks so much!! Big smile





Edited by zephyrr - 14 February 2011 at 1:01pm

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Posted: 14 February 2011 at 8:22am | IP Logged
this is a small installment.. and its not romantic.. i know its valentines day.. but.. W*H!! so.. i hope you enjoy reading it..Smile

A Bunch of Yahoos!! 


"Zindagi ek safar hai suhana.. Yahan kal kya ho kisne jana.. Hey.. zindagi ik safar hai suhana.. Yahan kal kya ho kisne jaana..", and he started yodeling as he drove on.. "Atul!!!", Anjali shouted as she heard his not so surila voice.. "Stop braying early in the morning.. Hum yahan so rahe hai..", frowning as she tried to sleep, her finger in one ear and one eye open.. Riddhima who was leaning on her shoulder and sleeping, mumbled sleepily, "Di stop shouting na.."

"Please Anjie! Itna bhi bura nahi gaata hai.. Ek toh he's driving us.. And tum logon ko sone ki padi hai.. ", Rahul commented from the front passenger seat as he turned around in Atul's defense..

"Oye!.. Tu chup baith.. Tu raat bhar ghode bech ke so raha tha.. Emergency duty pe main gayi thi raat ko.. ", Muskaan yelled at him from the back seat.. She was sitting next to Abhi and Nikki at the very end of Armaan's SUV, while Armaan himself was sitting in the middle seat next to Riddhima, leaning on her as she leaned on her di..

"Haan.. Toh so na.. Atul ke singing ko kyun rok rahe ho.. Tu gaa yaar Champ.. ", he encouraged him.. And Atul obeyed his orders at once as he sang, "Pukarta chala hoon main.. Gali gali.. Bahar ki.. Bas ek chaav zulf ki.. Bas ik nigaah pyaar ki.. Pukaarta chala hoon main..", he purposely sang loudly in an off key, grinning wickedly as everyone in the car frowned.. The only person grinning with him was Rahul, who was his accomplice..

"Shut up yaar Atul!!..", Nikki shouted suddenly.. "Kya pukaarta pukaarta.. Subah subah kyun pukaar raha hai yaar.. Sone de na..", she didn't even open her eyes, as she yelled in her sleep, trying to hide herself in Abhi's shoulder..

"Nikki yaar chilla mat.. Tere chillane se accha toh Champ ka gana tha.. At least its got a rhythm.. ", Armaan came to his Champ's rescue as he kissed Riddhima's shoulder that he was leaning on.. He too had his eyes closed and was talking somnolently.. He was awake for quite some time now after Atul and Anjali's argument had woken him up.. But he didn't feel like getting up.. He just wanted to take every chance of being close to his Basket, who was for some reason chipkoing to her Di instead of him.. But that didn't stop him from holding her close as he leaned on her taking in her fragrance.. But Nikki's high pitched screech had forced him to speak up!..

He moved closer into Riddhima, slipping his arm around her waist as he heard Nikki curse him in her sleep and felt Muskaan whack his shoulder from the back seat..

Riddhima was already disturbed by all the noise.. And Armaan trying to get close to her made her even more uncomfortable.. Here she was trying to hug her Di, and this guy couldn't stop maaroing his chance!! "Armaan.. Hato.. Chipko mat.. You have so much place there.. ", she tried to push him away in her sleep.. Anjali couldn't take it anymore as she opened her eyes and saw Armaan leaning on her sister, who was leaning on her.. And she certainly wasn't enjoying being sandwiched like that against the door..

"Armaan please meri behen se dur raho..", she ordered in a stern voice as she pushed Riddhima to sit up straight..

"What do you mean by dur raho.. She's my fiance.. License hai mere paas samjhi..", he retorted, still not letting go of Riddhima.. Ek toh these people had tagged along with them when he had planned this trip exclusively for Riddhima and him.. And now they had the nerve of asking him to stay away from her!..

But Anjali was not so happy with his open offence.. "Please.. Abhi tak sirf engagement hui hai.. Permanent license nahi mila hai.. Learners pe gadi mat bhagao.. ", she warned him..

But Armaan had a retort to every reply of hers.. "Learners license hai toh learn toh karne do.. Practice nahi milegi toh permanent license milega kaise?.."

And that became a little too embarrassing for Riddhima who finally woke up and shouted at him.. "Armaan enough!..", pointing her finger angrily and glaring at him..

"Arre.. Tell your Di na.. She started it..", he complained to her, like she was unfairly accusing him.

But Riddhima had had enough of him.. "Shut up.. Di is right.. Tum dur hato mujhse.. Don't trouble me.. I am very sleepy..", and pushing his hand away from her ..

"Why?.. What were you doing raat bhar haan.. Kal toh we didn't even talk on the phone..", he asked suspiciously..

Riddhima whacked him on his shoulder as he asked that , "I was playing Doctor's scrabble with papa till almost three in the night!.."

"Oh.. Wow!.. Bachpan ki yaad aa gayi.. Remember we used to play all Sunday afternoon.. ", Anjali told her..

"What in the name of God is Doctor's scrabble?..", Armaan asked derisively..

"It's the same as scrabble.. But Only words from the Medical Dictionary are allowed..", Anjali told him superciliously.. And that only made him snort.. "Basket.. You are a class one nerd!.. I swear.. Unbelievable.. Doctor's scrabble!.. ", he scoffed as he made fun of her..

"Tum na.. Don't talk to me..", she slapped his hand away again..

"All of us are sleepy yaar.. Stop fighting..", Nikki screeched again..

"You shut up Nikki.. We know what you were doing all night.. Now she wants to sleep.. ", Armaan started teasing her now, as Atul and Rahul sniggered at his joke..

But Riddhima didn't find it very funny.. "Armaan!.. Tum kitne besharam ho.."

"Oh ho.. Kar who rahi thi.. Besharam main hoon..", he defended himself..

"Toh.. Who apne pati ke saath thi.. Isme besharamo waali baat kahan se aa gayi..", he was starting to get on her nerves now..

"Toh maine kab kaha.. You were the one who started with the besharam talk.."

"I was calling you besharam.. Not Nikki.. ", she told him through clenched teeth..

"Yeah.. But I called Nikki besharam.. Not me..", he imitated her tone as she completely lost it.. "Arrgh!!!!.."

Rahul, Atul and Abhi guffawed as Riddhima almost strangled Armaan while Anjali tried to get her away from him.. "Armaan yaar.. You're too good bro.. ", Rahul complimented him, proud of his skills at getting on his fiance's nerves..

"Thanks!", Armaan smugly accepted the compliment too..

"Very nice Armaan.. But next time please leave my personal life out of your games.. ", Abhi told him as he saw Nikki glare at him..

"Ab teri life personal rahi kahan hai yaar..", Rahul drawled, winking at him as he turned.. And that prompted Atul to start singing again, "Aaj kal tere mere pyaar ke charche har zabaan par.." and Rahul went, "Accha!.."

"Sab ko maaloom hai aur sabko khabar ho gayi..", Atul continued, while Rahul and Armaan sniggered at Nikki's embarrassment..

"Abhi.. They are so irritating yaar.. Bolo na.. Its not even funny..", she complained to Abhi.. She also was wide awake now and as irritated as all the girls, while the boys had fun at their expense..

"Don't worry sweetheart.. Agar who besharam ho sakte hai toh humne bhi besharmi mein PhD ki hai.. Chodo na..", he told her..

"Khullam khulla pyaar karenge hum dono.. Iss duniya se nahi darenge hum dono.. ", Atul changed his song as he heard Abhi console Nikki.. And Armaan and Rahul just joined him, completely pushing Nikki off her edge as she screamed "Shut up!!.."

"Rahul.. chup kar yaar.. And Armaan.. Not another word!!..", Muskaan ordered as she whacked Armaan on the back of his head.. They just laughed at that, guffawing and sniggering shamelessly, giving each other high fives..

"These guys are so irritating yaar.. Saara din sehna padega.. Abhi toh bas shuruwaat hai..", Anjali commented as all the girls had a frown at early seven in the morning..

"Exactly baby! Abhi toh bas shuruwaat hai.. ", Atul retorted, grinning as he drove onto the highway.. Anjali couldn't stop herself from smacking his head at that..

"Anjie behave yourself.. He's driving..", Armaan reprimanded her, pretending to be serious..

"Oh ho.. She should behave.. Look who's talking..", Riddhima spoke up in her Di's defense.. The nerve of this guy!

And Armaan as usual turned it on her, "'I' am talking.. The Armaan Mallik.. And BTW.. you don't need to 'look'.. You need to 'hear' who's talking.. "

"Ha.. Ha.. So funny..", she mocked him, rolling her eyes..

"You're getting better at the sarcasm Basket.. But you're still not there yet.. Keep practicing..", he gave her his expert opinion like he was a pro on expressions.. And Riddhima didn't find a single word of it funny, her scowl deepening, her brow furrowing, her jaw clenched tight as were her fists.. She wanted to punch him in the nose right now.. "You think you're so funny Armaan.. You know what.. I am not going to talk to you at all now.. Bhaad mein jao.." and this time she was serious.. Armaan's eyes widened at her tone.. It spelt nothing but his doom.. Rahul and Abhi stifled a laugh at Armaan's condition.. Poor guy was in for some real trouble now..

"Good Ridzi.. Aise hi karna chahiye.. Even I am not going to talk to Atul now.. " Anjali declared as Muskaan joined her, "Haan.. Main bhi iss kameene se baat nahi karungi.. ", she scowled at Rahul from the back of the car.. He turned around instantly as he heard that and grinned, "Really Muskaan.. Thank god!.. ", he sighed, pretending to be relieved..

Muskaan cursed him under her breath as he turned back and then looked at Nikki who was still leaning on Abhi's shoulder, "Nikki.. Tu uss dushman party se kyun chipak rahi hai.. Ab se tu bhi Abhi se baat nahi karegi..", she decided for her and pulled her away from Abhi.. Abhi's mouth opened in shock at that, "Arre yaar.. Lekin maine kya kiya hai.. Nikki.. You cant do this..", he protested..

"Kyun.. Tum hass nahi rahe the tumhare doston ke saath.. Bade aaye.. 'maine kya kiya hai'..", Muskaan mimicked him and Nikki completely agreed, "Yeah.. You're right Muski.. Main bhi nahi baat karungi.."

Abd that angered Abhi as he finally declared war.. "What!.. Fine you know what.. Main bhi tumse baat nahi karunga.. Who wants to talk to you anyway.. Right Armaan.. We don't need to talk to you people.. Jyaada hi ho raha hai ab.. "

Armaan wasn't too sure though as he saw Riddhima glare at him, her nostrils flared and ready to charge.. But he was saved the trouble of answering as Rahul quickly sided with Abhi, "You're right man!.. We don't need these chicks.. Tum log bhaad mein jao.. Dushman party my foot.. Humein bhi shauk nahi hai inse baat karne ka.. Kyun Champ.."

And Champ answered in another song to keep up with his retro song trail.. "Bane chahe dushman zamana humara.. Salaamat rahe dostana humara.. Salaamat rahe dostana humara..", he sang dramatically..

Rahul thumped his back as Abhi passed a smirk to Nikki, who was rolling her eyes at their lameness.. "Good.. Keep up with your Dostana then.. Girls.. Abse inka social boycott shuru..", she declared.. Muskaan and Anjali agreed with her at once, but Riddhima was still glaring at Armaan who just stared back at her, wondering if she too will participate in this so called boycott.. The entire idea of the Lonavla trip had been that he get to spend time with his Basket.. Alone time was out of question thanks to these multiple haddis in their kabaab.. But at least he didn't want to spend the entire day, that too Christmas day, fighting with his Riddhima.. But then, it was fun irritating her!! It was really difficult to choose whether he should apologize or just join the war..

And before he could make that decision, Rahul retorted to Nikki's declaration, "Well that's great girls.. Atul.. Side ko gaadi laga de.. Ab social boycott kar rahe hai toh I am sure they can get to Lonavla on their own ", he told them coolly, grinning wickedly at Muskaan..

"Oye hum kyun utare.. Tum log utar jao..", Muskaan shouted back as Atul pulled over at the side of the highway.. Panic clear on all their faces..

"Kyun.. Atul's driving, its Armaan's car.. And both of them are on our team.. So I guess, you people don't have a choice.. ", Rahul grinned wickedly as the girls scowled again..

"Fine.. Chalo girls.. We don't need these guys.. Hum khud Lonavla pohoch sakte hain.. ", Anjali said and unlocked the door to get out, dragging Riddhima with her.. Muskaan and Nikki also got out from the back, openly cursing the guys and the nerve they had.. Riddhima was staring at Armaan as she followed her Di.. She couldn't believe he was on this with them.. Armaan was feeling bad for her, but he knew exactly what Rahul was doing.. Abhi however thought that this silly fight was getting out of hand, "Rahul yaar.. Kucch zyaada nahi ho raha.."

"Chill bro.. We've just stopped for tea.. ", he told him, indicating to the dhaba a little ahead, putting on his glares and getting out of the car.. Abhi grinned and Armaan high fived Atul getting out of the car, guffawing to themselves as they saw the girls huffing around, trying to figure out how they'll get to Lonavla on their own..

"Bhaiya.. Yahan pe Lonavla ki bus kahan milegi..", Muskaan asked the dhabe waala as the boys stood there to order their chais and coffees..

"Yahan se paanch kilometer dur ek bus stand hai.. Wahi milegi..", he informed her as he poured tea into small glass cups..

Rahul smirked at Muskaan's crestfallen expression, but stopped grinning as she glared at him and stormed off towards the girls to tell the of their only way of transport..

"Kya!!.. Paanch kilometer! I cant walk that much..", Nikki gave up even before they had started..

"Nikki.. There's no other way.. Don't you want to prove those good-for-nothing idiots that we can handle ourselves.. And we certainly don't need them..", Anjali said, determined at the task ahead of them..

Riddhima wasn't so sure about walking.. Well it was early in the morning.. So there was no danger as such.. But it would certainly be tiring and time-consuming.. As she was contemplating on any other option that they had missed out on she heard his voice right into her ear, "Oye heroine.. Coffee piyegi?..", he asked her, putting forward a small cup of coffee.. She would have probably accepted the coffee had he not been smirking like that..

"No thanks..", she turned away from him, crossing her arms angrily..

"Basket.. Common yaar.. We were joking..", he told her, keeping the coffee at a nearby table as he held her arm and turned her around.. "Accha no more mazaak.. Is that ok..", he negotiated with her cutely..

"Don't fall in that trap..", she heard Muskaan's voice in the distance.. They had moved away when Armaan had come to talk to her.. But clearly they were still within earshot..

"Eh Raaaool.. Shut her up yaar.. ", he yelled across to Rahul, who was trying to get Muskaan to drink her chai..

"You shut up.. I am not going to talk to you and that's it!..", Riddhima told him stubbornly as she tried to walk away.. But he held her arm again and pulled her back..

"I love you..", he declared as everyone else stopped talking and bickering and laughing and whatever else they were doing.. While the guys sniggered, the girls started giggling.. And Riddhima turned the deepest shade of red there was.. "Armaan!.. Seriously.. Don't you ever ever feel a little embarrassed.. Tum aise kaise ho?..", she asked, scowling and frowning and almost defeated by his shamelessness..

"Pyaar kiya toh sharmaana kya.. Kyun Champ.. What song would you sing for this.. ", he asked Atul, turning to him.. 

And Atul had a song ready for every situation.. "Pyaar kiya toh darna kya.. Jab pyaar kiya toh darna kya..", he started as Abhi and Rahul clapped the beat almost in a qawaali..  Armaan grinned at Riddhima who wanted nothing but to disappear from the spot..

"OH gimme a break!", an embarrassed Anjali almost pulled out her hair as Atul continued to sing on the top of his voice, scaring other people who had stopped by the dhaaba..,"Pyaar kiya koi chori nahi ki.. Chup chup aahen bharna kya.. Jab.."

"Oye Taansen.. Chup kar ab.. ", Muskaan yelled as she got up to leave, "Waise bhi yeh gaana Anarkali gaati hai.. Saleem nahi..", she pointed out like a movie expert.. "Armaan Anarkali hai kya?..", she asked as the girls started giggling silly..

"Kyun nahi ho sakta..", Armaan answered, shocking the guys.. "Agar Riddhima aur mujhpar Mughal-e-aazam banti toh I would have to play Anarkali only na.. Riddhima would have been that mucchad Salim and sasurji would have been.. In fact is..  that terrorizing Shehensha Akbar.. Ever ready to wall me up alive..", making all of them laugh at that.. Even Nikki and Muskaan found that funny.. Riddhima and Anjali just started to walk off from there at the poor joke.. So typical Armaan!.. And he had to involve their papa!..

"Muski.. Nikki.. Tum dono aa rahe ho na.. The bus stop is five kilometers away..", Riddhima called out.. She and Anjali had already started walking.. Muskaan and Nikki suddenly remembered about the war and followed the girls.. "Oye Muskaan.. Gaadi mein baitho.. We were joking..", Rahul called out..

"But we are not!..", Muskaan replied and walked off in rage..

"Nikki yaar.. Kahan ja rahe ho.. Stop all this naatak now..", Abhi tried to convince Nikki who had already started at quite a brisk pace.. She heard him and turned around to show him the thumbs down before following the rest of them towards their bus stop..

"Ruk jaana oh jaana humse do baatein karke chali jaana.. Yeh mausam hai deewana..", Atul sang as he started following the girls..

"Yaar someone shut him up.. Issine chaalu kiya hai yeh sab.. At this rate we'll reach Lonavla next Christmas..", Armaan told them, following Atul with the other  two.. 

"I know yaar.. But it irritates the girls so much.. Main toh Champ ke saath hoon..", Rahul sided with Atul.

And Armaan had to agree to that.. He had made this trip quite a lot of fun.. At least for them..

"Nikki.. Anjie.. Common guys.. Get back.", Abhi called out to them.. They were just aimlessly walking at the side of a highway behind a group of girls.. Kya din aa gaye hain.. And the sun had started to make its presence felt now as sweat trickled down their foreheads.. But the girls were really adamant and bent on proving themselves.. After a lot of attempts and almost three to four more songs from Atul, Armaan finally declared, "Ab bas ek hi tareeka bacha hai.. ", and he looked meaningfully towards Rahul, then turned to Abhi.. Atul raised his brow and asked, "oh.. You mean!.. "

"Yeah.. I mean!!.. ", Armaan answered him in the same conspiratory tone.. Nodding at each other like they were getting ready for war, they looked ahead at their targets who were pacing away..

"One.. Two.. .. .. .. Three.. ", he said and a loud war cry was heard from Atul as they charged towards the girls.. The girls stopped as they heard the scream and turned around to find the guys running full speed towards them.. And before they could come out of the shock and make any kind of decision, the guys had hauled them on their shoulders and were running back towards the car..

"You idiots.. You junglees.. So uncivilized.. Manners nahi hai kya..", the girls cursed as they were dumped unceremoniously in the rear seat of the car.. and before they could get out, Atul had sped away, the guys laughing as they joined Atul in singing, "Chaahe koi mujhe junglee kahe.. Kehne do ji kehta rahe.. Hum pyaar ke toofaanon mein hai gire hain.. Hum kya karein!.. Yaahoo!!.. " and they sang it continuously in a loop irritating the girls, who were uncomfortably squashed in the back seat.. And they didn't listen to any of the screaming female voices as they sang the same song over and over again almost bringing Anjali to tears.. By the time they reached Lonavla they had remixed Mohammad Rafi's legendary number into a torture weapon, with Armaan beat boxing, while the other three sang it in different pitches and tones and not to mention tunes, enjoying the horror stricken faces, cramped in the back of the car!!.. 


will continue the rest in a new part.. finish this one here!. Smile



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happy valentines day to you too zappy

the 1st time oh no no 2nd time on TOWS hiostry i am thefirst to comment yayyyyParty

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wow hahahahaha!!!!i am still laughing!!!lolLOL ROFLROFLgod you were awsome with all the selectinos of the songs sung by atul gosh the whole part was hilarious and ammy has become quite shameless but you told rite'jab pyaar kiya to darna.....'and the mugle aazam thing was hilarious and a little bit true (the shanky-akbar)thing god you were amazing in the last para they actually took the girls on their sholdresLOLlol

i can imagine the boys singing 'chahe koi mujhe......'and ammy doing beat boxing gosh agin hilariousROFL

i am sure the lonavla thing is going to be fun and yes a laughinh gig!!!LOLROFL

plss complete it soon

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A Happy Valentines Day to everyone!.. i hope you guys had (and some of you must still be having) a wonderful time with all your loved ones!! Hug

Lots n lots of Heart
Rachna! Smile


Hey Rachna, Wish u the same Big smile

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Is this meant for an update?Embarrassed Wink




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Hey Rach Hug

I cant believe i finished off reading all the missed out parts.. Embarrassed n u knw wat! m so short of words to express how much m loving the track of the story ...it went so flawlessly throughout...!
The 2weeks blunder that happened made me soo low.. it was such a pain yaar.. But i loved the way Shanky mended his mistakes... esp the airport fiasco LOL... It was actually shocking .. so much happened in a single day.. without exaggeration .. hats off to u for that ! I loved the way things moved on from then.. as they say, bad times make u stronger and help u introspect ... the same happened here too. .. AR both ,in their own ways, realized their mistakes.. u knw for almst 2-3 parts then i cudn't actually believe that AR got engaged!

The way Shanky was trying to be a cool dad actually made me laugh at certain points..poor thing !LOL The best thing i liked was the fact u jst didnot change his character abruptly in the fic .. His insecurities still remained .. though i was hating him for being such a kabaab me haddi but still his feelings and suspicions were not baseless .. they had to happen since he loved Ridz so much.. I was over the moon when he sent Ridz to Singapore .. that was jst the perfect way to make AR overcome the fear of that place ... and m glad they formed some cherishable memories there...

What turned out after that was like 'pheww!!' .. Evrythng was jst messing up for both of them .. but finally m glad everythng got cleared .. and sorted.. The way this track went was really nice! U took care of each n everyone's feelings and emotions ..

I love the way AR bickered throughout.. it was soo funny ! And that reminds me, the tattoo on Armaan's hand had ridz name on it na but u even mentioned that the last four letters meant 'love'... is there something m missing out? Confused

M really excited to knw wat lonavala holds for them ! U knw ,Everytime its Ridz who feels jealous when some other chic flirts with armaan, i was really wondering how much fun it ll be to see the vice versa Wink..jst a thought!

Continue soon ya.. i really wanna read the latter half of this part .. thanks for all ur pms..

Keep up the great work! Its ur writing only that keeps us all captivated to this FF Big smile

Love
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Hey Rachna!

Thanks and Wish u a very Happy Valentine's day too... Big smile

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hey zappy.happy valentines day to u too.......
 by any chance are u planning to upd8 tonite???

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