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TWOS!!#7 A Bunch of Yahoos!! pg77 [note pg 150] (Page 16)

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 2:51pm | IP Logged
Hey! I just read this part :) 
And I generally comment very less.. But, here's a perspective.. 

This time I really think that Dr Shashank was not at fault. 90 percent of the fault does lie with Armaan Riddhima.. They can be forgiven ofcourse :) Pyaar mein sab maaf! Hehe.. No but seriously.. 
First of all Shashank allowed them to go to Singapore.. Honestly, VERY FEW fathers would allow their daughters on a trip before marriage.. But Shashank wanted to make amends.. And compensate for all that he had done! AR were happy and touched. So far- so good. 
Now, when they reached Singapore.. Riddhima SHOULD HAVE called him! Whether you are with your fiance or with Shah Rukh Khan.. Doesn't matter.. You are enjoying yourself.. But hey, you have parents at home who would have expected a call anyway.. Armaan being with her only added fuel.. 
She doesn't call. Fine. Shashank and Padma call her.. She doesn't pick up! Armaan doesn't pick up.. ! Completely understanding where AR are coming from.. They love each other to death and can't get enough of each other.. But that is no excuse to forget your other relations! Its not how it works.. ! -___- 
THEN, to top it all.. Instead of apologizing and just quietly listening to Shashank.. She was back-answering him! :S She is 26.. And probably the BEST daughter in the world.. But just because she all of a sudden realizes she is 26 and should be free to make her own decisions.. She can't throw it in their face and expect them to understand.. And its no point comparing herself to Anj or anyone else really.. Because everyone has their own personal individual relationships! :) I really loved Armaan though.. The way he tried to convince her.. And I don't blame Shashank.. AT ALL. Even my dad- any dad- hates it if I come home drunk! And its even worse if you are drunk in some other country with your fiance.. Standing up on a bar and singing is really hilarious to me.. But to my dad.. Its kind of ridiculous and "awaaragandi" as we call it! 
Riddhima should really apologize and Shashank should give her a last warning and let it go.. What's done can't be changed! 
PS: I love Padma <3 

You really have a CAPACITY to write! <3 
Happy writing! 
Sorry for babbling so much *embarrassed* 

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 4:19pm | IP Logged
WOW aanother part already zappy, today is surely my lucky dayy hahaha
 
will just read and comment :)
 
 
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Loved the part!
Though i hate the drama thats going, but you know what, shanky is actually right. I completely understand his view and from his perspective as a father. And ARMAAN IS SO SMART...he knows exactly how to make riddhima realize as well, THEY COMPLETE EACH OTHER surely..lol
 
And im loving this plot, though i was hoping for some calm story plot after singapore, but im actually liking this..its like gripping me into the story :) Thankss! And who knows, this may trigger AR'S SHAADI?...I hopeee soo!
 
Loved it zappy, continue soon and dont make us wait too long!
Take careee


Edited by Armaan-KSG - 26 January 2011 at 5:08pm

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 4:44pm | IP Logged
yay another part Big smile

SHASHANK!!!! AngryAngryCensored
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i really wish someone would open his behaviour as a teen...or a young adult. There has to be something to make him like this....
and why!! why!! every time he comes at the wrong time! Angry why can't he sit peacefully in his cabin LOL

i love it when Ridz defends Armaan because she very well knows Armaan would rather just listen to it all than defend himself.

aww i feel really bad for muski tho....she really wants to experience the "real" wedding and then also go on a honeymoon with Rahul. Another wedding would be fun to read about Embarrassed

Can't wait for the second installment Big smile

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 5:13pm | IP Logged
bas in dono ki jaldi se shaadi karado! (dont i sound like shanky)

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 5:35pm | IP Logged
I just have one thing to say... their day was realy a bad one... gosh the video had to start that time only?

Poor poor armaan and ..... rids i don't get it why did she yell back.. gosh i can so understand armaan's logic...

take care and continue soon

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 8:05pm | IP Logged
So Riddhima is proving to be junior Shanky. But natural. Like father like daughter. All these years she didn't find the need to disobey her father or defend herself when he pointed out her mistakes, but she has to defend her Armaan, be he right or wrong. That's so cute. SmileSmileSmile

As they say, in life some days you get to be the pigeon but on some days you have to be the statue. So looks like this day was one such day for AR.

When you write about Ar romance, you take us, romantics, to an altogether different world. But you have made even these mundane happenings, interesting, with your excellent writing skills. They are an essential part of the story. So I don't agree to this -

i dont think many of you will be happy with this part..

Eagerly awaiting the next installment. Love, Shardha.


Edited by ssh57 - 26 January 2011 at 10:29pm

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 9:00pm | IP Logged
Like father, like daughter! Ridhima is so much like her dad - stubborn and opinionated :-)

But I think, much as Armaan might try to assuage her guilt, he should allow Ridhima to take the blame and realise that she cant play victim this time :-))

In the exhilration of this new found freedom with Armaan, she is failing to see that with her behaviour, it is she who is alienating Armaan from her dad. From being an obedient daughter, Shashank finds that his daughter has become rebellious and in his eyes commiting something that he thinks is not acceptable. Tho I must admit, I dont know of too many dads who would be happy with what he thinks they've been upto! Everyone looks for a scapegoat and Shanky has found his in Armaan and he is not too far from the mark. Armaan has been responsible for a change in Ridhima, very ably aided by her herself though! :-)) She has a right to be who she wants to be but needs to break that in a lil more tactfully ;-)

She chose to stay with Armaan despite express instructions to the contrary and thwarted all his attempts to make her stay at the hotel. She forgets to call her dad, which I can understand, and when caught, instead of being contrite is agressive and asserts her independence. Her insistence on keeping & sharing the video when she knows its a sensitive issue for Armaan ended up in a public display of their drunken revelry (that was cute, the revelry I mean). She needs to realise that in all relationships, independence and freedom comes with a price - that of responsibility. She is choosing to enjoy the freedom without accepting the onus of responsibility. Doesn't work that way, whether its a filial or a romantic relationship.

Armaan was very sensible and makes you realise why you like him so much. Or perhaps, having been without parents, he realises the importance of family much more than Ridhima who takes them for granted because she has been showered with unconditional love!

We all have been in love and physical intimacy and desire to spend time together is a huge part of it! And I'm sure some of us have been where Ridhima is right now :-) been caught on an unsceduled night out, lol! But its her behaviour thereafter which is a dissappointment. Maybe she's been good too long!:-)

Not that Ridhima is going to land herself in grave trouble, but I do believe that Shanky is morally and ethically absolutely right in getting angry. Ridhima and Armaan abused his trust and Ridhima needs to recognise that and make ammends before she completely strains the relationship Shanky & Armaan will share.

They will continue to be cordial cos they're going to be related, but does she want her dad to like and respect her husband or does she want a relationship of distrust and antagonism between her husband and dad? Cos she sure seems to be gunning for that!

The moral science discussion being over,LOL, the update was nice! Shall wait for the next update, enjoyed reading this. Esp the convo between Armaan and Ridhima on the terrace.

I must admit, I am envious, how can you manage to write so much stuff? I think I would have a writer's block after the first 3 updates. It takes a lot of creativity and passion to pen down all of this, so really well done!
Cheers


Edited by DMGFan-2b-not2b - 27 January 2011 at 1:27am

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 9:53pm | IP Logged
Of course what did she expect. That Shanky will tell her ," beta very good. Keep it up." Yeh to hona hi tha. So I don't think there is anything wrong with the part. Intact it was really hilarious at times and sad at others. How difficult it must be for a doctor to inform the family of a dying patent

Please update soon
Love
Shveta

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