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The Feather of Blue Bird [MN] # 1[NTL:pg 1] (Page 94)

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Posted: 13 September 2011 at 1:48pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ridi_onasis

i hope ki ab nupur ki baap ko akel aye aur wo mayu ko bawpas laye...jaldi se next update kar dena..i'm waiting


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lol ... Ridz ... ur comment made me laugh ... nupur ki baap ko ... lol
dnt worry mayu jaldi wapas aayega.

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Posted: 13 September 2011 at 1:50pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by DASTAK..

hi...
m really sorry..
i 4got...
cuming 2 d update...
its superb...ClapClap
nw a days your update really make me cry...CryCry
fab writing...StarStar
hope mayank cum back soon...
cant wait for update...
update soon...
kp writing...
tk care...Wink



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its ok dear ... kabhi kabhi aisa ho jata hai ... dnt be sorry ... aur phir hum hai na  aapko remind karwane k liye ...
m really sorry for made u cry ...
bt dnt worry, mayank ll some back soon.


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Posted: 13 September 2011 at 1:54pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by palz_ArTi4ever

can i request u sumthing??plzz keep mayank safe n unite mayur 4 once n for all..this long term seperation is unbearable...where is mayank?plzz bring him bk to her...back to bk sad updates...Unhappycontinue soon with a jovial part plz...



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dnt worry Palz ... mayur ll unite soon ... n safe too ...
well jovial part ka to pata nhi ... par ab thora kam sad update hoga.
just wait for mayank's entry.


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Posted: 13 September 2011 at 1:57pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by --Ruchi--

ohhh I am so so happy neel 
was a thief...I am so happy that
the truth revealed before marriage and I am even more happy
to see her father's conditionEvil Smile

Anyways poor nupur...and where is mayank...
I am hoping for the best for my MayurSmile
cont soon




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thank u Ruchi ... me too very happy to see nupur's father's condition.
dnt worry ... mayank ll come back soon.


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Posted: 13 September 2011 at 2:03pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Auroni.92

Uff why this neel got the opportunity to run away...He shud be in  jail...But the first person shud be in jail is nupur's father...bewakuf kahika...
And why mayank left...Im so disheartened...hope everything will be fine with time...
btw shock ws great!!! haha...mindblowing part..
cont soon...




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Auroni, u r right ... first person shuld be in jail is nupur's father ... i too hate him.
why wr u so disheartened of maynak's leaving???
isnt so obvious... nobody trust him ... no body believe him ... nupur insulted him ... he would have stayed, but nupur broke him from inside out.
in this situaltion, isnt it obvouse he left all alone ... though he was alone in this world.
thanks for liking his shock ... lol

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Posted: 13 September 2011 at 2:07pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by --jiya--

Big smile..<<that means resLOL.. for eternityROFLOuch

Jiya ... ur smiling face is enough for me ... i knw how busy u r. 
n this smily said, u like this upddate.
thanks dear.

all the best for ur exam. Thumbs Up
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Posted: 13 September 2011 at 2:13pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Faria-

Originally posted by SujaLuvsMayur

Originally posted by -Faria-

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hmmm so neel was a thief- thanx GOD shaadi se phele he has shown his true color. agar shaadi ki baad aisa kuch karti tou kya hota...

mayank warned them but thet didnt believe him- ab bhugto- poor nups i felt sad or her...
but i was lil bit sad- bcoz nups was ready to marry neel- agar iasa kuch na hota tou wo saach much shaadi kar leti. i thot she will do something to stop dis marriage.. lekin chalo- ye bhi accha he hua...


awww nups was dreaming abt mayank in her unconscious stage...
ahhh i hope ki maynk waha saach main hota...
btw where is mayank??wo chala gaya?? nups ko is halat main chodke.
i know nobody believed in his word- but at least he should try to save her in other way na- agar nups ki kuch ho jati tou.. i dint expect it frm him..:(

suja dis update wast too small
plz try to update next part soon
take care





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Fari, nupur to shadi karne k liye razi thi...to phir wo kyun rokti ye shadi????
n why every one expect from mayank to save her ... when all of them dint bother to believe him.
i think it was good that mayank left without telling to someone.


Hello = mayank loes her na. so why did he bother abt others. he lovesher and any how he should save nups frm evil intention of nills.
nehi usne chala gaya- kyun???
so his ego was bigger than his love- right????

first of all he has no ego yaar ...agar hota to usse aise jana nhi parta.
next...yes, maynank lost her ... bt still he loved her...n thats y he came back n tell all things abt neel.
bt it was his family n nupur's father who dint bother to listend him.
it was not exactly his fault.
bt yes...he has only one fault that he thot, he came between neel n nupur ... n thot, neel really love nupur and her love might be changed him.
thats all his fault.



Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 14 September 2011 at 10:32am
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here is the next update...hope u like itSmile


waiting for ur commentSmile

i know, its another sad updateOuch ... n u ll lil surprised to see this update.

from this update ... this story take a leap of 5 year.

i hope, its fine for u.

plz give ur true opinion ... n ur valuable feed back.


 
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