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TWOS!!#7 A Bunch of Yahoos!! pg77 [note pg 150] (Page 52)

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 11:06am | IP Logged
Hey,
i would say the wait was worth it.
When i read Armaan dreaming abt kissing his sasurji i was like laughing like a manic (my sis. toh thought i have lost it)

i loved the way you portrayed Armaan - Shanky's relationship. Glad that shanky is realizing the fact that may be he over-reacted (but i guess its quite normal as father are closer to their daughters and to feel a bit left out is ok.
Specially bcoz this was so sudden for him that changes accept karne mein time laga).

Now i just hope the father-daughter sort out the prob.
continue soon
take care

luv,
neha

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 11:06am | IP Logged
awesome...simply awesome..
 
armaan padma convo
 
armaan riddhima
 
n lastly
 
armaan sasurji
 
 
all d scenes were so brilliantly written...especially the last one...loved it..Smile

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 11:08am | IP Logged
res... will be edited shortly....promise....;)

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 11:37am | IP Logged

awesome....simply brilliant yaar...

the best out of best...armaan padma convo r simply gr8 and finally armaan and shanky convo steal the whole update yar....

update nxt part as soon as possible

love

sania

 

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 11:39am | IP Logged
Comment updated on Page 50 :)
Awesome Part Zappy, truly enjoyed it!
Continue soon :)

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 11:47am | IP Logged
SPEECHLESS.... wat an amazing part....  loved it.... it was so so wonderful... feel like crying now..... 

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 11:52am | IP Logged
Rachna thanks so much for this update !!
I lovee love love this part so much Big smile its the first time I have loved anything more then just having AR in a part LOL
AHH Shashank and Armaan both were obviously the highlight of the part.
I am sure Armaans probably thanking the headache and the fever atm.
 Shashank feels a lot more for Armaan then he shows,but he is the father of the bride LOL so he is gonna act that way until they are married or probably even after that .I'll always look forward to the day Shashank asks Armaan to call him dad or something *sigh* LOL
But it was so touching,Shashanks concern towards Armaan ,the fatherly concern,which he does realise Armaan missed out on all his life.

I am sure in no time Shashank will probably try seeing the Armaan behind all the craziness,as he says.
Armaan and his sasurjee phobia makes me laugh ROFL the dream and then the way he kept thinking to himself when Shashank was being so concerned .AHH he is such a kid and a crazy one at that .
I loved the way Shashank actually confided his feelings to Armaan ,I didnt think I'd see that day coming LOL .
I cant wait to to read ahead :D 
Am sure it takes a lot more then we can think to actually post what you have.
A lot of thought and a lot of time and a lot to leave aside for it.So thank you so much for this update.

P.S - Having said all of that I hope hope you write an update tomo LOL I have an exam on tuesday ,imma keep thinking about it if you dont LOL ,jking <3 Thanks for the pm !

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Posted: 06 February 2011 at 11:53am | IP Logged
aww soo sweet....
finally armaan and shanky r talking properly without shanky's taunts......
loved it completely...
plzz complete the part soon....
thanx for the pm.......

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