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Posted: 13 September 2011 at 1:16pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by SujaLuvsMayur

Originally posted by -Faria-

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hmmm so neel was a thief- thanx GOD shaadi se phele he has shown his true color. agar shaadi ki baad aisa kuch karti tou kya hota...

mayank warned them but thet didnt believe him- ab bhugto- poor nups i felt sad or her...
but i was lil bit sad- bcoz nups was ready to marry neel- agar iasa kuch na hota tou wo saach much shaadi kar leti. i thot she will do something to stop dis marriage.. lekin chalo- ye bhi accha he hua...


awww nups was dreaming abt mayank in her unconscious stage...
ahhh i hope ki maynk waha saach main hota...
btw where is mayank??wo chala gaya?? nups ko is halat main chodke.
i know nobody believed in his word- but at least he should try to save her in other way na- agar nups ki kuch ho jati tou.. i dint expect it frm him..:(

suja dis update wast too small
plz try to update next part soon
take care





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Fari, nupur to shadi karne k liye razi thi...to phir wo kyun rokti ye shadi????
n why every one expect from mayank to save her ... when all of them dint bother to believe him.
i think it was good that mayank left without telling to someone.


Hello = mayank loes her na. so why did he bother abt others. he lovesher and any how he should save nups frm evil intention of nills.
nehi usne chala gaya- kyun???
so his ego was bigger than his love- right????

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Posted: 13 September 2011 at 1:22pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by valliyah

hmmm so no shaadi but ek baat bata suja jab shaadi karwana hi nahi  tha to itna lambaaa preparation kyun aur itna tension kyun Angry...okk okk maloom thaa shaadi nahi hona hai yeh to aise hi try mar rahe hai jab tum tension dene ka mauka nahi chorti to hum ghussa dekhana kyun chorde LOL...!

coming to ur shocking update...all deserve this infact they deserve much more...cruel ppl just can't think beyond their selfishness...n yes somewhat nupur deserve this too maybe i sound rude for she is shattered BUT what she did with mayank was extreme...ok she had to obey her father but that just can't be excuse to act soo harsh...she actually acted heartless how could she only think of her family when she actually knew  she was the only one in his life as whole...not to forget that slap n woh kya kaha tha uske khilaaf complaint karegi right to ab kyun mayu mayu...ab neel neel ya phir pyaare baba baba kare naStern Smile...to be honest i don't  exactly feel pain but pity her...u know what i hate ppl who back out after giving high hopes n these big promises...here nupur did the same wanted to be this GREAT as in sacrificing her love but who gave her right to humiliate ones pure love...maybe u give loads of reason for her behaviour that she did for his betterment ...she did for him to know his worth ...she did for this she did for that blah blah blah...whatever the reason maybe this was NOT justified...!

im more than happy mayu left...they all took him for granted...he suffered hell...now don't let them get him soo easily...make them realize his worth...n let him know his worth too...its high time now to let them know he is not a slice of cheesy cake to get away with all the time....please.....!

P.S...look hum please bhi bole ab agar iske baad bhi if u do injustice to him than humko sirf itna karna hai ke just 15 mins of drive n ur soo Dead...n i mean it suja Evil Smile...so better be a good girlStern Smile...!




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valli, *hugs* Hug 
i totally agree with u dear ...  u penned down my thots. ... love u dear Hug
m nt giving any excuse abt nupur's rude behavior ...  she sacrificing her love ... no one give her any permission to hurt someones emotion who loves u dearly.
it was wrong ... n i agree with u.
n i too thot, nupur deserve this too.
abt mayank, m so scared to show u mayank ... i dnt want to revel right now ... just wait for sometime.


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Posted: 13 September 2011 at 1:27pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by kirti123

hope nupur is fine 
mayu went away 
nice twist 
hope now all will understand that mayank was right 
thanks for the pm
continue soonSmile

Originally posted by chandu-mayu

beautiful update. but mayur ko separate kar diya. plz mayur ko mila do
 



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Posted: 13 September 2011 at 1:31pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by 18anila1

goddd i was waiting for ur update...
plzzz i dont want any more rona dhona...
waise i want to kill dat idiotic ppl...
ab  woh chup kyun hain han!!!!!!!!!!!
idiots...
n han thanks to neel usne usse mara to nehi...
areyyy Mayank chala gaya bt whyyy
uff ab aur kitna wait karna parega...
to see MayUr re-union...
waiting for d next update...
loved it lodsss



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anila, dnt feel bad ... mayur jaldi hi milenge.
aur ek ajeeb situation me ... actually situation ll not ajeeb ... bt they ll feel like that.
just wait for sometime.
u ll found ur answers soon.

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Posted: 13 September 2011 at 1:34pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ronojoy_ria

hi
so after a very long time we got a nice up
ok now coming to the up
so as mayank said neel turned out to be a cheater he goes to nupur's room to gift her a necklace but his real intention was to steal her jewellery
he made her unconsious and stoled all her jewellery
chitra tried to caught him but he is made her also wounded and excaped from there
poor chitra and nupur they are injurned bcoz of this neel
but i am feeling angry with nupur 's dad bcoz of whom all this had happened
anyways now nupur is safe
but she is missing mayank very much
plz bring him quick as in this state she needs her
plz cont soon and pm me


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ria, i too hate nupur's dad ... coz he was the one n only culprit.
mayank ll come back soon...so dnt worry.


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Posted: 13 September 2011 at 1:39pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by drmaha

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whn i saw ur update i was again came to shock  ans was mentally prepared for the sadest update ever... but thank god suja this update releaved ...
neel was a theif gosh...Shocked if he was interested in money thn he should ask for it rather thn he throatly behaved ...and leave her behind in intense state...
 
but where is mayank...he shuld be thereCry how mch she needs him...
but sach mai suja it was really nice update...Smile Hug  Hug
 
loved it...
i knoe whn mayank came to know abt all this he came bck atonce to nupur... Big smile
poor nupur... how mch she loves him even in her unconscious state was calling him... Smile
 
pls cont soonn...Wink



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Maha, i dint think k my update hunt u ... lol ... ab FOBB nightmare ban chuki hai ...lol
u r right, mayank should be there with nupur...as she need him most.
bt where was she, when mayank needed her most ... he was too broken after nupur had leaving him without any clue ... she just kept insulted him.
offcourse mayank ll come bakc.
so just wait for sometimes.

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Posted: 13 September 2011 at 1:41pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by DhanakZ

Thank God at least Nupur is save
but Why mayank left her alone na
Plz Mayau come back She need U badly 
Thanks foR pm 
or agli update ma Mayur ko nahi milaya na to ma sach ma tumhara murder kar do gi


Originally posted by varsh-mayur

sujaaa...pls ab aur nahi ...Cry i cant see them in pain...hey i'll tell u if im in  mayank's family na i'll punch his parents and sis...no parents in the world should be like that...love is not conditioned...it should be unconditional...i hate themAngry
 



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Gul, dnt worry, mayank ll come back soon ... just wait for sometime.

Varsha, i too hate them. u r right love is not conditioned.

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Posted: 13 September 2011 at 1:44pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by arjun-forever

another sad part suja...no please ab aur bardaasht nahi hota...
jaldi se thik karo...
please
please...
 
 
willl also be waiting for GAME upadte...




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dnt worry Sanchari ... i hope, next update tumhe accha lage. 

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