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TWOS!!#7 A Bunch of Yahoos!! pg77 [note pg 150] (Page 18)

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 7:20am | IP Logged
Hey everyone!!
wow!.. the installment that i've put up has created quite an unexpected stir.. and i am glad that most of you see Shanky's point of view.. he is not wrong at all..
Riddhima however is a little upset with her papa, though she knows that she's wrong.. and the complete update may justify all their perspectives.. but ultimately.. Shanky rules!!
other than that, i think one point that was missed by most and was mentioned in the previous part was that Riddhima had called her mom from the airport after they had landed.. but that was the only call she made home..
also, Armaan bechara is stuck in this jhol! but i am sure he will try his best to sort things out, not only for Riddhima but for himself too..
all that and more in the next update which i hope to put up by tonight..Smile

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 7:33am | IP Logged

heyya...

i know i m commenting for the first time...

i have been hibernating in this forum for qute sum time...

but i had to comment here and at mansis taming...

i have read ur story in one go...

the best part was that i read part 80 or 81 first  and then started the story from first part...

the seperation was really painful but my luck i knew before hand that they r meeting again for good...

i really like the mature aspects which u bring in through shanky and armaan...

each charchter has gone into transformation which gives a very real touch feeling.....

i must say ur parts r mighty long....

i must say u r one of the finest writers if has.....

and i really ;loved whole story till now...

bye

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 7:42am | IP Logged
hey rachna..
 
congratulations on the new thread..
 
loved both the parts..n i do see shankys POV in the latest update...any parent would be apprehensive and protective about their children in the manner shanky is...
 
hope riddhima understands this too n their shaadi ki date gets fixed soon...
 
n can we pls have a trip to the lonavala orphanage as well...minus shanky though....Smile

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 7:49am | IP Logged
Comment edited on pg 17. I reserved it before reading the  part "In Another World" together.But by the time ,I read and edited it,you had finished your "rounds".LOL

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 7:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by armaanlover_7

Comment edited on pg 17. I reserved it before reading the  part "In Another World" together.But by the time ,I read and edited it,you had finished your "rounds".LOL
 
 
lol!!

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 8:21am | IP Logged
Lovveeed the part <3
I dont know why you think it could be boring <3
One thing I absolutely love about the part is that Armaan and Riddhima are together in this ,giving rest to each others insecurities !
Shashank being a father is defintely justified ,after having been so generous and sending them alone he deserves to be atleast well informed ,but I do think he overeacts at times too.His possessiveness for Riddhima exceeds limits which become too taxing on both Riddhima and even Armaan ,they are always living in fear ! I do agree their actions havent given him a reason but he needs to trust them more !
As far as Riddhima goes she is wrong in having lost her cool and spoken bitterly and obviously they did make a  mistake by not calling back home.But her pov is right because she wants to be herself too and not a good daugher good doctor and good girl LOL .

Armaans stuck like alwayss ROFL am sure he'll be the one to sort it somehow Embarrassed

I loveee the part and the sense that goes into it .Clap

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 8:33am | IP Logged
Cngrts.
Cmplt it soon.

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 8:59am | IP Logged
Hey Rachna,

Though I don't comment as often as I should, I have to let you know that I love the way you justly portray everyone's feelings.  Though this ff is about Armaan and Riddhima, we get the feeling and emotions associated with everyone around them, and that's what makes your readers always want more.  I'm sure I'm not the only one who feels that while reading your ff, you get so engrossed in it that you feel like you're watching it happen right in front of you.

Loved it!  Please continue soon....

Hope your back is better!

Love,
Rinku28

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