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TWOS!!#7 A Bunch of Yahoos!! pg77 [note pg 150] (Page 44)

z.e.p.h.y.r IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 05 February 2011 at 6:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shivi17

u write awesomly (thats not even a word but who cares :P )
anyway i love the way u write, i mean i could feel being in this situation and thats what very good writers do to their readers.. in simple langauge ur AWESOME
but, ridhimma in this update reminds me of Aaliya in Break Ke Baad (not sure if u have seen it but ya)
pls continue soon. The way you written this makes me put myself in the situation and analyze both ridzi and shanky, and i come to a conclusion that both are right in their own way. I hope shanky understands ridzi and also respects armaan and on the other hand ridzi just controls her anger.
One thing is for sure, both father and daughter need an ANGER MANAGEMENT class :P
good job and update fast :)

Thank you!
and yeah i feel nice when you guys tell me that you can picture yourself or just picture the scenes as they happen.. 
also, i havent seen Break ke Baad.. so i dont know what this aaliya character is.. God.. i really need to watch some movies!! i need a time turner!! oh Hermione where are you when i need you! lol!! 
coming back to Shanky and Ridzi.. both are wrong and right in their own place. 
ah.. and Anger management.. yes.. the Shashank and the Shashankling needs it bad!!
trying to update.. sorry if i dont reply. see i hardly get time to put up an update .. toh replying dur ki baat hai.. but i do read each and every comment that you guys post! Smile


Edited by zephyrr - 05 February 2011 at 6:37am

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Posted: 05 February 2011 at 7:00am | IP Logged
LOL
Originally posted by zephyrr

Originally posted by shivi17

u write awesomly (thats not even a word but who cares :P )
anyway i love the way u write, i mean i could feel being in this situation and thats what very good writers do to their readers.. in simple langauge ur AWESOME
but, ridhimma in this update reminds me of Aaliya in Break Ke Baad (not sure if u have seen it but ya)
pls continue soon. The way you written this makes me put myself in the situation and analyze both ridzi and shanky, and i come to a conclusion that both are right in their own way. I hope shanky understands ridzi and also respects armaan and on the other hand ridzi just controls her anger.
One thing is for sure, both father and daughter need an ANGER MANAGEMENT class :P
good job and update fast :)

Thank you!
and yeah i feel nice when you guys tell me that you can picture yourself or just picture the scenes as they happen.. 
also, i havent seen Break ke Baad.. so i dont know what this aaliya character is.. God.. i really need to watch some movies!! i need a time turner!! oh Hermione where are you when i need you! lol!! 
coming back to Shanky and Ridzi.. both are wrong and right in their own place. 
ah.. and Anger management.. yes.. the Shashank and the Shashankling needs it bad!!
trying to update.. sorry if i dont reply. see i hardly get time to put up an update .. toh replying dur ki baat hai.. but i do read each and every comment that you guys post! Smile

zappy never in ur life watch break k baad. it one of the most dumbest n stupidest movi....... u will ever watch. so i m cautioning u b4 only.................
n ya upd8 soon wiating for it.. n pls is shanky ka dimaag zara sahi trak par lao yaar warna mai us gadhe ko tumhare ff k andar ghus kar maar dungi......... kamina ghurta rehta ahi ammy ko. dosent he knw. ammy is straight........LOL
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Posted: 05 February 2011 at 8:00am | IP Logged
zappy plss try and update today gal plsss
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Posted: 05 February 2011 at 9:06am | IP Logged
zappy plzz try 2 update it today yaar!
please...
m dyeing to read further...n plzz this ff shud be never ending.d day u'll end dis ff..m gonna die d very next moment.m so much addicted to dis ff!!!
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Posted: 05 February 2011 at 9:42am | IP Logged
hey shud I wait for update ..will u put anything tonight??


Edited by sjain - 05 February 2011 at 9:43am
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Posted: 05 February 2011 at 10:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sjain

hey shud I wait for update ..will u put anything tonight??

i'll try.. but dont wait up. check in the morning!!

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Posted: 05 February 2011 at 10:27am | IP Logged
=( I miss TWOS! Pleash update quick! =(

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Posted: 05 February 2011 at 10:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by zephyrr

Originally posted by sjain

hey shud I wait for update ..will u put anything tonight??

i'll try.. but dont wait up. check in the morning!!


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