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TWOS!!#7 A Bunch of Yahoos!! pg77 [note pg 150] (Page 51)

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Wow ... loved this new Armaan-Shashank relationship, where both are sorta realizing their true feelings for each other, especially Shashank. (Don't feel like calling him Shanky anymore).
 
Kids, at times, act very mean and selfish. Riddhima being one such kid. Though she loves her dad beyond anything, she puts up fights with him. I guess both Riddhima and Shashank are going to cry and reconcile with each other. That is going to be a wet reunion :(
 
Waiting for you to update further.
 
Cheers,
Suvarna

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Zappy you are a darling... god you giving competition to yourself by putting up wonderful update after update..like always this one too had Emotion..Relationship building stronger between Mother n Son I mean that scene oil massage you made it look soo comfortable like  they too this daily or something.........Passion thanks to 
AR....Shanky soft corner which i guess all father in law has for son in law but hardly comes out


N last but not he list..this part was Hilarious...God I was Laughing soo ssoo Badly.......
Armaan Mind..........1st Kiss...this is going to be ultimate dream some1 could see..his expression when he was thinking abt it..........Hahhahhaha..like eghhhss..yucccks..
Then comes the part when he goes Home..God his one liner in brain ...that almost kiss he thought ..All n All i am just laughing my heart out imagining it..ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL

I wanted to repost yours soo many lines which i looove alot lot..But was like they too many..
cant put fingers on particulars..In such heavy situation you made the story soo light with Armaan in mind one liner ..wow it is

That food wala stuff all n all..it was just awesomely awesome...Clap

This comment is more of the Dedication to Armaan n his Monster but sweet sasurji..for sure.......LOL

N yes DMG1 n AR has touch our heart bad..its irecovable now


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Aweosme part Rachna.......I really got emotional reading the last Armaan Shanky part.....U really are a superb writer.....Continue soon and thanx for the PM,....

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Zapppyy !!!
thanx sooo much ! for updating :D 
OK i sooooo loved this part <3 yay ! so armaan and shanky mending things all over again !
ok i swear when you wrote about armaans dream KISSING shanky ! i was literally laughing ... HAHAAH ! that was damn funnyy !! lol !
and then the last scene was awesome !  
yayayaay ! pandit coming soon ! yay! ok hes coming on monday ! cant wait :D :D 
update soon !
luv ya

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hey awesome part...loved it..
finally problems b/w armaan and shashank have been sorted out
and shashank taking care of armaan was so cute
continue soon..

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aaw.............cho chweet........Embarrassed
how sweet.....this part is the most beautiful i have ever read of course apart from the patch-up one........the way u showed shashank's feelings for armaan and vice- versa it was so beautiful........i luved the part......seriously.......Clap
u'r a terrific writer!!!!!!!!!and the part was rocking........Party
continue soon
bye,take care
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