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TWOS!!#7 A Bunch of Yahoos!! pg77 [note pg 150] (Page 16)

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 1:37am | IP Logged
that was quick long installment...ROFL

luved this 1st installment absolutely....wopiiii
I m surprised by ridhima's behavior ...who is right and who is wrong that's difficult to judge ..coz as arm said GENERATION GAP ..which is surely reflected in both daughter's and father's behavior ..but this so rebellious ridhhima in spite of knowing that wat she has done can not b justified  ..but still getting angry and shouting on her father ...this is so not her...I know wen AR got seperated @ that time also she opposed her father ..that time shanky was @ fault by not understanding their relationship..but here in this situation I found her reaction to wat shanky said is a bit too much....she shud have been patient with him and shud have made him understnad her POV polietly ..then I guess shanky wudn't have been so mad @ them ..he agreed to send her with armaan  that in it self is big thing for any father to do ...so he wud have understud her opinion  and justification about everything ..and yes ridz can not deny that she is wrong and behaved irresponsibly..even I feel arm also behaved ignorant by not telling her to call or even I feel he shud himself have called padma if not shanky (LOLL) after landing in singapore ..all in all..AR did commit mistake about which they shud apologize and also sasurji shud trust them for once ...and realize that ridhima is not kid anymore....

lastly...I luved  AR parapet scn ..arm pacifying her ,,,and making her understand about her behavior with her dad...hope she says sorry soon :)))



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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 2:05am | IP Logged
First of all congruats for the 7th thread.Clap i just realised that I havent posted anything on this thread eventhough I had visited here many times.

Finally! i read the whole update of  "In Another World" together.Woh.....It took me 4 hours to read it together Shocked.It was such a long update !!! I didnt realise it when I started reading.Since you gave so many instalments ,I always felt I didnt get enough of it.But now I am over satisfied.Big smile
I had commented on all the instalments except the last. The last instalment was good just like every instalment..I liked the way Ridhima tricked Armaan for a kiss.I really like the cute and frowning Armaan.He looks like a baby LOL.I noticed  that Ridhima is using the 'baby' word many times nowadays  though she know that Armaan gets irritated by it.Thats really fun.And I have a strong feeling that the 'baby' will soon become his favourite name just like 'basket' became Ridhima's favourite.She used to get irritated when he called her 'basket' earlier.

I felt the shopping part could have been more elaborate instead of  just narration.Like Armaan and Ridhima bicker over buying some things etc..

Then atlast when they were ready to leave the apartment,I could feel the emptiness very clearly.You beautifully wrote every emotions and emptiness very well.

I didnt think you will put up the next  update very quickly.So I was surprised to see the incomplete part today morning.I want to comment only after reading the whole update.(If you will complete it today).Otherwise I dont get full satisfaction.You know that already.So waiting for the complete part.Day Dreaming


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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 2:09am | IP Logged
Great update. Like the canteen scene.

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 4:55am | IP Logged
aewsome part.....
plzz complete it soon....
and do pm me....

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 5:24am | IP Logged
Shanks is a typical dad. Ridzi is his daugther LOL Dr.Payal is gonna bring ridzi's insecurities forward? I sense trouble in paradise and not just from shanky!!

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 5:35am | IP Logged
Hmph! U always forget to pm me
khair chaddo!
The parts were fab!
Shanky kab sudhrega?

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 5:57am | IP Logged
Congratulations Zappy (Rachna)..for d seventh thread.
Nyc Part...i luved it...but dis part is like more serious...thoda comedy bhi daal...
n i would luv if u'll add Rahul muskaan's honeymoon in ur next part..n deir moments too(chota sa) n continue wid AR..

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