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The Feather of Blue Bird [MN] # 1[NTL:pg 1] (Page 96)

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Posted: 14 September 2011 at 11:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Faria-

Originally posted by drmaha

Originally posted by -Faria-

intezar intezar intezar intezar intezar
kab khatam hogi ye intezar
 
bas kch hi daer mai apka intezar khatam hujayei ga bacha... LOLLOL

Maha apki next OS ka wait kar rahi hu
aur haap apki 2n fki irst update de kar bhaag gaye- ap wo update kyun nehi karte..


Sujaaa aur kitna der wait karna parega??
 
yar faria bas 2nd part apko jald mil jayei ga... fikar not...Wink 
hum kaha bhagai gai ... Unhappy... ap batayei ap aaj kal loogo buhat zabardast romantic os likhwarahai hai... sab theik haina... hmmm LOLLOLLOLLOLBlushing
 
suja...  hum intezar ker ker k thag gayei... aab aur imtehan maat leijei khudara... hum bardash nai ker payei gai...  LOLLOL

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Posted: 14 September 2011 at 12:05pm | IP Logged
Aargh!!Why am I unable to like the postOuch
this update was heart wrenching..Mayank left Nupur and no one was able to find him..Nupur lived in his memory for 5 years...hope they meet soon
cont soon dear

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Posted: 14 September 2011 at 12:06pm | IP Logged
4 updates from 4 of my brilliant witers in one evening...whoa..i loved that...!!!
 
now to this FF and this story...wow sujata..i just loved this...5 yeras!!!...OMG..that was heart wrenching...
i felt sooo bad...gawd 5 din koi FF update nahi karta hai toh i feel like crying..and here nupur has been waiting for 5years...
missed mayank terribly...
 
want to know his side of the story...
 
i know its being difficult for you...so thanku for the update...but being greedy still...want naother update as sooon as possible...
 
amar yei FF ta porte khub bhalo lage...
loadzzz of love...


Edited by arjun-forever - 14 September 2011 at 12:06pm

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Posted: 14 September 2011 at 12:09pm | IP Logged
res
yeah kamal kasy hoa
update
humary naseeb mein update
 
eidted
 
 

They strt was so painful…..the way she was searching mayank..

Was so obvious, u lost herself way back..n today she lost even the reason of doing all this too

 

N maynk's parents can nevr evr be right n good…thy just donot have  a heart….sun j***k

 

Its feel so painful to see her in such state yaar..so much

She gave life to him, n lost her life

 

mouth is stronger than eyes ... it has a great ability to hurt people in words

 

I so loved this dialogue. so tue…lovly line suja

 

I really loved the way uday reacted to the situation but also the way chitra handles it

Its true they were punished of a sin thy nevr did….

 

N n all it was a gr8 update ms filler

 

So mayank even chaged his name……

Five years OMG….suja im dying to read abt maynks chnge….fearing it to much

 

 

Gr8 update..painful n pitfull

 



Edited by drfizaahmed - 17 September 2011 at 2:00pm

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Posted: 14 September 2011 at 12:16pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by drfizaahmed

res
yeah kamal kasy hoa
update
humary naseeb mein update

Fiza, tu pitegi mujhsse ...

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Posted: 14 September 2011 at 12:18pm | IP Logged
thanks for updating...Smile
loved it lodsssSmileBig smileSmile
awesome update dear...ClapClap
awww feeling really bad for Nupur...DisapproveDisapprove
i hope ap mere MayUr ko jaldi se mila dengi...Confused
btw i like wht Uday said to his father dat man deserve dis...Evil Smile
n wht abt dose 3 demons...Angry
ups i mean Maynk's family...Evil Smile
unhe kab akal ayegi...Angry
waiting eagerly for d next update...Big smile
plzzz update soon...Embarrassed
love ya...Hug


Edited by 18anila1 - 15 September 2011 at 12:35pm

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Posted: 14 September 2011 at 12:28pm | IP Logged
Nice update

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Posted: 14 September 2011 at 12:51pm | IP Logged
ab unres ka wait karo jaise hum update ka karte haiStern SmileLOL...!

chal unres kardete hai tum bhi kya yaad karogi kis dildar se pala pada EmbarrassedLOL...after all kal update ka sawaal hai warna yeh resss bhari padhta Cool jaise humko update ka intezaar pada Stern SmileLOL...!


suja i just loved this update...i wanted them to feel the pain n u made sure to fulfill my wish Approve...but the humiliation part still remained for mayank's so called pathetic family...make sure they repay every ounce of it...its pay back time for all Stern Smile...!

well nupur's father regrets but ab pachtayit kya hoat jab chidiya chuk gayi khet...okk lets give him one more chance to mend things just for sake of mayur...!

btw i like nupur's friend...a friend in need is a friend indeed n he indeed is a true friend...he made sure not to leave her alone when she was in need...!

well don't u think nupur should thank mayu for only bcoz of his inspiration she was able to comp her MBA n made a mark for herself Ermm... pyar mein thanks nahi hota i know par pyar mein dhoka bhi to nahi hota jo usne kiya phir reason kuch bhi ho she acted selfish so she deserved this pain...!

okk i think ur gonna intro mayu but ladki use wapis paane se pehle sab se khub papad belwanaLOL...itne din uska pain hum bardasht kiye ab sabko uske aage jhukta dekhna chahte haiEmbarrassed...make sure i do enjoy this part do...unko milwana but aaram se koi jaldi nahi LOL...!

i love ur siggie for this update...its gorgeous...!

LOL

Edited by valliyah - 18 September 2011 at 10:38am

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