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TWOS!!#7 A Bunch of Yahoos!! pg77 [note pg 150] (Page 71)

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Posted: 12 February 2011 at 10:54pm | IP Logged
Aww!
Heavenly part!
Happy family in the end!!!
Lved the conversations and lastly Shanky papa?
Hahaha
thanx 4 pm
cont soon

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Posted: 12 February 2011 at 11:05pm | IP Logged

heyya

wow!!!!!lolvelyyy awsomeClap emotional and lill romantic too!!!Embarrassed

2 pages!!!good good zappy aise hi lambe labe parts dete rehenaTongue and the title is perfectly matching the shanky redemption!!!!lolLOL

awww loved the shanky ammy partt and even the ridzy shanky oneDay Dreaming

PSP god ammy is such a kid god!!!Approve

thx for the pm

itni deer mat lagana continuee verryyy soon

sakshi

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Posted: 12 February 2011 at 11:21pm | IP Logged
This is simply superb.Clap
1. father daughter relationship
2. Medical complications
3.Anjali's emotional side
4.Atul as caring husband.
5.Riddhima as a good frnd
6.Rahul as a superb husband
7.Muskaan as a full too filmy style heroine
8.Armaan's nautanki...n Devil luved it
9. Convo of Ridz shanky heart to heart.
10.Armaan n shashank sorting out differences
11.Armaan callng shashank papa
12. Perfect familyThumbs Up

It was so realistic and Unbelivable...
d way ridz was tellng her father abt Armaan...was also really nice1 rachna.

Keep it up yaar...way to go more
n don't even think of closing this ff...or wrapping it up..when u started it u didn't realised how dis story had touched r heart.Even though i alwayz luved Armaan more than riddhima.But here riddhima character r beyond my imagination.I can say n bet u r d real challenger for d Creatives.Your way of story telling is Superb n mindboggling.Plz don't get influence wid sum readers to wrap up dis FF..coz we r still alive n want to c ur FF alive!!!If i would hav a Publishing house..i would have straight away published ur FF as a Book only!!!Heart

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Posted: 12 February 2011 at 11:51pm | IP Logged
beautiful.....
 
just mind blowing......
 
armaan shashank bond.....to riddhima's realization about shanky...the patch bw father n daughter....AR moments ....everything wz toooo gud n emotional.....
 
thnx 4 da pm....
 
AMOON

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Posted: 12 February 2011 at 11:54pm | IP Logged
wat a pleasant surprise
Awesum uptd. Dear

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Posted: 12 February 2011 at 11:58pm | IP Logged
Oh no...!! It seems i missed sooo much of the story while being almst gayab .... Ouch
Gosh!! I need to buck up....
btw, hi rachna..Big smile..hw r u doing.. ??

ll comment after i finish reading all d threads that i missd.. i wonder how long wud that take? LOL

love
Vini

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Posted: 13 February 2011 at 12:02am | IP Logged
OMG Rachna I didnt expect an update !! It was such a pleasent suprise to wake up to one .
I loved the update ,loved how Riddhima reached her realisation and felt guilty about her words.She proved how she was guitly of hurting her father but even then not for how she stood up for Armaan because he wasnt wrong.LOL I loved their conversation and how they went on talking about Armaan and Padma behind their back .So the gangs made then ,Armaan Padma the calm cool and more practical two LOL and Shashank and Riddhima ,the ziddi ,and more fire like ROFL .But well they are all now family for real and not for namesake anymore.
For me the best part of the update had to be Shashank telling Armaan to call him papa and even though it was a light hearted moment and sure it means a lot for Armaan !
I love how you balanced each couple in this part and even though I missed AR moments a lot ,I know this update was a father daugther one.This part has build the story to a level where Shashank has gone beyong thinking what he did about Armaan.
I love how Armaan becomes a kid with Riddhima a demanding 'baby' which he is even when he doesnt like being called that LOL
Thats whats the most endearing about him.
You know Rachna everytime we think theres no way this ff could get better you do suprise us by writing such a beautiful update for us,which is hard :| with all the work you have !

I cant wait to know what happens next ,hope for more AR in the next one  though Embarrassed 

P.S - Thanks a ton for the update and PM !


Edited by Ankita.M - 13 February 2011 at 12:05am

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Posted: 13 February 2011 at 12:11am | IP Logged
Honestly Zeph... ClapClapClapClapClap
You are one FAB writer!!!

This is easily  one of the best if not the best part/episode of this FF!!!
I simply loved the way you depicted each relationship in this update!!!
be it Shanky-Armaan, Rahul Muski, Atul Anji, Atul Ridz, Padma Armaan, but the best was Armaan Ridz and Shanky Ridz!!

I love the way you portray everyone's emotions.. its actually like seeing a live episode!!

Cant wait for the next update already!

Keep writing, Zeph!!!

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