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TWOS!!#7 A Bunch of Yahoos!! pg77 [note pg 150] (Page 72)

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Posted: 13 February 2011 at 12:34am | IP Logged
the update was unbelievably awesomeClap
I felt a tug in my heart when I read about Riddhima and Atuls's little patientUnhappy...I hope she gets completely recovered soon!!
and I was literally getting goosebumps during Anjali's confession....even though I hate when Shanky acts like a kabaab mein haddi between Armaan and Riddhima, but I had honestly felt so bad for him when Riddhima blurted out everything even though she meant no harm....but I'm so glad that Riddhima and Shashank resolved all their differences and I kind of had guessed that Armaan would be hearing father-daughter convo and I was rightROFL...that part was so amazing too!!!

loved the update dear and hopefully you'd be able to continue soon.

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Posted: 13 February 2011 at 12:55am | IP Logged
Loved the update dear......finally all the problems are solved between the family....loved the part very much...emotional as well as romantic.......AWWWW Armaan is such a cutie pie ......loved him so much....try to update soon...thanks for the PM...take care.....

Lots of Love
GEET

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Posted: 13 February 2011 at 1:02am | IP Logged
Unbelievably brilliant update rachna......u are a superb writer........the shanky ridz talk really had some genuine lump in the throat moments....luved it completely........continue soon......and thanx for the PM

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SankiPagal IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 13 February 2011 at 1:24am | IP Logged
gosh.................thank u zappy for this wonderful surprise.... i was so happy to c ur pm in my inbox.

n awesm upd8 baby.........
u knw during teh whole ridz n shanky convo.. iw as literally crying........

 the last bt the perfect thing was papa oops shanky papa.....
awesm upd8 luvd it......
 n tahnku once again.......

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riddhima11 Senior Member
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Posted: 13 February 2011 at 4:14am | IP Logged
hey di (i hope i can call u that)
 
u know today in the morning
i was like ki kya karungi forums par jakar kal exam bhi hai aur waise bhi KOI update toh karne waala nahi hai..
but then after few min i couldnot resist n maine log on kar liya..
 n then SURPRISE SURPRISE
hahaha i felt sooooooooooo happy
 
thank you sooooooooooooooooooo much
exam se pehle waale din i made my day
n as i kept on reading the part bas my smile got bigger and bigger
it was soooooooooooooooooooooooo cute..
RM and AA scene inne pyaare the..
anjali really loves riddhima a lot because u know its hard to accept something which u feel was your mistake..
shashank nd riddhima ka convo padhke toh i was in tears...
actually m also my papa's darling daughter n we also u know sometimes have an argument..
 
u wrote that moment soooooo beautifully.. i could easily realte to it..
uske baad armaan ke dialogues to muuaaaaaaahh...
"SHANKY PAPA" sounds complete..
anyways i felt soooooo good when shashank complained about the NAINSAAFI..
 
awwwwww they all are going to lonavla...
maze aayenge..
 
u know u r one of the most amazing writers i have come across.
aap likhte bahut simple simple cheezein ho but your way of expressing moments nd talks are soooo beautiful ki we can relate it with the reality....
 
n plzzzzzzzzzzzz i never want this ff to end..
i absolutely love this fictinal reality u have created..
hehe i have lost my mind i guess with armaan..
 
anyways
continue soon
 
love
-pari 
 
 

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cuteshilpa Goldie
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Posted: 13 February 2011 at 4:19am | IP Logged
HEY LOVE THE PART 
it was awesome 

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pragatisk Senior Member
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Posted: 13 February 2011 at 4:26am | IP Logged
hey rachana
GREAT simply great
u just outdone yourself  wow yaar i really liked it
shashank riddhima conversation ,armans papa atul anjali n rahul muskaan all i really liked everything
u just ROCK girl
keep up the good work
do update soon
luv u
 

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miss93 Goldie
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Posted: 13 February 2011 at 5:15am | IP Logged

Hey

that was an awesomepart
just loved it
con. soon and tnx for the pm
love miss93

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