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TWOS!!#7 A Bunch of Yahoos!! pg77 [note pg 150] (Page 71)

Hazel-eye Goldie

Joined: 29 April 2009
Posts: 2265

Posted: 12 February 2011 at 11:21pm | IP Logged
This is simply superb.Clap
1. father daughter relationship
2. Medical complications
3.Anjali's emotional side
4.Atul as caring husband.
5.Riddhima as a good frnd
6.Rahul as a superb husband
7.Muskaan as a full too filmy style heroine
8.Armaan's nautanki...n Devil luved it
9. Convo of Ridz shanky heart to heart.
10.Armaan n shashank sorting out differences
11.Armaan callng shashank papa
12. Perfect familyThumbs Up

It was so realistic and Unbelivable...
d way ridz was tellng her father abt Armaan...was also really nice1 rachna.

Keep it up yaar...way to go more
n don't even think of closing this ff...or wrapping it up..when u started it u didn't realised how dis story had touched r heart.Even though i alwayz luved Armaan more than riddhima.But here riddhima character r beyond my imagination.I can say n bet u r d real challenger for d Creatives.Your way of story telling is Superb n mindboggling.Plz don't get influence wid sum readers to wrap up dis FF..coz we r still alive n want to c ur FF alive!!!If i would hav a Publishing house..i would have straight away published ur FF as a Book only!!!Heart

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Amoon.88 Goldie

Joined: 24 January 2009
Posts: 2339

Posted: 12 February 2011 at 11:51pm | IP Logged
just mind blowing......
armaan shashank riddhima's realization about shanky...the patch bw father n daughter....AR moments ....everything wz toooo gud n emotional.....
thnx 4 da pm....

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zoya-ammy Goldie

Joined: 26 May 2010
Posts: 1793

Posted: 12 February 2011 at 11:54pm | IP Logged
wat a pleasant surprise
Awesum uptd. Dear

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Ethereal-Path IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 19 May 2008
Posts: 16881

Posted: 12 February 2011 at 11:58pm | IP Logged
Oh no...!! It seems i missed sooo much of the story while being almst gayab .... Ouch
Gosh!! I need to buck up....
btw, hi rachna..Big smile..hw r u doing.. ??

ll comment after i finish reading all d threads that i missd.. i wonder how long wud that take? LOL


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-Anku- IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 07 January 2010
Posts: 35010

Posted: 13 February 2011 at 12:02am | IP Logged
OMG Rachna I didnt expect an update !! It was such a pleasent suprise to wake up to one .
I loved the update ,loved how Riddhima reached her realisation and felt guilty about her words.She proved how she was guitly of hurting her father but even then not for how she stood up for Armaan because he wasnt wrong.LOL I loved their conversation and how they went on talking about Armaan and Padma behind their back .So the gangs made then ,Armaan Padma the calm cool and more practical two LOL and Shashank and Riddhima ,the ziddi ,and more fire like ROFL .But well they are all now family for real and not for namesake anymore.
For me the best part of the update had to be Shashank telling Armaan to call him papa and even though it was a light hearted moment and sure it means a lot for Armaan !
I love how you balanced each couple in this part and even though I missed AR moments a lot ,I know this update was a father daugther one.This part has build the story to a level where Shashank has gone beyong thinking what he did about Armaan.
I love how Armaan becomes a kid with Riddhima a demanding 'baby' which he is even when he doesnt like being called that LOL
Thats whats the most endearing about him.
You know Rachna everytime we think theres no way this ff could get better you do suprise us by writing such a beautiful update for us,which is hard :| with all the work you have !

I cant wait to know what happens next ,hope for more AR in the next one  though Embarrassed 

P.S - Thanks a ton for the update and PM !

Edited by Ankita.M - 13 February 2011 at 12:05am

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AVKKG IF-Dazzler

Joined: 04 February 2010
Posts: 3800

Posted: 13 February 2011 at 12:11am | IP Logged
Honestly Zeph... ClapClapClapClapClap
You are one FAB writer!!!

This is easily  one of the best if not the best part/episode of this FF!!!
I simply loved the way you depicted each relationship in this update!!!
be it Shanky-Armaan, Rahul Muski, Atul Anji, Atul Ridz, Padma Armaan, but the best was Armaan Ridz and Shanky Ridz!!

I love the way you portray everyone's emotions.. its actually like seeing a live episode!!

Cant wait for the next update already!

Keep writing, Zeph!!!

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Sanju_ IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 01 October 2008
Posts: 25081

Posted: 13 February 2011 at 12:34am | IP Logged
the update was unbelievably awesomeClap
I felt a tug in my heart when I read about Riddhima and Atuls's little patientUnhappy...I hope she gets completely recovered soon!!
and I was literally getting goosebumps during Anjali's confession....even though I hate when Shanky acts like a kabaab mein haddi between Armaan and Riddhima, but I had honestly felt so bad for him when Riddhima blurted out everything even though she meant no harm....but I'm so glad that Riddhima and Shashank resolved all their differences and I kind of had guessed that Armaan would be hearing father-daughter convo and I was rightROFL...that part was so amazing too!!!

loved the update dear and hopefully you'd be able to continue soon.

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sweetdesire IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 11 July 2010
Posts: 27484

Posted: 13 February 2011 at 12:55am | IP Logged
Loved the update dear......finally all the problems are solved between the family....loved the part very much...emotional as well as romantic.......AWWWW Armaan is such a cutie pie ......loved him so much....try to update soon...thanks for the PM...take care.....

Lots of Love

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